acetrainerbob
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When Pokemon talk or think, their dialouge looks like this: <...>
When humans talk or think, their dialouge looks lik this: "..."
BAM! "Work harder!" David yelled. It was midnight at the Pinwheel Forest. The abusive trainer David had almost nothing against Snivy besides that he wasn't perfect. But yet he continued to physically and verbally abuse Snivy. They were in the clearing where Virizion used to live and David just punched Snivy in the face.
"Snii..." Snivy whined.
"Shut up!" David yelled. "Now use Leaf Tornado! Make sure it's aimed at that tree!" David commanded as he pointed at a tree that had an X engraved on it.
"Snii..." Snivy whimpered. SOK! David punched Snivy again. "I said use Leaf Tornado!" David furiously commanded. Snivy didn't respond. SOK! David kicked Snivy in the stomach. Snivy's eyes snapped wide open as he was sent flying.
Snivy staggered up after he crashed to the ground. <I've got no other choice> Snivy thought. "Sniii..." Snivy twirled into the air. His tail glowed neon green and millions of leaves circled around his tail, creating a massive vortex. "VY!" Snivy released the tornado, which destroyed everything in it's path. Trees were uprooted and the soil from the dense, green forest's ground flew into the air, blinding Snivy.
The tornado engulfed David, tossing and turning him around. "AAAGGGHH!!" David screamed in pain and agony. The tornado beat him untill he was thrown to the ground. The tornado disappeared, leaving sparkles and leaves in the air.
David stood up and stormed towards Snivy. "You little peice of CRAP!" David screamed. "Don't you DARE aim attacks at me. It was super weak and it was horribly off-aim!"
"Snii..." Snivy whimpered as he backed up. He stumbled against a tree and his butt fell to the ground. SLAP! David slapped Snivy across the face. Snivy turned his head back towards David. Tears leaked off Snivy's face.
"This oughtta do. You won't ever defy me again!" David said as he grabbed Snivy's tail.
"Sni! Sni!" Snivy cried as he wiggled and squirmed. Using his free hand, David pulled a knife out of his left pocket. He turned it so that the side was facing Snivy and moved it slowly towards his tail. Snivy lifted his head, a beam of light gradually growing inside his open mouth. "Sniii... VY!" Snivy jerked his head back down so he was looking David in the eye. David's malicious, cold, cruel, green eyes. A SolarBeam shot out of Snivy's mouth.
It hit David in the gut, but it didn't go through him. Blood dripped from the corner of David's mouth as the thick beam of light exploded on impact. David flew back and hit the tree marked with the X. The knife flew out of his hand, but Snivy dodged the attack.
<If I'm going to run away, I can use the explosion as cover and dash as fast as I can! It's now or never!> Snivy thought. Snivy moved his legs nimbly and sprinted as fast as he could. Out of the forest. Out of the city. Tears flew past Snivy as he thought of the lonely and rough life that awaited him. Tears clouded his vision as he ran farther and farther. Farther and farther from his old life. He was getting closer and closer to a new city; a new life.
It was close to sunrise that Snivy found himself all the way from Pinwheel forest to a bench in Castellia City. <I guess I should sleep here and get a little rest, even if it's only for a few hours. I'll have to travel more tommorow. Maybe I can sneak some food out of the Poke Center.> Snivy reasoned with himself. Snivy climbed on the bench and closed his eyes, planning about what he'd do tommorow. But sleep did not befall Snivy, and before he knew it, it was morning. Not a normal morning, but a solo, lonley morning. A morning that Snivy would get his revenge on humans...
END OF CHAPTER 1!!!!!!!
When humans talk or think, their dialouge looks lik this: "..."
BAM! "Work harder!" David yelled. It was midnight at the Pinwheel Forest. The abusive trainer David had almost nothing against Snivy besides that he wasn't perfect. But yet he continued to physically and verbally abuse Snivy. They were in the clearing where Virizion used to live and David just punched Snivy in the face.
"Snii..." Snivy whined.
"Shut up!" David yelled. "Now use Leaf Tornado! Make sure it's aimed at that tree!" David commanded as he pointed at a tree that had an X engraved on it.
"Snii..." Snivy whimpered. SOK! David punched Snivy again. "I said use Leaf Tornado!" David furiously commanded. Snivy didn't respond. SOK! David kicked Snivy in the stomach. Snivy's eyes snapped wide open as he was sent flying.
Snivy staggered up after he crashed to the ground. <I've got no other choice> Snivy thought. "Sniii..." Snivy twirled into the air. His tail glowed neon green and millions of leaves circled around his tail, creating a massive vortex. "VY!" Snivy released the tornado, which destroyed everything in it's path. Trees were uprooted and the soil from the dense, green forest's ground flew into the air, blinding Snivy.
The tornado engulfed David, tossing and turning him around. "AAAGGGHH!!" David screamed in pain and agony. The tornado beat him untill he was thrown to the ground. The tornado disappeared, leaving sparkles and leaves in the air.
David stood up and stormed towards Snivy. "You little peice of CRAP!" David screamed. "Don't you DARE aim attacks at me. It was super weak and it was horribly off-aim!"
"Snii..." Snivy whimpered as he backed up. He stumbled against a tree and his butt fell to the ground. SLAP! David slapped Snivy across the face. Snivy turned his head back towards David. Tears leaked off Snivy's face.
"This oughtta do. You won't ever defy me again!" David said as he grabbed Snivy's tail.
"Sni! Sni!" Snivy cried as he wiggled and squirmed. Using his free hand, David pulled a knife out of his left pocket. He turned it so that the side was facing Snivy and moved it slowly towards his tail. Snivy lifted his head, a beam of light gradually growing inside his open mouth. "Sniii... VY!" Snivy jerked his head back down so he was looking David in the eye. David's malicious, cold, cruel, green eyes. A SolarBeam shot out of Snivy's mouth.
It hit David in the gut, but it didn't go through him. Blood dripped from the corner of David's mouth as the thick beam of light exploded on impact. David flew back and hit the tree marked with the X. The knife flew out of his hand, but Snivy dodged the attack.
<If I'm going to run away, I can use the explosion as cover and dash as fast as I can! It's now or never!> Snivy thought. Snivy moved his legs nimbly and sprinted as fast as he could. Out of the forest. Out of the city. Tears flew past Snivy as he thought of the lonely and rough life that awaited him. Tears clouded his vision as he ran farther and farther. Farther and farther from his old life. He was getting closer and closer to a new city; a new life.
It was close to sunrise that Snivy found himself all the way from Pinwheel forest to a bench in Castellia City. <I guess I should sleep here and get a little rest, even if it's only for a few hours. I'll have to travel more tommorow. Maybe I can sneak some food out of the Poke Center.> Snivy reasoned with himself. Snivy climbed on the bench and closed his eyes, planning about what he'd do tommorow. But sleep did not befall Snivy, and before he knew it, it was morning. Not a normal morning, but a solo, lonley morning. A morning that Snivy would get his revenge on humans...
END OF CHAPTER 1!!!!!!!
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