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Sonic Afterlife (PG)

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Sonic Afterlife (PG) (HedgehogShipping fic)

After a tragedy on a local island, Sonic must live without the most annoying, yet most important person in his life. Will Tails and Knuckles help him recover himself?​

Note: This is my second attempted fic here in the forums.
I'm only a novice writer and such...so yeah...
Although I'm pretty sensitive to some strong opinions. i accept advice and some critcisms (sp?)

Its rated PG for well, some violence and whatever.
And he we go *hides*

Chapter 1 - The unexpected loss.

The battle was set; Eggman had the ultimate weapon…(in his mind anyway…this always happened. The machines and such ended as rubble in the end.)
Sonic was fighting the last of the robots, Tails flying the Tornado, and Knuckles, well…
Working with Sonic.


It was the usual (and consistently boring) works. A few smashes here, a few crashes there.
A spin dash this and a smash-smash that.
Bla bla bla

Until something stepped out of the line. One of the most unexpected of events.

In the horizon, a pink figure could bee seen, holding some sort of brown substance.
“Sonic!” A girlish cry yelled from the distance.
Sonic knew this voice…as he heard it a million times before.
He sweatdropped.
“Amy! Now is not the time!” He yelled as he finished off another badnik.
“But Sonic I found them!!!”
”Found what?” Sonic had asked. Not knowing what she was on about.
“Sonic I found the Emeralds!!!”
Good Thought Sonic
“Where are they?”
Amy opened the bag, showing Sonic the 7 chaos emeralds she stole from Eggman.
”Thanks Amy!” Sonic complemented.
Amy smiled. She loved every bit when he said something nice to her.

She tried to hoist the bag over her shoulder, to get them to him. One fell out along the she was walking.
”Oh you stupid… emerald!” Amy complained, putting the bag down and picking the emerald up.

Sonic wiped his forehead as he polished off yet another badnik.
He looked behind him.
Uh oh…
“Amy don’t touch th-“
Too late.
She had the emerald in her hand. (Which wasn’t good by the way.)
”What Sonic?” Amy asked while not noticing the emerald glow in her hand.
Too late… Sonic cursed as he slapped himself for being so careless.
“Amy, drop the emerald quickly!!!” Knuckles yelled, as he saw what was going on.
“Wh-“

Amy didn’t know what was happening. She saw the boys looking at her in a weird as if she had dyed her fur or something.
A sudden glow had enveloped her. She rose into the air with the other emeralds rising as well.
Sonic was dumbstruck.
Amy? He thought as he was amazed at the golden ball of light hung in midair.
The emeralds circled around her as they got closer. A huge blast of light came as they clashed with her body.
The light dimmed a little.
Knuckles was staring at her too. Tails was as he flew around in the Tornado.

“Amy?” Sonic struggled to say. Still kinda stunned
She opened her eyes. And Sonic had a close look at her.

She had lighter and brighter fur, and her quills were lifted slightly to give a nice curl look.
Her eyes were gold. Shiniest Sonic had ever seen.
She just floated there. Glazing into mere space.

“Alright fools, your time has come!!!” A mean voice roared from the PA system.
The ground started to shake and wobbly as a huge machine erected from the ground.
“Oh what in the world is that?” Tails wondered.
They all paid their attention off Amy. Except Sonic.
“Amy?” He repeated.

The greyish-reddish coloured machine had two cannons, and the cockpit was on the top. It looked like it was over 30 feet.
“With this amount of power, they’d be no need for the Chaos Emeralds now…”
Eggman snickered as he rubbed his chin.
“I’ll need them later to destroy the world first.”

“What do you plan on doing now?” Amy asked. In a soft, serious-sounding tone.
Sonic just gawked at her still.
“Well, I’ll need to destroy all of you first.” Eggman remarked as he was looking for a certain button.
Amy gave a huff.
“Amy?”
”Einny meany miney mess…” Eggman recited, waving his index finger around his keyboard of buttons. “I wonder which button I will press?”
He finished wavering his finger. It landed on a big button that said “Fire”
“Ahh…now…who shall I destroy first?” He said as he looked at the group.

Tails knew who he was gonna aim for.
“Sonic, quickly get in!!!!” He cried out, as he had parked right next to Sonic.
Sonic still look intently at Amy.
“Eggman there is no way; you’ll be getting out of this alive…” Amy said calmly.
Eggman laughed.
“Is that right?”
Amy nodded.
“Well let’s see about that?” He began the launch.
“Ready all cannons! Open fire!!!”
The cannons changed positions…at Sonic’s position.
“Sonic move out of the way!!!” Tails yelled.
But Sonic wouldn’t budge. He still looked at Amy as if she were some sort of angel.

