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[Chaotic Pink]

*coughs to announce presence*​

Hi,
Just one crazed gal here, on a mission to create cute teddy and bunny sprites to take over the world. I said that, oops. My plan is uncovered...
I critique and moan at alot of you in your own sprite threads. Now heres mine, some are old, some new - I'll warn you of them when I come to them:​

Le random sprites:

(New, random rabbit)

(New. Random Bippa card )

(New-ish Me knows that the left ear (his right) isn't shaded; don't point it out)

Scratch:

(New, won a challenge on CS, its ugly and has bad shading. Meh :/)

(Old. Yes, don't say 'colours look weird' 'cause they're the shiny ones )


Fusions:

(Old-ish, sorry for the ugly white, the one of the left is with the ears moved.)

(New, Tiemen's sprite quite rightfully won against it Hail Tiemen!)

Random Edit:

(New. Doesn't really come under anything.)

Revamp:

(New, I don't like it.)


Thats all I can find in my photobucket account. I have more to upload.

~Pinkie
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[Tiemen.M]

(New, Tiemen's sprite quite rightfully won against it Hail Tiemen!)


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XD good sprites, the steelix needs to be reshaded not only recoulored. and the arca.. *gets shot by pinkie*

 

[ShadowP]

(I'm mostly looking at the new/new-ish sprites for this.)

You really need to work on your outlines. Did you use the Ellipse option for the rabbit/new-ish one? If you want to continue using that option, make sure to create a smooth outline.

Another thing is the pillow-shading; Pillow shading is entirely fine for beginners (not so sure if your just starting out or not). To further increase your skills in spriting though, you shouldn't resort to that type of method for shading. Pick a light source and shade accordingly.
EDIT - Actually, now that I look more closely, you sort of have a mixture of pillow-shading / something else. o_o;

In regards to the Flareon edit, you need to add black outlines to the scratched parts as it doesn't look nice with the rest of the sprite. The light source also seems to be rather odd for them too.

I'll be happy to help more if needed.~

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

septuple post... first in SPPF history.. maybe not, but meh.

Your Steelix wasn't so great, mainly because of the use of dithering in those areas.. it was oddly noticeable that you dithered, and I think the objective is to dither, without it being noticed... and if that's a recolor, then you need to reshade it... I'm not looking at the original sprite, so I wouldnt know if it was a recolor or not. Your Flareyena is good, but there isn't enough FLareon in it.. maybe you shouldve given it Flareon's tail.

On your Flareon edit, the tail's light source isnt the same as the base sprite.. and it's too fluffy, which isn't the texture of the base sprite.. so reshade the tail and darken the outline.

EDIT: *Looks at above post* Okay, someone posted before me, and said most of what I wanted to say about the FLareon, so yeah, whatever.

 

[TiagoGR]

They are great, but the last one needs different colors (unless that is a Shiny Steelix) and the shading is not quite good (thanks for helping me before).

 

[*Cherish*]

*coughs to announce presence*​

Hi,
Just one crazed gal here, on a mission to create cute teddy and bunny sprites to take over the world. I said that, oops. My plan is uncovered...
I critique and moan at alot of you in your own sprite threads. Now heres mine, some are old, some new - I'll warn you of them when I come to them:​

Le random sprites:

(New, random rabbit)

(New. Random Bippa card )

(New-ish Me knows that the left ear (his right) isn't shaded; don't point it out)

Scratch:

(New, won a challenge on CS, its ugly and has bad shading. Meh :/)

(Old. Yes, don't say 'colours look weird' 'cause they're the shiny ones )


Fusions:

(Old-ish, sorry for the ugly white, the one of the left is with the ears moved.)

(New, Tiemen's sprite quite rightfully won against it Hail Tiemen!)

Random Edit:

(New. Doesn't really come under anything.)

Revamp:

(New, I don't like it.)


Thats all I can find in my photobucket account. I have more to upload.

~Pinkie
​

Those are pretty good Pinkie! I love the scratches oh so much.. The little Flareon thing is kinda cute && wierd at the same time... Make More!

- Cherish w/ no CC to say

 

[Luna Megami]

Your sprites aren't bad, but they need some more work. However, I really adore your Dragonite/Umbreon mix. <3 Good job!

 

[Expert Socky]

^Agreed. But I think your Sunkern scratch is nicely done though.