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Something (r/m/nc-17/ma)

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
SOMETHING
-=*=-

How was he gonna tell her that?

That was the question that spread through his mind. He had no idea of what to do in this situation, it wasn’t something he had been prepared for. Well, he hadn’t been prepared for anything, to say the truth, but still he had managed to improvise something whenever things went awry. Like now, only… he was stuck with the same question over and over.

The action was actually simple: grab the speaker, dial the number, and say the truth. But he just couldn’t do that! Not with this situation on his hands!

Sighing, he recalled the past events. How he had announced his decision to his best friend, and her subsequent leaving. The end of his short career. Estella’s reaction to the news.

Estella… at least something was still going right with his life. Despite the troublesome situation he had been thrown into, there was nothing that could shatter that shared feeling. True, there were so many complications, as his best friend had announced… but he loved her, dammit! And she loved him too! He was not going to let anyone stop that!

He sighed as he saw her, cleaning the bedroom they shared. Although they hadn’t consummated their union, as he wanted to be able to marry her before that happened, they were already preparing themselves for their future life. As he admired the way her white ‘dress’, as he called it, was close to her body, both hiding and revealing, he wondered how it would be afterwards.

Such a relationship… was it even possible? Could it bloom as much as most? After all, she was… no. He had stopped thinking of her like that. There was nothing wrong with her! She was perfect as she was, even if she hadn’t grown up like him!

Although it had been known that some people had done such a deed, or sin as they called it, as him, he had never found out anything more than the horrid breakup. No child was born from these relationships… although he suspected it to be due to protective measures, rather than incompatibility.

Sighing again, he stared at the machine in front of him. The mysterious device was an odd cellphone, indeed… but he wondered if, even now, after those incidents, it would still work. He had broken contact with everyone ever since she left, and personally deleted each and every one of the numbers.

Except for one.

This was the number which he struggled to call.

Staring at a nearby table, he saw the remains of the containers, as most people rarely called them. Pfeh. They weren’t resistant enough to handle a sledgehammer, did they? True, Estella and the others were far more dangerous now… and the hospitals would not accept them, maybe. He couldn’t turn to the alternative, however, could he? The mental damage was simply not worth it!

He thought back to that day. His friend had left him with barely enough money for a month, which didn’t last much of a week after he bought the sledgehammer and smashed the stupid containers. A job for someone his age, with his characteristics, had been hard to come by… and he was even afraid that he would have had to do the only thing he had really known to do… but that he had abandoned.

Most people didn’t really work anymore, other than in the industry, and as he knew, he couldn’t do that. Most low-level jobs had perfect workers: stronger, faster, and requiring no true pay. So he had had to do shameful things, just to be able to pay the rent. Odd jobs like going after a runaway, or working as a ‘photographer’, or even… he shivered as he remembered that. He was never going on an island holiday, that was for sure.

Shoving those daydreams away, he grumbled before he pressed the ‘1’. If he was fast enough, he would be able to finish this before she could react.

He could hear a few beeps, before he heard the sound of her voice. “Hello?” she asked. Man, he missed her.

“Mom?” he asked, before continuing. “I have something to tell you.”
 

Demy

Well-Known Member
NOt bad hmmm, will keep an eye on this one
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
Okay, first some comments.

The Great Butler: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! GUNSTAR FLARE! *shoots* [SPOIL]Just so you know, Anabel sucks and is fugly.[/SPOIL]
Demy: ...who are you?

That said, keep on reading, those who weren't freaked out.

SOMETHING
-=*=-

Fia Seliro was not a woman easy to surprise. She had seen the fate of her husband, Kai, several years ago, when he had chosen to travel far away, and told her not to wait for him. She knew all the things her son, Jamie, had done until that fateful day, three years ago, when he left in a journey with the neighbor’s daughter, Marina. And she was not fully surprised that her son had called her, after a long time without a call.

