Sonic Chaos - Take 2

[SoniChaos]

Right, seeing as my old topic got pushed way back, I figured I'd start a new one, as to add my new issues and not to bump the old topic.

CHAPTER 1 - Cronotravelling

Episode 1- Intro [4th Wall Breaker] *
Episode 2- The Note
Episode 3- Theft Attempt
Episode 4- Chao Time!
Episode 5- Time Travel
Episode 6- Retro
Episode 7- Hedge & Hog Alike
Episode 8- Smart Fox Rendezvous
Episode 9- Crabtacular Power
Episode 10- Master Plan
Episode 11- 8-BIT
Episode 12- Crabbles?!

CHAPTER 2 - The fall of Robotnik

Episode 13- Test Drive
Episode 14- Incoming hedgehog
Episode 15- Shadow the Hedgehog
Episode 16- Improvised Ships
Episode 17- True Power
Episode 18 - Captain's Log
Episode 19 - Enter Nack

Please give feedback and comments.

Note 1 - The quality of the comics increase as the episode number increases.

Note 2 - The title "Sonic Chaos" has nothing to do with the game made for the Game Gear, named equally. In fact, sprites used are from Sonic Advance and Sonic Triple Trouble.

* - This issue is a 4th wall breaker, I am aware of it. It was my first comic ever, and as such made when I was a comic newbie. Please try to disregard the first panel (which breaks the 4th wall), as the rest of the comic somewhat builds up to the plot.

 

[Solar boy Nick]

Awesome,great work!

 

[ex-ty]

Thats way cool

 

[DarkFurret]

I have to agree it's pretty funny! I love the Crab, and the sarcasm that you used me, and everyone else that know you from other forums to.

The graphics are also good for a sprite comic, but here's a suggestion: Don't zoom in so many times. It shows the comic is fan-made, even though it's easy to find out by the different humor and the way comics change so much in the layout. Sure, in FireRed, when you use an item, the sprite zooms in. But I never liked that.

Although your comic could use always the same style and you could change the old ones to fit the others, I'd give this a low 9/10. But people will never comment about comics much if they aren't about Pokémon. I suggest you try to do a Pokémon Comic - I'd love to see it.

 

[Spi Jirachi]

I love 4th Wall breaker, but it sort of decreases number of action in a comic. Don't worry if your comics has that problem, I usually think of something in my comics to fix that.