Some fun things.

[extremegunner]

Alright, this is just some fun stuff I made. It's a premature idea which I think I will never ever develop, at least for the time being.

EDIT: This story doesn't make much sense as this events are situated in the middle of the timeline of the main story plot... if there is even a main story plot to begin with...

It is cast by a couple of characters I do not own.

Do enjoy and give some comments.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3(Warning: Corny lines)

Last thing I need are fanboys/girls comments about the characters. It's a damn pokemon comic, relax people.

Monsters:

Tsurugi - Monster used by Cloud.

Masamune - Monster used by Sephiroth.

 

[☼Latias☼]

yo

can't wait for the next episode!

 

[Eevee_Master]

It's funny ^.^

 

[extremegunner]

It's even more saddening. I do not appreciate one liners, please.

 

[Eevee_Master]

what do you meen by one liners?? like our compliment has to be bigger than one line? ok then... uh... I real liked it! It made me laugh so hard I fell of my chair. You did an awsome job making them. I can't wait to see more ^.^

like that? (and that was a real compliment)

 

[Serebii93]

Hmm... too crowded...19.1/200. Doesn't really have a point to it[no beginning]...14.3/200. And swearing already in the second panel...13.2/200. Good attack effects...49.7/200. Longer than what most n00bs are willing to read[that's actually kinda a good thing]...24.6/200.
Overall: 120.9/200

Scoring Grades:
70 and below= F
71 to 80= D
81 to 90= C
91 to 100= S
101 to 110= B
111 to 120= A
121 to 130= Outstanding
131 to 140= Wow!
141 to 150= Lol
151 to 200= Master

Congrats! You scored a 120.9 on your comic! You get an A+! That's an above average.

 

[extremegunner]

I appreciate your 'professional' scoring and all, but there are things that I have to disagree with.

Too crowded? I just think that should be how a city's population suppose to be.

I mean seriously, wouldn't you say "What the hell...?" if you see a raving mad super nerd running across the street, as if Jason or Leatherface is chasing from behind? Is there some kind of unspoken rule that states that mild profanity kills off the comic's quality? I just think it's realism.

And what damn freaking hell is so funny about the comic? Sure, it has its funny moments, but falling off your chair laughing at the almost non-existence or overused humour in this comic? Umm... I seriously advise you to see a doctor or redefine your meaning of 'funny'.

And surely this comic doesn't deserve a one-star rating. But hey I don't mind, I just pity the comic inept who rated this. He/She probably can't make comic for nuts and felt that there is a need to strike down comics that are far better than his/hers. We're living in a sad sad world.

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

Very good. Very funny. Very... um.... good. I will wait with tension for the next episode of: "Funny things"!

 

[extremegunner]

I don't think 'fun' and 'funny' means the same thing. I still don't get the humour. Well, thanks anyway.

 

[extremegunner]

Sorry for the dp. Part 2 is up for anyone who cares. It's pretty much as pointless as the first one, but there is quite some effort into about doing it.

 

[Hazzer]

This is really good.
By the way.Why do you have to swear in your Comic.
Also its very long maybe make it shorter

 

[Eevee fan]

there good I would like to see more.

 

[Maneachiz]

Right, Im maybe the first Person to actually Post Proper Critisism.

New Pokemon, which are well sprited is always a Plus sign, they draw attention to the piece, and people will read on to see what powers the creature has, or its importance to the story. Some n00bs will get drawn in by the fact that its...'Ooh...Shiney'

Good Battle Effects. Sillouettes are correctly used, and the dust settling is a good use of resources. If you have Paintshop Pro, you can make better effects, but yours are used correctly.

Yes, Cities are Crowded with People. If you check out My Comic, Poke-mon (its somewhere here on Serebii, checkout the SC page) and also Pokemon Pebble Version Slate the Cities and Town Sizes. Your Judgement is fair enough, but maybe knock off a few people, as you may need the room for speech etc...

Make sure your Sprites Match. The Leather Charachter's sprite does not match the R/S/E style you are using. Try and get someone to make one for you. (PM me if help neede on the sprite).

Good Custom Overworld Sprites. The Charahcters are correctly shaded and are origional. The Pokemon sprites also are very well done.

Very Good choice of Story. Its a good thing that something different than 'I li3k wana bcum da best traner e4!' and Defenately is one to follow. Make sure you stick to the over all story, and don't drift from the plot.

Keep it up. Im watching this.

 

[Avegaille]

Too crowded? I just think that should be how a city's population suppose to be.

For a an Overworld Comic, yes, it's pretty crowded... X.x

Anyways, about your comic:

I don't get much of it... No, really... I mean, who are the main characters? It seems that the comics don't give out much background about them. And you used Fusioned Pokemon, eh?

Meh, anyways, for your spriting, it's really good, there's nothing much wrong with it though... meh... That's all for now...

 

[extremegunner]

Thanks for the comments and such. But whose the leather man?

OMFGBBQ!

3rd comic up! Well, I thought I'm just gonna let this comic just rot away, but sometimes i surprise even myself.