As she heard his faint voice, partially quiet, she felt a strange pang at her heart, mixed with sadness. It was as if his voice had announced that bad news were coming, even if it was almost normal.

“I have something to tell you.”…what could that be about, she wondered? And why now, of all times?

“Yes, Jamie?” she asked, awaiting his response. She heard a sigh, then a pause, before another sigh.

“Mom… I don’t know how you will handle this, but…” he had started, before a beep rang on his side. Fia felt nervous, as that was unusual. Just as she was about to reply, however, he continued. “…I’m not a trainer. I’ve been living for the last two years in Goldenrod, I have no plans of heading to the Indigo Plateau any soon, and…” he stopped, apparently grasping for words, which were found before she found her own voice. “…and I plan on marrying Luna Estella… which you may remember as that Ralts that was left on my care, now a Gardevoir.” Now that was enough of a shock. Fia felt her legs grow weaker, as questions raced through her mind. Her mouth was dry and her nerves were pained.

He went on, not expecting a response from her. “You may be wondering why I chose her, instead of a human girl like Marina. The fact is, I love Estella. I don’t care that she is not human. I don’t care that she may just like me as a trainer. All that matters is that I love her, and she loves me. I’m sorry for hiding this for so long, and for not being what you wanted.” The apology was sincere, and Fia just didn’t have the heart to argue right now. Maybe once she went to Goldenrod, but for now, she just listened.

“Marina has been traveling across the world by herself, I guess. We lost contact when I stopped being a trainer to settle down. I think she sent me a message or something recently, but I haven’t been able to find it. As for my Pokémon… they are fine. You don’t have to worry about me, I swear. Just… please don’t do anything rash…” he trailed off, his voice getting weaker and weaker. Fia felt tears come to her eyes, either from sadness or from anger at her son.

“Our marriage is supposed to be arranged in a few months… something private, just me, you, Estella, what we can find of her family, and whoever can fill in. I’m very sorry for anything that might have brought you sadness. It could not be helped.” Jamie had stopped talking, but he seemed to be debating with himself, from what she could listen. “I hope you live a happy life from now on. Goodbye, mom.” And with that, the phone died. The receiver on her hand slipped down and fell to the ground, as she sat on a couch, deep in reflection.

-*=*-​

Marina groaned as she woke up, in her room at the Lavaridge Resort. She still wasn’t used to Hoenn, even though she had moved several months ago. While she had mostly worked on minor field researches for Prof. Oak before, she had struck gold when she presented a few studies, one on Pokémon language being a factor on breeding, and another on the neural autopsies of Psychic and Fighting-types. The latter was possibly a stepping stone on the path leading to the understanding of cerebral functions, as it could explain the strange similarities between many members of those types, reportedly known as being mostly human-shaped.

However, for all the good it did, she was not having any ease sleeping. Even top-level League psychologists had found it nearly impossible to crack the hard shell that was her mind. Marina, however, had a pretty good suspicion of what had caused her to have such a horrible health.

‘Dammit, Jamie! Why did you have to be like that? Why couldn’t you just think of a higher picture?’ she cursed mentally, as she remembered the circumstances of their splitting. Although it was painful, the results had improved after the eighth shrink had asked her to think back to those bad memories.

-*=*-​

Marina glared at him, curious. What the hell was going through Jamie’s mind? She thought that he would have went on and down Mt. Mortar. However, he had stopped in his tracks, just as he had left the city.

As she approached him, Jamie sighed quietly. “You’re probably wondering why I’m here, right?” he asked, in that depressing tone of his. He only used that tone when he was feeling sad and started to complain about how people just didn’t care about him. Of course, he was wrong, but he HAD to be one of those people who don’t care any about training Pokémon, and that would rather live normal lives.

The boy was just a lucky idiot who managed to defeat eight Gym Leaders and survive even the Dragon Den, but who lacked any sort of talent for training other than really impossible strategies. While they worked, they tended to cost too much for him to be able to rely on them well. So, while she sorta understood his point of view, she felt he complained too much.

