Plusle+Minun
fanfiction is life
This is not about a songfic. Truthfully, I don't like them.
While I’m quite new to fanfiction, here are some things I can say:
Reviews.
-most of the time, reviews don’t even have proper grammar. I don’t know about all of you, but I can’t read bad grammar. (eg.” OMG! i luvd ths story. plz rite mor.” Or, “F1R3H34R7 g07 pw3nd b9 4 k1779p37.”)
-include what you liked, why, what you didn’t, why, what could be improved, etc.
-one-liners are verry bad. They usually don’t give much info and are not helpful at all.
I know I don’t always do this, but it really helps the author.
Writing.
-be open minded. Try new foods, go new places, try new etc. Sometimes an idea just strikes you, like my story Sky Fly.
-be original. How many times have you read the cliqued event-confess-kiss?
-show not tell. If you say, “He was surprised”, revise it. How about, “His jaw hit the ground and his eyes bulged put of his sockets.” That gives a better description than plain old, plain old.
-re-read, re-write. Chances are you’re writing will improve when you read aloud, you can point out any repeated words and delete them as well as make your writing flow better. When you rewrite, the story's wording changes ever so slightly, and makes it better. When I type my story on the computer, I change it a bit.
That’s what I say could be improved. Oh, yeah. Isn’t it annoying when people have read your fic like, 500 times but don’t have anything to say? If you like the story, take the TIME to review. TAKE TIME. Don’t just say “Awesome fic I loved it.”.
While I’m quite new to fanfiction, here are some things I can say:
Reviews.
-most of the time, reviews don’t even have proper grammar. I don’t know about all of you, but I can’t read bad grammar. (eg.” OMG! i luvd ths story. plz rite mor.” Or, “F1R3H34R7 g07 pw3nd b9 4 k1779p37.”)
-include what you liked, why, what you didn’t, why, what could be improved, etc.
-one-liners are verry bad. They usually don’t give much info and are not helpful at all.
I know I don’t always do this, but it really helps the author.
Writing.
-be open minded. Try new foods, go new places, try new etc. Sometimes an idea just strikes you, like my story Sky Fly.
-be original. How many times have you read the cliqued event-confess-kiss?
-show not tell. If you say, “He was surprised”, revise it. How about, “His jaw hit the ground and his eyes bulged put of his sockets.” That gives a better description than plain old, plain old.
-re-read, re-write. Chances are you’re writing will improve when you read aloud, you can point out any repeated words and delete them as well as make your writing flow better. When you rewrite, the story's wording changes ever so slightly, and makes it better. When I type my story on the computer, I change it a bit.
That’s what I say could be improved. Oh, yeah. Isn’t it annoying when people have read your fic like, 500 times but don’t have anything to say? If you like the story, take the TIME to review. TAKE TIME. Don’t just say “Awesome fic I loved it.”.