Amy looked at Sonic as the firing blazes headed for his blue body.
“Sonic!!!” Tails and Knuckles shouted in unison.
Amy moved her head to the side and cracked her neck.
“Not on my watch…”

Sonic felt the coming of blaze, its heat getting to him.
He shook his head.
“Sonic!!!”
Amy powered up. The golden glow becoming brighter by the second.
“I’ll save him…”
She sped in front of him, making it look like a teleport.
The blaze was just inches from reaching its target.
Amy put her hands in front of her. Palms facing the blaze.
Sonic and the others closed their eyes. Hoping it would miss…

It did.

The blaze had split in two. Not reaching the group at all as if there was of barrier surrounding the group.
It had encircled them all, but none of it hitting their objective.
A sweat drop appeared from her face.
“Now feel your own pain…”
She stuck out her hands and stretched her arms even more. She struggled against it.
The blaze was starting to move in the opposite direction.
“What’s going on?” Knuckles asked
“I dunno!” Tails responded.
The blaze very slowly started going backwards, heading back to the machine.
Amy was still putting up a fight for it. Now a vein showing upon her forehead.
“Take this!”
She recoiled herself, retrieving her hands.

Then let go…

The blaze shot back to the machine, engulfing it into flames.
Explosions could be heard from it. As do with bits and pieces flying all over the place.
Eggman sounded frustrated with all his moans and groans and the complaining to his loyal robots.
“You’re going to pay for this!” He yelled as he got away in his egg-like transportation.
Tails and Knuckles sighed with relief. Then Tails looked forward.
“Sonic?”

Sonic was doing the same thing he was before. A recited yet again the same word.
”Amy?”
Amy still was afloat in the air. But the golden glow that surrounded her weakened.
And her fur became darker to become what she was before.

She fell. And the emeralds had fled from her in all different directions.

Sonic ran up to catch her. He had a good look at her.
Scars and scratches around her body. Never had she been in a fight as big as this. Not with her…like this.
“Amy?”
This time she responded.
“Sonic I’m sorry.”
Sonic shook his head. “Why should you be sorry?”
A tear fell from her face…Sonic laid her down.
“I never should’ve touched that emerald…” she coughed out.
Sonic leant on his knees, gently stroking her hair. It was rough but calming.
“If you didn’t, I would’ve been a goner…” He proclaimed.
Amy coughed again.
“I shouldn’t have been here…I’ve always been the reckless one…”
Another warm tear fell from her runny eyes into Sonic’s lap.
“Amy, you saved all of us…you should feel happy…” Sonic explained as he swore he felt his eyes get teary.
Tails and Knuckles came up from behind.
”Yeah Amy…we can’t thank you enough!”
She coughed again…with blood included.
She must’ve used all her energy Sonic thought. Remember Sonic, she isn’t as strong as us…
“Come on, we have to take her to the hospital. And fast!” Knuckles suggested.
Sonic nodded. He picked up Amy, who’d look like she was gonna full under unconsciousness and sleep into the deep black darkness.
What would happen if she goes? Sonic thought as he gazed into her big, round eyes.
It would be all my fault…
Knuckles hopped into the passengers’ seat, while Sonic and Amy got on the wing.
“How long do you reckon it’s gonna take to get back?” Knuckles asked Tails.
“Probably an hour” Said Tails, looking at his watch and compass.
He then looked at Sonic, and Tails knew what would happen if it would take that long.
He swallowed. “Well, I’ll see if we can get there as fast as we can.”
That still didn’t make Sonic smile…even if speed was his favourite thing in the whole wide world. Not one inch of grin did Tails see with the naked eye.
“We’d better go…” Tails said, as started up the engine again, and flew off the island.

After they had flown about 20 minutes, Knuckles looked behind him.
“How is she?” He asked.
Sonic stroked her lovely pink hair.
“She’s asleep…” Sonic replied. Knuckles nodded.
“How much further?”
Tails looked again at his watch and compass.
“Well, considering we’re going at nearly full speed, we should be another 10 mi- uhhh I mean 5 minutes.” Tails answered, trying to go faster.
Sonic paid more attention to Amy.
Amy Rose, I need you to survive…

Another 3 minutes had gone past…and Tails could see land in the distance
“Here we are!!!” Tails said.
Sonic looked up from stroking Amy’s hair. Although he didn’t smile at the fact, he was kinda glad that they were almost home.
Amy, you’re gonna be alright

Tails had flown straight to the hospital.
When they landed in the front of the doors, Sonic shot straight of it, with Amy in his arms.
“He looks determined…” Knuckles assumed.

“Please help her…”
The nurse at the front desk nodded.
“Ok, people we need a stretcher for a pink hedgehog, stat!!!” She ordered as a doctor with a few others brought out one.
”Wait here sir.” Said the nurse to Sonic, as the doctor took Amy out of his arms.
“Please be ok…” he whispered under his breath, as he stood in the middle of the waiting room.