Still, she nodded. Jamie lowered one of his arms. “It’s because I’m tired of this farce. I’m not a trainer. You know this, and yet you, like everyone else, lets me be because of the fact that I happen to win once in a while.”

Marina groaned. So what if he had been defeated by Team Rocket several times? It happened to anyone! True, her victories had helped the public know her more, but he was too depressing to want to change!

However, she was unable to retort, as he continued. “So I’m quitting.”

She stared at him, surprised. He was quitting? Like that? But didn’t he have all eight badges? Hadn’t he told everyone that he’d meet them at the Indigo Plateau? Hadn’t he managed to do things other trainers hadn’t managed to do before? In half the time, even?

Finally, she couldn’t stop talking. She started asking him several questions nonstop. She didn’t wait for a response; she just went on and on. Jamie listened to her, but he did not reply. Instead, he seemed to be waiting for something.

Finally, once she seemed to be done with the questions, he lowered his other arm. Then he got up, quietly, and turned towards her. There didn’t seem to be anything wrong with him, other than a horrible sadness.

“I once wished the answers to these questions were helpful…” he told her, lowering his gaze. “But they only brought pain. I don’t want to be a pawn, yet I have to be one if everyone is to be happy. Depressing, no?”

Marina took a step back. It had become obvious that he had snapped. And while she wanted to stay with him and help, he had convinced her, a while earlier, that he did not want to be helped by anyone.

Anyone, but…

The look on her face must have told him everything, as he closed his eyes and nodded. She would have made a whole argument about it, but he was clearly not well. Had it been the Dragon’s Den, she wondered? After all, he had passed through the worst of his crisis just after leaving it.

His answer to her question was positive. “The Dragon Test… you have just no way of understanding it without going through it… and yet I refuse to let you go through. It is not worth it.”

That did not really answer her, however, but she was too angry to pursue the point. Rather, if he wanted to live as he wanted, she would let him, then! She could become a successful professor without his help!

As he turned back, entering the city, she went forward, tears falling from her eyes as she progressed.

-*=*-​

“Jamie… why the hell did I have to fall in love with you?” she asked nobody, furious. “Why did I pursue you, even after you showed several clues?” Her voice was growing louder after every question.

“Why the hell am I still in love with you…” she cried, before breaking into tears.
 
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The Great Butler

Hush, keep it down
Very, very good work. While I'm really not a fan of Human+Pokémon pairings, Gardevoir is one of very few that I consider human enough to work (and you wrote it well anyway)

[SPOIL]The Great Butler: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! GUNSTAR FLARE! *shoots* Just so you know, Anabel sucks and is fugly.
[/SPOIL]

BLASPHEMY AGAINST THE EMPIRE!!! (shoots Seijiro with force lightning)
 

icemew

Banned
Wow.

This is so realistic-seeming, even though it's about something unreal. Your characters seem like real people, and the dialogue's perfect, I can almost hear it. I'm really impressed.
 

xXFallenButterflyXx

cherry BLOSSOM.
Wow... this is very interesting. Keep up the good work!

~;059; Fallen
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
Shyste.

Aren't you supposed to be-OOF!

Um, people, unfortunately, chapter 3 will have to wait a tad.

He deleted the original-AUGH!

That said, it'll likely come out at some point this month.

Can we go now-KYAAAGH!
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
Now for updating...

The Great Butler: I'd say thank you, but... nah. Either way, at least you read it.

FORCE LIGHTNING! *Counters the Sith FL with a Gunstar FL.* Calling all units - the Sith are back!
icemew: Why unreal? It's just two people in love. Species shouldn't matter.
xXFallenXx: ...your name makes me weep...

Now for the next part...

SOMETHING
-=*=-

Jamie sighed, as he put down the PokéGear he had used to call his mother. It had been hard to tell her that… but he hoped that things would actually get better in the future. Maybe once he was married, she wouldn’t be too against it.

