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I got this idea about writing a fic about a school girl. My prologue is gonna be a little short, but I'll try to fix that in Chapter One.
Prologue- Safari Zone
Rondi frowned. Today, the Rustboro City School was having a Pokémon type match up quiz, but she hadn’t prepared for it. She was too busy playing Pikmin on her GameCube. When she carried her light backpack on the smooth road to school, Rondi felt like she was hauling up a bag full of Binders and Laptops on a sharp little field. She sat on a bench near the school and sighed.
Rondi wore a red shirt with a pink star on it, a pair of blue pants, and grey shoes with a yellow star in the bottom left corner. She had blonde, yellow hair and she was missing her two front teeth. Everyday she was early to school because she lived right across the street. She waited until the bell rung and got inside.
She sat in the last seat in the first row and sat her pack on the floor. She waited for her teacher, Mrs. Jewels, to come into the classroom. When she did, Rondi could already imagine her passing out papers with questions on them. Everyone would be ready but her, and she would sit there for hours.
“Class,” she announced, “the type-match up test is off.”
Everybody practically fell out of their seat but Rondi, who was smiling. “Really?” She asked, grinning. Her teacher never called off tests, but she thought it was her lucky day.
Not for long.
“Yes,” Mrs. Jewels replied, “Instead, we’re going on a field trip.”
Everybody got straight up in the chair and got crazy. Rondi fell out of her seat.
Field trip? She thought. She was unhappy again. Please, we’re probably going to go shopping in the Lilycove Shopping department… But Mrs. Jewels said that they were going to the Safari Zone.
Mac, who sat in a seat in the middle row, asked, “What’s a Safari Zone?”
“A Safari Zone is a wonderful place where you can catch rare Pokémon. The Pokémon go quickly, so you have to stay still. They're quite afraid of humans crossing their environment.”
And so, the kids boarded the school bus and they set off for the Safari Zone. They passed many beautiful cities, and when they got to Fortree City, she knew the trip had ended. The bus stopped somewhere in Lilycove City and they all walked out to the Safari Zone. It was a colorful building with a little Pokémon catching park in the back of it.
Mrs. Jewels paid for the tickets, which cost only a little bit each, and they went into the Safari Zone. But before the teacher would let them go messing up the site, she had to explain a few rules. Everybody hated it when the teacher was telling the rules, though, and barely ever listened.
The children moaned as they sat down. Still, they wanted to pay a little attention to the instructions.
“Okay, children,” she said happily, “here’s a few rules I need you to follow. First off, you must be careful and don’t damage the obstacles or Pokémon within the course. Second, you must be sure to catch at least one Pokémon to take home with you. You will get thirty balls to catch Pokémon with, and you can go to any area in here.
Last, you need to come back when we call you. And, you mustn’t pick up any items you find. Understood?”
“Yes, Ma’am.” The children recited together.
“Okay then,” Mrs. Jewels, “Have fun!”
She handed out the Pokéballs, which were none as Safari balls, and they ran off one by one.
Rondi went with her best friend Allison. She wore all green clothes, but orange shoes. They decided to go in an area nobody would find.
Suddenly, Rondi found something. It was a paper on a tree. “Hey, what’s this?” She asked, examining it.
Allison ran up to it and said, “It’s a map.”
It showed all of the Safari Zone. “Rondi pointed to it and said, “We’re in the Grass area. Up ahead is the forest area. Do you think we should go there?”
Allison smiled and said, “Yeah, let’s got there.” And so, they walked up to the forest zone, which was covered with a bunch of think trees.
“Wow…” said Rondi, “It’s beautiful… I don't think I could take a creature from this precious sight.”
But something would have changed her mind.
And suddenly, something happened. A strange figure shot out of a huge tree, and whacked the two unconscious.
I got this idea about writing a fic about a school girl. My prologue is gonna be a little short, but I'll try to fix that in Chapter One.
Prologue- Safari Zone
Rondi frowned. Today, the Rustboro City School was having a Pokémon type match up quiz, but she hadn’t prepared for it. She was too busy playing Pikmin on her GameCube. When she carried her light backpack on the smooth road to school, Rondi felt like she was hauling up a bag full of Binders and Laptops on a sharp little field. She sat on a bench near the school and sighed.
Rondi wore a red shirt with a pink star on it, a pair of blue pants, and grey shoes with a yellow star in the bottom left corner. She had blonde, yellow hair and she was missing her two front teeth. Everyday she was early to school because she lived right across the street. She waited until the bell rung and got inside.
She sat in the last seat in the first row and sat her pack on the floor. She waited for her teacher, Mrs. Jewels, to come into the classroom. When she did, Rondi could already imagine her passing out papers with questions on them. Everyone would be ready but her, and she would sit there for hours.
“Class,” she announced, “the type-match up test is off.”
Everybody practically fell out of their seat but Rondi, who was smiling. “Really?” She asked, grinning. Her teacher never called off tests, but she thought it was her lucky day.
Not for long.
“Yes,” Mrs. Jewels replied, “Instead, we’re going on a field trip.”
Everybody got straight up in the chair and got crazy. Rondi fell out of her seat.
Field trip? She thought. She was unhappy again. Please, we’re probably going to go shopping in the Lilycove Shopping department… But Mrs. Jewels said that they were going to the Safari Zone.
Mac, who sat in a seat in the middle row, asked, “What’s a Safari Zone?”
“A Safari Zone is a wonderful place where you can catch rare Pokémon. The Pokémon go quickly, so you have to stay still. They're quite afraid of humans crossing their environment.”
And so, the kids boarded the school bus and they set off for the Safari Zone. They passed many beautiful cities, and when they got to Fortree City, she knew the trip had ended. The bus stopped somewhere in Lilycove City and they all walked out to the Safari Zone. It was a colorful building with a little Pokémon catching park in the back of it.
Mrs. Jewels paid for the tickets, which cost only a little bit each, and they went into the Safari Zone. But before the teacher would let them go messing up the site, she had to explain a few rules. Everybody hated it when the teacher was telling the rules, though, and barely ever listened.
The children moaned as they sat down. Still, they wanted to pay a little attention to the instructions.
“Okay, children,” she said happily, “here’s a few rules I need you to follow. First off, you must be careful and don’t damage the obstacles or Pokémon within the course. Second, you must be sure to catch at least one Pokémon to take home with you. You will get thirty balls to catch Pokémon with, and you can go to any area in here.
Last, you need to come back when we call you. And, you mustn’t pick up any items you find. Understood?”
“Yes, Ma’am.” The children recited together.
“Okay then,” Mrs. Jewels, “Have fun!”
She handed out the Pokéballs, which were none as Safari balls, and they ran off one by one.
Rondi went with her best friend Allison. She wore all green clothes, but orange shoes. They decided to go in an area nobody would find.
Suddenly, Rondi found something. It was a paper on a tree. “Hey, what’s this?” She asked, examining it.
Allison ran up to it and said, “It’s a map.”
It showed all of the Safari Zone. “Rondi pointed to it and said, “We’re in the Grass area. Up ahead is the forest area. Do you think we should go there?”
Allison smiled and said, “Yeah, let’s got there.” And so, they walked up to the forest zone, which was covered with a bunch of think trees.
“Wow…” said Rondi, “It’s beautiful… I don't think I could take a creature from this precious sight.”
But something would have changed her mind.
And suddenly, something happened. A strange figure shot out of a huge tree, and whacked the two unconscious.
The most silly, unoriginal teacher name I've ever heard! Mrs. Silver-good name. Mrs. Sapphire-fine name. Mrs. Jewels-a little too obvious. try to be more original with last name, dear.