He remained in the room with Knuckles and Tails, very quiet and very eerie.
“You’d reckon she’s gonna be ok?” Tails asked.
No response.
“Sonic?”
“I don’t know ok Tails” Sonic replied loudly and rudely.
Tails face fell. He felt a palm on his shoulder.
“I think he needs time alone…” Knuckles suggested.
Tails took one last look at Sonic.
His eyes were red…Tails guessed he was trying not to cry.
He also knew Sonic didn’t want show his weak side…not something you would see every day of him.
Sonic tapped his fingers really hard a quickly on the coffee table with his left hand, and leant on arm rest with his right.
“Is HE gonna be ok?”
Knuckles sighed. He had one quick glance on Sonic as well. Same results as Tails.
“I’m pretty sure…but I’ve never seen Sonic act like this…”
It was true. Sonic was usually happy and full of energy, and often ran around the streets and mountains and cities for fun.
After all, Sonic was like one of those little kids who could not sit still. He was exactly like that.

But not at this time…
Tails nodded.
“Sonic?”
Sonic faced Tails.
“Would you like some time alone?”
He glanced into space again as he turned away. “Is that a yes?” Knuckles asked.
Tails nudged Knuckles. “Well…”

Tails didn’t want to leave his best buddy to rot by himself. He wanted to offer some support.
“We’re here for you Sonic…”
Silence.

Both of them sat on the couch in silence as well. And no one moved anywhere.

(Sonic’s POV)

Why am I leading her to die like this? I should’ve been the one saving her. Not letting her get in our regular fights with Eggman…

Maybe this wouldn’t of happened if I didn’t leave her with the emeralds…
But I could’ve died instead of her…

I would’ve accepted that. I can take Eggman’s heat. It’s easy as pie.

Man, I don’t know why I am caring so much? Is it because she was the one I kept running from?
Perhaps I was too afraid to admit it.

No no Sonic, this isn’t you. Why would you care for her this way if she is such a nuisance…

But I care for everyone, the majority of people depended on me to save them.
So, I take the responsibility for everyone’s safety.
Amy saved me. She saved all of us.
I’m surprised that she destroyed Eggman’s machine.
Something that big no one would ever destroy. Part from me and the others with a little…planning?

Wait a minute, we never plan. I never plan.
I never planned for this to happen to her. Now, because of that it’s costing her own life.

I really need to care of what I do in future…plan it.
Please Amy…be ok…


Well over ten minutes had passed until the doctor came in.
He stared straight at Sonic.
“She would like to see you now…”
Sonic nodded as he followed the scientist.

He saw her lying there. With her heart beat still going. But a bit wearily.
“Sonic is that you?” Amy whispered softly.
Amy moved her head to the door. Sonic went straight to her side.
“Yeah I’m here.”
Amy managed to show a weak smile. That smile gave Sonic a warm feeling... A hopeful feeling.
“I just wanted to tell the last time, I’m sorry…”
Sonic just shook his head. A drop fell from his face.
“Amy, you saved us…you saved me…” Sonic said, as his face fell.
Amy started to breath slowly.
“I just happy you’re… alive….” Amy coughed out.
Sonic just gazed at her fading eyes, as her eyelids struggled to lift themselves up.
He raised his arm, and held her hand.
”Squeeze to let me know you’re still here.” Sonic whispered to her ear.
Amy coughed again.
”Sonic…”
“Yeah?”
His grasp was tight…Sonic knew this wasn’t him, but he had to make sure. He just had to.
“Sonic?”
Sonic gulped. “Yes Amy?”
Amy stared at the big green things on his face.
”You have such pretty eyes…”

(Sonic’s POV)
Oh please Amy, I’m telling you, don’t fade away like this…
I still have to tell you something.
I never really knew it until now…

(Amy’s POV)
Sonic has to know, I can’t stay here forever…I have to go sometime.
I still hate myself for being so careless.
And he still doesn’t understand how much I love him…
I was so stupid…I shouldn’t have chased him all these years…
Wanting him to marry me and such.
I know he doesn’t care for me…not one little bit.
But why in the world does he care for me now? I have been trying to suffocate him all this time I’ve known him.
Being trying to find him to the ends of the earth. How silly of me.
I reckon he is better off without me…


“Sonic…” Amy whispered.
Sonic wiped a tear from his eye. “Yes Amy?”
Sonic wasn’t about to give up yet. He wasn’t ready for it. He would give anything for her survival.
“Amy?”
Her heart beat went slower…all you could hear was the slow-sounding beeps on the monitor.
“Sonic…”
Amy put her other hand to her heart. Sonic’s was beating really fast now…
“Amy?”
With all the strength she had left…
“With my last breath, I want to tell you something…”
Sonic looked like he disagreed. This couldn’t be her last…
“Amy, you gonna be alright…” he cried out as he grasped her hand tighter.
She took one deep breath.
“I know, I have been…such an annoying person…” She whispered.
No, you haven’t Sonic thought.
“Well, I don’t know…if you care enough if I say this…”
I’ll take every bit seriously.
“Sonic…I…love…”
“Yes Amy?”
She tried to take another breath.
Although Amy tried to get him to be her husband, it still didn’t show much.
She often looked like a rabid fangirl.
“Sonic…I…”
“Amy?”
“Love…”

