Zapdos: This looks like it would make a good TCG picture. The sparks add a very nice touch. I like your style for drawing clouds in the background.
Hao's Oversoul: (Meep, Hao! ~<3) Very nicely detailed, and proportions are well done to make it seem larger and more impressive. The shadows create a good sense of depth. (You should draw Hao himself... *is recently obsessed with him*
Sheena: Pretty, I like her fluffy hair. Her eyes are very nice as well. Though a rough sketch, your skill is still quite obvious. *envies your ability to draw hands*
Your Character: I remember this girl. I absolutely adore the style you chose to draw her in. Her eyes are beautiful. The lineart is smooth and clean, and the drawing itself is well detailed. Interesting way you drew the folds. Good use of perspective, as usual, I like the view from below. However, her right hand puzzles me. By the way you drew the end of the sleeve, it looks as if you forgot to draw the hand coming through the opening, and added it afterwards behind the sleeve. Overall though, a very pretty drawing. You should color this one.
Hao's Oversoul (Colored): Not bad, but not the most impressive work I've seen from you. It looks a tad rushed. The picture seems choppy; I honestly think you should have defined the outline a bit better before coloring. The top half looks fine against a dark background, but its hands and legs are kind of "ew". They don't merge with the background at all. The fire effect isn't the best either. Overall, the picture still looks very flat. The colors don't enhance the feeling of depth at all. The play of shadows and light works very well at the top, but again, moving down, it seems as if you got lazy with it. On a final note, it's more of my personal opinion, but the figure might look more menacing if you really brightened the eyes so they shone like fire in the dark.
Heh. I haven't reviewed any of your work in a while. 8) I was glad to see your drawings again. You're still as good as I remembered. ^~