He looked towards his room. Estella was finishing the final touches on the room, and she would be coming soon to talk to him about that. Well, why should she have to come talk to him, he reasoned? And, with that line of thought, he got up and left the room, heading towards the room they shared. Not as a couple yet… but maybe soon…

When he walked inside, he quietly hugged his dearest fiancée, his head lying on her shoulder. She gasped mutely, but merely smiled when she saw it was him.

The look in her eyes said everything he needed to answer.

“Estella… it’s done. I called my mother, and now… all we need to do is set the date of the wedding. Then, maybe, we’ll be finally husband and wife…” he told her, smiling sadly, before turning her around, so that they’d be staring at each other, face-to-face.

She smiled back, although hers was a happy smile, before pulling him closer, her longer arms reaching far more than he could… but her thinner frame was a compensation for that, one could wonder. This mattered not for him, as he merely did the same, while pulling her head closer… and kissing her.

The kiss was awkward, and she initially did not respond… but eventually, she leaned forward, replying with her own intensity. They seemed to be one… and he wanted them to truly be one.

Slowly, he began to move her back, so that she’d be beginning to lie in the bed, feeling her back lightly, while she seemed to be focused only on the kiss. At least, until the membrane in her back touched the bed; at that moment, it seemed she had finally realized what he was doing.

However, she merely released him a bit, took a breath, and kissed him again. He replied with a kiss of his own, his hands slowly slipping down. Eventually, he reached their hips, and broke the kiss.

“Estella…” he began, licking his lips, breathing slowly, “…would you… mate with me?”

She stared at him, blushing very hard, nearly making him falter, before nodding slowly.

He unbuckled his pants, removed them and his underwear, and began to remove his shirt as well, while she took the discarded pieces of clothing and set them on the ground, folded.

Once he was finished with the shirt, he hugged her and kissed her again, his hands moving towards her hips, while hers were helping him get closer. Her legs were being spread, so that the ‘dress’ was not interfering in his approach.

A few seconds later, he began to move closer, slowly inserting himself in her.

It wasn’t much, due to her natural tightness, but it was enough for the two to realize what they had just done… and to encourage them. Estella released him, and just pulled his head closer, while he began to thrust, slowly and steadily.

In moments, she began to be easier for him to thrust inside, and she held him tight with her legs, while they kissed each other lovingly. The bond they had was being strengthened… and they were ignoring everything but each other, wrapped in their love.

Eventually, he pulled his head back, breaking their kiss, and moaned louder than before, his energies concentrating in a single point… a moan that was answered in kind, as she fought to control herself, in a losing battle.

They released at the same time, their souls finally being one, for that split second… and neither wanted to pull apart from the other. It was more than just instincts… it was pure passion, undiluted, that flowed through their veins and that kept them united. It was… the other. And that was that.

Exhausted, Jamie laid his head on Estella’s chest, as slumber came to take them both, unaware of the future that would come to them…
 
Hi there. I had read this before, and it's still as good as when I first read it.

What's more enticing is the atmosphere. This is something that I've never seen. A Trainer that quitted and engaged with a Pokémon of his. A rather unsettling scenery in that world, or so it seems. I like how you manage feelings and reactions. And your description is also very good. Still, in regards of the 3rd chapter, you manage to keep the intensity, and yet, it's well-written in a rather subtle way.

As always, I really can't find points to improve on. Maybe the chapters should be slightly longer, but that's not major. They get the point across and are relevant enough. Not much else.

I wanna see where this is going. I, for one, think that Pokémon-human relationships are awfully taboo, or even illegal in the Pokémon World. And while being a Trainer isn't a requirement, it seems that most people live close to Pokémon. But not in such way. Something is bound to happen... if they're discovered.

Until next time! :)
 

Zerodius

Eternally hating D/P
This deserves so much not to be ignored as it is currently.