Nothing more was said.
“Amy?”
Sonic felt her hand slipping from his.
“Amy please answer me!!!” Sonic said anxiously.
Still no response.
He looked to the monitor.
A long beep sounded throughout the room.
Her eyes were shut.
Sonic couldn’t believe it.
“Amy…please no…”
Sonic shoved his face into the bed, and started sobbing.
Why?
“Sonic?”
Sonic looked behind him. It was Tails, with Knuckles standing behind him.

Tails looked around and understood the situation straight away.
“Sonic…” Tails said, as he put his hand on his shoulder.
Knuckles looked to the floor. Then back to Sonic.
“Sonic, if there’s anything we can do-”
Sonic looked at Knuckles. “Thanks for the offer man…” Sonic said in between sniffles.


End of chapter 1


*grabs a plushie to hide behind*

Well...yeah...>_>
 
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Wes

Iblis Wings
The story is great but...a little bit hard to read....but so far great! But rememver! Eggman wants to rule the world not destroy it!
 

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Wes: Well, it was my kinda hard to do...considering sometimes i cant make sense myself.
Oh yeah, I'll try to keep that in mind XD
 
C

Coral_Eye

Guest
^_^ It's very good so far, a reasonable length, and good plot/description!!!
I enjoyed reading it ^^
Keep up the good work,

*~*Coral*~*
 

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Coral_Eye: Thank you my twinnie!!! *hugs*

Chapter 2 will be up soon peoples...hopefully better than the first >_>
 

Water Spirit

~*Animus Aquae*~
Hey sweetie, first off, I think you're story is really cute. ^_^ I don't know a lot about the Sonic series but from what I do know and what your story has explained, it's cute!

Just to help improve the story in the future, I'm just going to offer a few mini tips and this should help to make the story even more A-OK! ^_~

OK, instead of writing (Sonic/Amy's POV), you can change that by referring to the character before you write it and then just putting it in Italics. Like so:

(Sonic’s POV)

Why am I leading her to die like this? I should’ve been the one saving her. Not letting her get in our regular fights with Eggman…

Maybe this wouldn’t of happened if I didn’t leave her with the emeralds…
But I could’ve died instead of her…

I would’ve accepted that. I can take Eggman’s heat. It’s easy as pie.

Man, I don’t know why I am caring so much? Is it because she was the one I kept running from?
Perhaps I was too afraid to admit it.

No no Sonic, this isn’t you. Why would you care for her this way if she is such a nuisance…

But I care for everyone, the majority of people depended on me to save them.
So, I take the responsibility for everyone’s safety.
Amy saved me. She saved all of us.
I’m surprised that she destroyed Eggman’s machine.
Something that big no one would ever destroy. Part from me and the others with a little…planning?

Wait a minute, we never plan. I never plan.
I never planned for this to happen to her. Now, because of that it’s costing her own life.

I really need to care of what I do in future…plan it.
Please Amy…be ok…

Instead, you could just do it like this:

Why am I leading her to die like this? Sonic questioned in his mind. I should’ve been the one saving her. Not letting her get in our regular fights with Eggman…

Maybe this wouldn’t of happened if I didn’t leave her with the emeralds…
But I could’ve died instead of her…

I would’ve accepted that. I can take Eggman’s heat. It’s easy as pie.

Man, I don’t know why I am caring so much? Is it because she was the one I kept running from?
Perhaps I was too afraid to admit it.

No no Sonic, this isn’t you. Why would you care for her this way if she is such a nuisance…

But I care for everyone, the majority of people depended on me to save them.
So, I take the responsibility for everyone’s safety.
Amy saved me. She saved all of us.
I’m surprised that she destroyed Eggman’s machine.
Something that big no one would ever destroy. Part from me and the others with a little…planning?

Wait a minute, we never plan. I never plan.
I never planned for this to happen to her. Now, because of that it’s costing her own life.

I really need to care of what I do in future…plan it.
Please Amy…be ok…

It just helps to tidy it up a bit and also makes a clear point that this isn't normal dialogue. ^_^

OK, I think that's it for now, with the exception of a few grammar mistakes and stuff (which we all make and you know I'm a clear example of ^_~) it seems fine. ^_^

Looking forward to Chapter 2!

See ya soon.

WS
XxX
 

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Water Spirit: Well, thank you for that WS, I'll keep that in mind as well XD
*goes on word* XD
 

Wes

Iblis Wings
Well good luck and have fun writing your fic!
 

Water Spirit

~*Animus Aquae*~
No probs, Stacee. XD Use it only if you want to though - it's only a suggestion.

