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Song lyric writing help?

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Zapphire

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As some of you possibly know, I am a songwriter. I'm starting a band, and I need help with the lyrics for the first song. I can't provide music or anything, just lyrics.



If you see me on your way
Will you stop and say hello
Though I don't what I'll say
Cause I'll be feeling kind of low
But it will really make my day*
And then Ill feel*
So much better*
About everything*
And even if I don't say a word
I hope that I am still heard
Cause I
(Chorus)
Hope that my face says it all
I'll never say it out loud, but it's my fault
For every little thing that's going on
Maybe soon this will change
I heard it gets better with age
When will these feelings dissipate
My heart shattering today
But what can I say
I'm sorry, but I will take the fall
For what I did, and every single
Thing that I said
(Chrous End)
(Rap)
If you don't mind too much
Maybe
I could start to confide
But when the rain is gone
You notice
Water's falling down the side
Of my face
But it's too late
You'll never stop my fate
My minds covered covered in a drape
Of confusion and lies
But this whole time
My lies
Are ones that keep my soul dry
(Rap ends, Starts Singing)
Like a crime, my heart is committed
And I know that it's true
But still I wish for for the day
That I can muster up my courage for you


That's all I have. It's meant to be a somewhat slow Punk-Rockish song. Thanks in advance.
 

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