The human x Gardevoir pairing is one of the most painfully overused human x Pokemon pairings... yet, you pull it off in a way that actually sound believable and emotionnal.

The characters seems to be rather deep and the story looks like it's going somewhere, which is a nice change from most fics of this type.

All in all, I say that this should definitely be continued and that this need some more reviews.

Have a nice day.
 

Xumahare

Well-Known Member
I really thought that this was quite a touching fic. It's really all in the atmosphere, and in the way you write, is really quite... unique, I must say. A lot of these types of fics are all alike, but yours, Seijiro, is a one-of-a-kind.

Okay, with all of my babbling through, I will get to the actual rating by my scale, which is very strict. I'd have to say, really, that this will be the highest score that I've given anyone:

9.5/10

An yes, it's a VERY strict rating scale. I also rate on other fics I've read, but this is the hightest score I've given anyone so far.

Seijiro, you have made me change my mind with this fic about the human/pokemon shipping genre. Thanks. Can't wait for the next chapter!
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
*taps foot*

Okay, who was the frell who gave us such a big star rating? Come on, come out... we want it diminished. To 1 star!
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
Seems like my old fans are gone and I only have three fans. Whatever. On with the videotape!

SOMETHING
-=*=-

Outside, on the ‘backyard’ (although Jamie would never believe it, since it was not his backyard), a different event was happening. Namely, the normally covered pool of the Goldenrod Gym was uncovered; a towel was lying on the side, and there were a few magazines on the table to the side of the pool.

The answer to any curious observer’s questions would come shortly after, wearing a small yellow bikini that did little to cover its user’s personal parts, wrapped in another towel, and holding sunglasses and other sunbathing accessories, a feature of the special design the backyard had (although whoever wanted to spy on said person would have more luck to see her in her common clothes than in the reclusive and pretty much ignored backyard.

Yes, Whitney, the Gym Leader of Goldenrod City was going to take her regular sunbath-and-swimming monthly break.

She gave a happy sigh, before unwrapping the towel and leaving it on a nearby chair, while the accessories were left in the table. Then, she stretched her limbs, moaning lightly, and walked towards the pool, before feeling the water with an outstretched leg. Shivering lightly, as it was cool, she headed towards the staircase, taking the handles and walking down it.

If there had been any observers, they might have been knocked out by now, given how the way she moved would bring attention to her most obvious assets. However, no observer was there, and in any case, she was unaware of this effect, even as she began to swim.

The cool water was doing wonders to her body, however, as she could feel more than just her hairs on her body becoming rigid (even if the water made them grow soft and loose once more). Every once in a while, she had to suppress a moan, while her own hormones seemed to be getting more edgy; even if the wind touching the water formed a very light wave, she felt as if she had just been touched everywhere.

By human hands.

She didn’t mean it to continue, she didn’t want to be so excited by the mere fact that she was covered in water, but she couldn’t help it. She had spent enough time in the farm to not know what was happening to her, especially since her Miltank was going through it too.

It was that time again. Every year, she would be spending a while feeling all warm and tingly, and every single experience would make her want to drop down right there and go for the closest available male (not that that would be difficult, considering just who she was – compared to her other friends, if she tried, it’d be one of her easiest tasks), but she felt she had good enough standards that she wouldn’t ever resort to it.

Still, if only she could relieve herself…

She looked to the side, to the wall. She should be getting off the pool soon, since the sun would be reaching the perfect point for sunbathing in a few minutes. She shouldn’t get too late for that…

However, when she climbed off the stairs, she stopped. Had she seen what she had seen?

She walked towards the window, curious. That window was the one to Jamie’s room, which was the only occupied room in the complex. Since it hadn’t been too expensive, it became his choice for living – and a lucky one, too, since it allowed her to keep checking on him.