What's wrong with a sad fic? This one's got us in suspence and a bit of romance mixed with a bit of sadness is good in my opion. ^_~
 

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Chapter 2 – The weird act

The day of the funeral was depressing.

Everyone wearing the usual attire, black.
Black as death, black as the darkness, black as the night…black as the big empty hole in Sonic’s heart.
It was a hole that Sonic thought only Amy could fill.

All of Amy’s friends were there.
Tails, Knuckles, Chris, Cream and Cheese, Rouge, Big and many more of her friends she knew and had.
Tails was standing next to Sonic, like a best bud should.
“Is Mr. Sonic going to be ok?”
Tails turned around. It was Cream the Rabbit. With her Chao, Cheese.
Tails looked at him. He was staring at her coffin…in what he had been doing since her death.
“I dunno Cream, I dunno…”
Big the Cat was next to Cream, he patted her shoulder.
”I’m sure he will be fine cute rabbit…” Said Big in his carefree speech.
“We are gathered here today to mourn the death of Amy Rose…hedgehog, heroin and close friend…”
Sonic closed his eyes…trying to remember the fun times with Amy…
“She saved lives during that tragic event…and she will not be forgotten.”
Images of the past wondered through Sonic’s mind.
From the first time he met her when he tried to save her from his metallic-clone…to the time they were on ARK.
She chased him, asked him to marry her many times.
She never stopped.

That’s possibly why he liked her. Her determination on her one goal.
To marry him.

Sonic knew, if he’d accepted it, he’d looked weak, and he wouldn’t feel right.
That was in his mind anyway.

But if there was one more thing Sonic could do…
Was to accept it. However it was too late now.

“Amy was one of the people were strong-minded…destined for greatness…”
Sonic nodded. He agreed to every single word he said.
Everyone looked to the coffin as it went into the ground.
“May she rest in peace…ashes to ashes, dust to dust.”
They all paid their last respects to her.
Knuckles chucked in a rock.
As with Tails and Cream…
And Big and Rouge…
And the rest…

All started walking away. Except…
”Sonic?”
Sonic looked behind him. It was the minister.
“Yeah?” Sonic responded, as he wiped another tear that fell down his face.
“I got some note before the funeral sent by down by some unknown person…”
Sonic raised an eyebrow.
”Yeah?”
“Well, the note said, to give this to you…”
A group of people from behind held a box. And they laid it right in front of Sonic.
“I wonder what it is?” Tails wondered.
Sonic stared at it. “Open it.”
He slowly went towards the box. Unhooked its hinges, and gradually, he lifted the lid.
Sonic’s red-clouded eyes went wide.

“Her…hammer…”
The minister nodded. “Well, who ever it was, suggested giving it to you…”
Sonic picked up Amy’s infamous Piko Piko Hammer…
Amy never left home without it. As it helped through minor but useful times.
She’d also give anyone in her way a big smack on the head. Or, she’d chase them down if they made her furious.
Which was often.
Why Amy? Sonic thought as he had one, long gaze at it.
He looked up. “Thanks…this means a lot.”
The minister smiled. “Glad I could help” he said as he turned around and walked away.
Sonic’s eyes then lit up.
”Wait!”
The minister revolved back.
”All that stuff you said…that was…”
The minister looked at Sonic. “Was?”
“Was thoughtful and true”
The minister grinned again. And went on walking.

Sonic continued staring at the hammer. It was the only thing left of her.
Its power was mighty. Maybe it could come in handy some day.
It would be nice to have the power of Amy, a bit of her with me… Sonic thought.
“Come on…let’s go…”


That night, when the moon was up, and the sky was starry and clear.
Perfect for Eggman, when he had snuck into the cemetery.
“Now…let’s find some useful body and clone it!” Eggman demanded happily.

He and his robots walked around…then something caught his eye.
“Oh hello, what is this?”
He found a recently made grave. He smiled.
“Boys, we’ve found one!”
His lackeys began to dig it.
Eggman grinned. He stood there for a bit…looking around.
Then he finally had a glance at the tombstone.
“Hmm?”
He had a good look at it. The name was familiar.
“Amy Rose…hmmm…”
He rubbed his chin. “Now where have I heard that name before?”
He thought long and hard. An image projected into his head of a pink hedgehog, afloat in his mind.
“Wait a minute? Isn’t she the blue runt’s girlfriend???”
Eggman shook his head.
“Maybe we can use her DNA to an advantage?” one of his robots suggested.
Eggman clicked his fingers at the sound of the idea. “Of course! That’s perfect!”
He looked at them. “Dig faster you fools!”

The sun had risen that very next day…all you could hear were birds chirping.
Chris was the first one up. He had risen from his bed, and headed downstairs for breakfast.
“Would you like some breakfast?” his maid asked.
“Yes please…” Chris answered.
His maid turned to him. “By the way, how is Sonic?”
Chris shrugged. “I dunno, but it’s gonna be hard to cheer him up…”
The maid nodded. “Well, where is he?”

