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Sil the Pokéman

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Octillery

You're cool.
Your house is boring, and so is the comic. Please make a full episode before posting.

And if it's just another journey comic, then make it different than the rest :0
 
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Matt Silver

Rest My Chemistry
Have to agree with Octillery.
The sprite is badly recoloured and is RSE style. Avoid mixing FRLG with RSE style sprites (Your house and grass are FRLG). It is kinda boring as a start and well, the best thing about it is the text font.
I think you should try again, but this is only the intro, so I cant tell how it will turn out.
 
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Kinginsoar

Advanced Spriter
You guys, take it easy. It's my first comic, and I'm only 10! I'm lucky it's this good!

Ya, bet the next one will build it too. Sil's go'in to the lab, and maybe some funny stuff will happen...^^
 
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Matt Silver

Rest My Chemistry
Hazy Leaf said:
You guys, take it easy. It's my first comic, and I'm only 10! I'm lucky it's this good!

Ya, bet the next one will build it too. Sil's go'in to the lab, and maybe some funny stuff will happen...^^
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I'm sick of people usng the age or its my first comic excuse.
Okay good to see you're trying.
EDIT: Are any of the characters in this comic based off those trainer sprites in your sig, cause I can help ya in that department.
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
Well the sprte is reoloured badly and the first comic seems basic and annoying:
Hello there i'm Sil...... Isn't my home boring....... I'm going on a journey....... follow me. Ya need to add more speech that all could've been said in 1-2 pannels
 
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zuloon

Bboy Zuloon
Wtf does the house being boring have to do with anything?
 
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Pokefan26

Woot! SSB!
Hazy Leaf said:
You guys, take it easy. It's my first comic, and I'm only 10! I'm lucky it's this good!

Ya, bet the next one will build it too. Sil's go'in to the lab, and maybe some funny stuff will happen...^^
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Age and experience doesn't matter, what a lame excuse.

And, you have to have a few comics done other than the Intro. It has no humor. The sprite is badly recolored.

Let's just see what happens...
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
munchlaxboy said:
Wah Wah Wahhhh! Horrible and boring. Maybe the worst I've seen! But the sprite is pretty good.
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Now that was uncalled for. Obviously you've not seen many comics. Other then the plot, and the sprites, this comic isn't bad.

But seriously, don't overdo the 4th wall thing and the cliché journey thing.
 
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Brandon-kun

lalalalalalalalalala
Sorry I came here so late! xD

But, Connor you need to add more detail and stuff....I am going to have to agree with Octillery...he does have a point....the second one isn;t any better....come on Connor! I know you can do better!

Your Pal,

Kyuubi
 
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