Signs - Poem

[Flaming Lip]

Zomg! Optimisimfi3d! <3 Fwee! Enjoy!

Signs

Keeping in tune with the passage of time

Oblivious to the cold clear signs

In the end perhaps nothing is lost

But, I wonder, at what cost?


And I am alone… Staring up at the sky

Watching all those clouds fly by

And I think of home… Staring back the winding road

I see the better days were little more than a lie


I am little more, than one in a million

And I’m so alone; did anyone ever stand a chance?

I’m searching and searching and what have I found?

Just another step in this dance


Why do we give up? Why do we try?

Why is there no reason up in the sky?

Why does the sun always have to die?

Is it so that it may once again rise?

Because hope is something we can’t be without

But reason is often another word for doubt

And we’ll keep dreaming to the end of time

Waiting for yet another sign.​

 

[HB5squared]

That could've gone better...

Great poem but what pokemon are you trying to portray, if any?

This is a pokemon fan fiction and you've created a poem in whic is seemingless without any pokemon.

You could turn around and say it does but then again you could turn around and say it doesn't...

You could post this on a website for sailor moon and it still wouldn't fit in because you're not really trying to incoorperate the main idea of this site...pokemon.

GREAT POEM, by the wa, it's just not a fit...

Overall... (I would say excellent but...) average

 

[Flaming Lip]

XD I'm always vauge with my poems, sorry. I'm talking about how Pokemon Trainers are pretty much betting on a hope that they, of all people can become famous, can acheive the un-acheviable.

I am little more, than one in a million

And I’m so alone; did anyone ever stand a chance?

Thats as obvious as I got. Becoming a trainer, as I try to potray is a thing of hope, and almost, insanity. How can one person out of millions ever help to acheive that?

Thanks for the review! *flan*

 

[Kutie Pie]

I like this one... (I thought this was Ash at first. Now it's every single Trainer.) Yeah, I think about this all the time. (Oh my gosh, I'm becoming a philosopher.)

;025; - Kind of like Mewtwo in the original right?

How do you know? We never seen it and never will!

;025; - Fine. Sequel.

Fine. Forget it. Besides, Cheeky, this is about Trainers, not Mewtwo. Now get! *boots*

Sorry about that! Anyway... Yep. That's how I think. I think about that all the time... Though I'm always happy-go-lucky, I think about the wonders of life. And more.

Keep it up Byzantium! *hands ice cream cake and hugs*

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*Kutie Pie* Please be kind to midgets! (NOOOO! NO HEARTS!!!)

 

[Flaming Lip]

=D Thank you kindly *eats ice cream cake*

'Ere, 'ave 'ome flan *FLANDEIED!*

XD

I was in a happy mood, and I was listening to the Flaming Lips, how could I not be optamistic?

Thanks for reviewing!