Sonic tossed and turned in his sleep. It was hard to get Amy off his mind.
“Sonic!!!”
“Amy!!!”
He tried to cover the blankets over him many due to kicking it off the bed.
“Sonic!!!”
Sonic could see Amy in the distance. Looking as pretty as ever.
He ran towards her.

They were in a field of flowers…as if in a place where nothing goes wrong.
He kept running…as fast he could to get to her.
“Sonic!!!”
He ran right in front of her. Trying to pull her in for a hug.

That was…before.
“RARGHHHHHH!!!”
Amy looked behind her. Huge bats swarmed all over her, and tried to take her away.
“Sonic help me!”
Sonic tried to rid of them. But he was being pulled. He fell until he saw nothing but black.

He shot up. He was breathing intensively
Maybe that dream was to indicate it was my fault… Sonic thought.
It was hard for Sonic to get her out of his mind. Especially when he thought he was responsible for her death.
“Maybe a few laps around the city will help me…”
He got out of bed, and ran immediately outside, and headed for the city.

He paced around and around, waving to the city folk.
Said hi to a few kids, dropped by the harbour and visited Station Square...

FLASH!!!

Sonic stopped. In front of a golden ball of light. Similar to the one that Amy was in.
He also remembered the same ball from the ruins of Angel Island and it turned out to be a deceased female echidna named Tikal who helped them discover the truth about Chaos.

The ball started to fly away…Sonic decided to follow it.
I don't know why I'm following it...Am I running for it again? Sonic thought as he chased it.

Tails stretched himself and yawned. “That was a nice sleep…” Tails confirmed.
He looked around. There was only him and Cream (plus Cheese) in the room.
“Cream wake up!” Tails said as he nudged her.
Cream yawned. “What is it?”

Tails knew Cream wasn’t old enough to understand, although she was only 2 years younger than him.
But Tails had the mind of a teenaging nerd. With all his technology smarts and all.
Tails just sighed. He turned to Cream.
“Uh…let’s just have breakfast ok?”
Cream nodded.

Knuckles laid on the Master Emerald, just gazing into the sky.
He then closed his eyes…still trying to forget that horrible scene.
“I wonder how Sonic is doing.” Knuckles said to himself.
Sonic may have been his rival, but he still had thought about him throughout this time, wondering what he was doing. That is, doing to himself at this moment.
“Would you like some company?”
Knuckles opened his eyes. It was Rouge.
If Knuckles wanted to look stupid, he would’ve smiled.
But he didn’t. Even though he was happy that Rouge was there.
“Knock yourself out…” he said coolly, looking straight in front of him.
Rouge smiled at sat next to him. She just stared into his big purple eyes.
”So, how’s your friend Sonic?”
Knuckles closed his eyes.
“Not sure…”
Rouge sat back and relaxed.
“I never knew the full story on how she died…” Rouge said, leaning on Knuckles.
Knuckles swore he felt his face warm up.


Oh great she’s leaning on me. Knuckles thought...feeling a bit nervous [/I]And I hate it when my face suddenly heats up when she does that.
I just hate it.
Wait a minute, is Rouge attracted to me? Nah she can’t be. This is just her. I guess.
With her flirtatious smile and sometimes unpredictably wild, man I don’t know any one else rather a better pest, but she somehow is…I dunno.
I guess I like her cause I…like her style.[/I]


Knuckles sighed as he looked back up at the sky.
“Well, I don’t know about you…but, well, I would discuss it with you but…”
Rouge nodded. I guess Amy was a close friend as well…not as close as Sonic, but close enough to be a good friend.

“You don’t have to discuss if it upsets you a little…” Rouge explained.
Knuckles turned his to get a glimpse of her. She was pretty as ever.
He didn’t know how or why, he knew he felt something. And it was about her.
He said nothing and yet again stared into the nothingness.
Rouge just laid back and closed her eyes.


Knuckles is sweet, he really is…
Rouge Began to think.
Amy might have been a pain in the neck to him, and I’m sure in his heart he’d want to rid of her.
But nonetheless, I’d suppose that he knew she was like that.

Now I knew Amy and I never really liked each other. She the sweet one and I was the, well, selfish one.
Now, I could of shook hands with her at one time and become friends, but unfortunately that never happened.


And maybe never will…


While at his base, Eggman was designing a new machine, which looked like it was designed for creating something, due to the tubes around the place.
And a familiar figure in the middle tube.
“Well, if I have this broad, I shall rule the world without the hedgehog destroying my plans.”
He went over to the keyboard which was under a huge screen. He started typing in numbers rapidly to get some sort of calculation.
“Now, if I’m correct, this machine should make different kinds of copies with a good or bad reputation.”
Next to the big screen was a knob on the wall. Above it was a scale rating that went in order of: ‘Evil and Mean’ ‘Neutral and normal’ and ‘Sweet and Kind.’
He walked to the knob, and turned it to the red one…and it wasn’t too hard to depict which knob it signified.
The machine started making clinking and clanking noises. Mainly the middle tube which had an extending robotic arm which pinched a piece of…hair from the substance which was in it.
“That hedgehog wouldn’t hurt these for sure…” Eggman predicted.
Eggman was pretty certain for the blue-blur not to touch these specimens, as he would identify and think that she had turned to his side.

