Chickorita
Active Member
@harryheart: Thank you for your kind words and sorry that I've taken such a long time to get back to you. I'm really glad you liked the chapter and I'll go over it and try to find the mistakes I missed. Also some of the life explosions came as a surprise to me too and the last scene with Anna was originally going to happen later in the story so I'm really happy they didn't seem to sudden or forced.