Soni Heroes 2

[Manaphy Mare]

Five years ago an evil robot named Metal Sonic had threatened to destroy the world with an armada of airships, each having the appearance of various sharks and rays. When all hope seemed lost four courageous teams rose up to defeat him. In response to the opposition of Team Rose (Amy Rose, Cream the Rabbit, and Big the Cat), Team Chaotix (Espio the Chameleon, Charmy the Bee, and Vector the Crocodile), Team Dark (Shadow the Hedgehog, Rouge the Bat, and E-123 Omega), and Team Sonic (Sonic the Hedgehog, Miles "Tails" Prower, and Knuckles the Echidna) he used the negative powers of the Chaos Emeralds, seven gems of immense power, to transform into Metal Madness then eventually into Metal Overload. This lead to the final battle between Metal Overload and Team Sonic (who had used the positive powers of the Chaos Emeralds to transform into Super Sonic, Super Tails, and Super Knuckles). Eventually Team Sonic emerged victorious and Metal Sonic went away.
It has been five years since the events of Sonic Heroes and Metal Sonic is back. This time he plans to capture the original teams and put them under his control. He already has Team Dark and Team Sonic (through trickery, deceit, and for E-123 reprogramming), and it is only a matter of time until he finds Team Rose and Team Chaotix.
Metal Sonic has also rebuilt his armada of airships. His rage at his defeat five years ago fuels his determination to destroy the world and build his robot empire. He will stop at nothing to achieve his goal.
Already thrown into the mix are some new teams who are destined to be the next Sonic Heroes.

Here are the basics:
1) At least one of the team members must be a pokemon (or at least a fan character).
2a) There MUST be a full team consisting of three members (Speed, Fly, and Power) no more no less.
2b) I will be flexible about the power and speed members, but the fly member must be a flying type or have the ability levitate. I will make an exception for Ninetails, Vulpix, Buneary, Loopuny, Celebi, and Manaphy (it could, theoretically, spin its antennae like helicopter blades).
3) You may use actual characters, but they cannot be from an existing team.
4) All forum rules apply.

Here is the sign up form:

Team name:

Speed member
Name:
Species/Pokemon:
Real or Fan character:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Age:

Fly member
Name:
Species/Pokemon:
Real or Fan character:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Age:

Power member
Name:
Species/Pokemon:
Real or Fan character:
Gender:
Personality:
Description:
Age:

Team blast
Name:
Description:

How the team met:

I still have to work on my team but below will be the people I have accepted. =)

 

[Psychic]

Manaphy Mare, we are sick and tired of this. You keep posting the same RPG and even though you've been told how to fix it, you don't. This isn't even of the LEGAL length, meaning automatic closure either way.

But the fact that you CONSTANTLY ignore everyone who tells you how to fix this doesn't help you're case. And since your listening skills are so poor, you leave us no choice.


From now on, you must get Mod permission to make an RPG. You must send the plot to an RPG Mod, and only, and I mean ONLY if they say it is acceptable may you post it.

If you do not make the proper edits to this one for when you send it in for approval, it's just not going to happen.

This still lacks much detail and description about both the world itself as well as the background of how Sonic Heroes ended and just how this RP is starting. How is Metal Sonic capturing entire teams and putting them under his control? How did he capture characters as fast as Sonic and strong as Knuckles? Explain a bit about the Sonic world and how it works, too, as not everyone who may want to join may have played this or any other Sonic game.

And how are the other teams being formed? HOW is a team formed? HOW do they get Team Blasts? And why for the love of baby Buddha is there Pokémon in the Sonic universe?!? There's no reasoning for it, not a single explanation, which is just pathetic.

Sorry, but this RP still really needs work. ><


~Psychic

Put in the explanations. Instead of writing horribly short and dull explanations, make scenes or something. We're all sicxk and tired of seeing you make the same RPG with the same problems.


Shape up or leave.

~Psychic