And the world would probably be doomed.


Sonic stopped in front of the front of the cemetery. He had no clue why he was brought here.
For Amy perhaps?
”Thanks Tikal, but I have her with me…” Sonic explained to the light, withdrawing Amy’s Piko Piko Hammer.
Silence came as the ball of light disappeared.
“I might visit her later…” He said as he ran off into the distance.


After breakfast, Chris, Tails and Cream went outside.
”I wonder where Sonic is?” Tails wondered. “Would Mr. Sonic be running around as usual?”
Tails looked to the sky and sighed.
”Maybe Cream…maybe…”
Chris shrugged. “Well, I gotta go guys…cya!” He said as he ran off to go to school.

“Tails?” Cream said. Shuffling her feet.
”Yes Cream?”
“What would you do if…” Cream tried to explain.
“What Cream?”
Cream looked to the ground. He guessed this was something she wouldn’t be old enough to understand
“If you lost Mr. Sonic?”
Tails eyes went wide. “I would miss him like crazy Cream…” Tails explained. Gesturing his arms.
“Sonic’s like a brother to me…”
Cream hugged Cheese. “Hmmm I see…” She stared at Cheese. “It would be like if I lost poor Cheese here, I wouldn’t know what to do…” Cream explained, getting teary-eyed.
Tails cuddled Cream. “I’m sure you and Cheese will be together forever…”
Cream smiled as a tear rolled down her face.

FLASH!
“Huh?”
Tails and Cream looked behind them…it was the ball of light.
Tikal? Tails thought, confused at the thought that she had come back.
The little flickered a little…
”It looks like it wants us to follow it…” Cream said, gazing at the golden ball.

They both followed it…
”I wonder where it’s taking us?” Cream wondered.

Meanwhile, Sonic was running up and down mountains as usual.
But he didn’t fell right…he felt like there was nothing to run away from.
He sighed and kept running on the current mountain he was on.

“Hey Sonic!”
Sonic tried to stop running. He came to a complete stop right before he got on a road.
It was Sam Speed.
“Sorry to hear bout Amy…”
Sonic’s face fell and he looked to ground.
”Oh sorry man, didn’t want you…”
”Don’t worry about it.”
Sam shrugged as he took his helmet off. He crouched down and looked at Sonic.
”If it makes you better…you wanna race?”
Sonic looked up. It was something to do…something to run for…
He nodded.
”You’re on! First one to get back to the outskirts wins.”
Sonic managed smiling for the first time in since…that day.

“Mr. Tails, I’m scared…” Cream shivered, clinging on to Cheese.
”I am too Cream, I am too…” Tails said, looking concerned about where the ball of light was taking them.
They both looked to the right…
”This is making me nervous…” Cream cried out, trembling with fear.
Tails was too, but he covered up by holding her hand and smiling at her.
“We’re going to be ok Cream.” He explained, whilst trying to be strong.

They both still had followed it. The wind making the eeriness of the cemetery.
It made you think it made it like the souls of the dead were moving around. And it wasn’t even night time!
The blue sky became cloudy and grey. And the wind became more fierce by the minute.
A cold, hard shiver went down Tail’s spine. He could sense something was about to go wrong.

The ball stopped in front of a certain grave. “What is it?” Cream wondered.
Tails looked down. And they both gasped at it.
”She’s gone!”

(DUN, DUN, DUN!)

Ok, i tried a bit better this time, using WS's advice.
Oh you may of noticed a bit of Knux/Rouge and Tails/Cream in there too! XD

Oh i'll give anyone a prize (if i can find one XD) to anyone find a line off a Delta Goodrem song (not the exact line, but based off it XD)
 

Wes

Iblis Wings
It's a good chapter except will...it's a bit hard to read. You should write this on MW but it's okay I guess.
 

EXP:282

Is Back!!! For now.
Wes: I am...but if you can give me an example of what you mean, and how could i improve it. That would help make it better.
 
C

Coral_Eye

Guest
Twinne!!! ^^ Another great chapter though the funeral was sad :(
 

Wes

Iblis Wings
For example.