It wasn’t that she had a crush on him, oh, no… she wasn’t very interested in him like that, and besides, he was probably taken anyway, if those conversations he had every day were of any indication. And anyway, she wasn’t so selfish that she was going to make a fellow Gym Leader unhappy by stealing the person she loves, was she?

Of course, the scene she saw was completely surprising, especially for her.

The fact that he was doing it with-

It was completely immoral!

He couldn’t… he couldn’t possibly be doing that! He couldn’t be kissing her, and hugging her, and putting his-his-his…

Oh, Celebi… her hand had fallen from its position, close to her mouth, and was rubbing close to her body, against her breasts… he was beginning to thrust into her… was it really that size?… she felt the lower part of her bikini slip off… a hand was rubbing, her nipples were ecstatic… she felt she was getting out of control, but… he was hugging her again, pushing harder… kisses were given to each other… her legs felt weak… she was almost moaning… they were going to… he had just-

She moaned, as she felt the warmth inside her grow beyond the point she could not hold it anymore. She slumped against the wall, hearing his last moans, as she watched the wet ground just below her.

Damn, she was going to have to bathe again.
 
I'll resume this review with one word... WHITNEY!!! <3333333

AHEM! I liked how descriptive you were. I also like your perception of her. As Whitney's lover, I can say it was certainly fitting, albeit a bit startling. I liked it, though. And it brought such nice mental images to me... :D

Lovly in every way. *Bows and workships* I'm such an obsessor. But yes. Loved it! I wanna see which other things you'll bring here. Hopefully more story-driven, though I'm not complaining. ;)

Until next chapter! :)
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
SOMETHING
-=*=-
The cold breeze flew against the railing, coming from the sea. It was a strong breeze, much unlike the ones from the previous days… Jasmine didn’t understand it. The newscasts had been unable to explain the climatic oddities the city had gone through, so far…

“It’s so different from usual…” she whispered, looking at a flying Wingull, that was headed towards the horizon. “It feels cold. I wonder if Winter is coming earlier than usual, this year… it’s still Fall, though.”

“Ampharos?” a voice asked from behind her, and as she turned around, she saw her Amphy look at her, worried. She smiled at him, trying to hide her worries.

“Ah, Amphy… it’s nothing. This weather is just feeling so different from usual… I’m worried about the city. What if a tidal wave or a hurricane strikes it out of a sudden? I really… I really don’t want anything like that to happen.”

“Ampharos…” the Pokémon replied, before giving out an obvious sigh. “Ampha, pharos ros ampha pha, rosampha amros ampharos!”

“Well, maybe I’m worried too much… but it might be better to worry when nothing is happening, rather than something happen and leave you worried,” she told him, before walking inside. “That sickness… it hasn’t come back, has it?”

“Ros!” the Ampharos proudly told her, patting his chest, and she smiled at him.

“That’s nice… getting that medicine in time was a real stroke of luck, I think. That boy really helped us…” she said, and Amphy raised an eyebrow, before coming closer to her.

“Ampha?”

“He… he hasn’t come back, has he?” she whispered, barely listening to him. “Even though… even though he had told me he would… he…”

“Ampha! Ampharos rospha pharos!” Amphy interrupted, obviously angry. “Ampha am ampharos, pha pha amros ros!”

“Amphy?” she said, stunned at his tone, and he went on, continuing to speak more and more. Even though she couldn’t understand what he was saying, the tone was familiar, and the meaning eventually came across: ‘Stop being so sad about it! What does it matter that he broke a promise? All it means is that he wasn’t worth your interest… so forget about it! It’s been over three years already!’

“Ampha! Pharos am… am am ampharos!” he finished, doing a cutting motion with his right paw. The young girl looked at him, before nodding.

“Alright… I guess you’re right, Amphy…” she said, before hugging him. “I just… really wanted to see him again…”

This act made the Pokémon blink and pause, his anger gone. “Ampha…” he whispered, starting to feel tears flow down her face, going against his fur.
 
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