He and his robots walked around…then something caught his eye.
“Oh hello, what is this?”
He found a recently made grave. He smiled.
“Boys, we’ve found one!”
His lackeys began to dig it.
Eggman grinned. He stood there for a bit…looking around.
Then he finally had a glance at the tombstone.
“Hmm?”
He had a good look at it. The name was familiar.
“Amy Rose…hmmm…”
He rubbed his chin. “Now where have I heard that name before?”
He thought long and hard. An image projected into his head of a pink hedgehog, afloat in his mind.
“Wait a minute? Isn’t she the blue runt’s girlfriend???”
Eggman shook his head.
“Maybe we can use her DNA to an advantage?” one of his robots suggested.
Eggman clicked his fingers at the sound of the idea. “Of course! That’s perfect!”
He looked at them. “Dig faster you fools!”

Instead of writing it like that you could write it that you could space it out and add more description and make it easier for the readers.

He and his robots walked around…then something caught his eye.

“Oh hello, what is this?” He mumbled.

He found a recently made grave. He smiled and shouted “Boys, we’ve found one!”

His robotic lackeys began to dig it up. Eggman grinned. He stood there for a bit…looking around. Then he finally had a glance at the tombstone and merely mumbled,

“Hmm?”

He had a good look at it. The name he saw was familiar.

“Amy Rose…hmmm…-”

He rubbed his chin. “Now where have I heard that name before?”

He thought long and hard. An image projected into his head of a pink hedgehog, afloat in his mind.

“Wait a minute? Isn’t she the blue runt’s girlfriend???”

Eggman shook his head, “Maybe we can use her DNA to an advantage?” one of his robots suggested.

Eggman clicked his fingers at the sound of the idea. “Of course! That’s perfect!”
He looked at them and barked the order “Dig faster you fools!”
 

Misty Lover17

Water Trainer
Cool fic so far, Stacee! The part where Amy died was sad. Poor Sonic. That was really brave of her to save all of them from being destroyed by Eggman. It was also cute when Tails was helping Cream. Also, the part with Knuckles and Rouge was really cool. Plus, that was a surprizing ending for chapter two. I can't wait for the next chapter!:)
 

EXP:282

Is Back!!! For now.
Wes said:
For example.

He and his robots walked around…then something caught his eye.
“Oh hello, what is this?”
He found a recently made grave. He smiled.
“Boys, we’ve found one!”
His lackeys began to dig it.
Eggman grinned. He stood there for a bit…looking around.
Then he finally had a glance at the tombstone.
“Hmm?”
He had a good look at it. The name was familiar.
“Amy Rose…hmmm…”
He rubbed his chin. “Now where have I heard that name before?”
He thought long and hard. An image projected into his head of a pink hedgehog, afloat in his mind.
“Wait a minute? Isn’t she the blue runt’s girlfriend???”
Eggman shook his head.
“Maybe we can use her DNA to an advantage?” one of his robots suggested.
Eggman clicked his fingers at the sound of the idea. “Of course! That’s perfect!”
He looked at them. “Dig faster you fools!”

Instead of writing it like that you could write it that you could space it out and add more description and make it easier for the readers.

He and his robots walked around…then something caught his eye.

“Oh hello, what is this?” He mumbled.

He found a recently made grave. He smiled and shouted “Boys, we’ve found one!”

His robotic lackeys began to dig it up. Eggman grinned. He stood there for a bit…looking around. Then he finally had a glance at the tombstone and merely mumbled,

“Hmm?”

He had a good look at it. The name he saw was familiar.

“Amy Rose…hmmm…-”

He rubbed his chin. “Now where have I heard that name before?”

He thought long and hard. An image projected into his head of a pink hedgehog, afloat in his mind.

“Wait a minute? Isn’t she the blue runt’s girlfriend???”

Eggman shook his head, “Maybe we can use her DNA to an advantage?” one of his robots suggested.

Eggman clicked his fingers at the sound of the idea. “Of course! That’s perfect!”
He looked at them and barked the order “Dig faster you fools!”
Oh ok i see what you mean. Thanks for the tip, *goes to edit next chapter*

Misty Lover17 said:
Cool fic so far, Stacee! The part where Amy died was sad. Poor Sonic. That was really brave of her to save all of them from being destroyed by Eggman. It was also cute when Tails was helping Cream. Also, the part with Knuckles and Rouge was really cool. Plus, that was a surprizing ending for chapter two. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you ML17, i dont really support Tails/Cream, but minor hints are ok. But I think the ship is cute IMO.

Expect chapter 3 in about....oh say 3-4 days.
 

Water Spirit

~*Animus Aquae*~
Ooooo..... looks like things are heating up, or digging up... whatever. XD

Ok, i tried a bit better this time, using WS's advice.
Oh you may of noticed a bit of Knux/Rouge and Tails/Cream in there too! XD

It's better now and I'm glad you took my advice. ^_^ And the new shippings are providing more of an interest. ;)

And also, I agree with Wes's advice but apart from that it was fine. ^_^

The funeral was sad but then things started to get even more interesting with Eggman taking Amy's body..... looking forward to more. ^_^

Good work Stacee and keep it up!

WS
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