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Sonic's Past.

TheDarknessWithin

Link PWNs you all.
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Please put the credit someplace else, it's just so much it becomes distracting.

You do have a good sense of humor though Shadow.
 
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jhoto moto

Guest
Wow even I don't like this I dont get it with tails and the part were he gets "killed" .
 

QuietLugia

Rabid Pokeshipper
It's an origional idea, I'll give you that.

(jhoto moto, please, if you don't like the comic, at least try to be CONSTRUCTIVE. Tell Shadow how he could improve, and so on.)

Anyway, I like it. You have a background, which is nice. The sprites look good, and you can capture the expressions very nicely. Now, I'm no comic diva myself, but I'll give you 8/10 for this one.

The only thing which bothers me is the credits at the bottom of the screen. They are, quite frankly, annoying. Put them on each post. like, if knuckles appeared in one of them, then after the comic strip, (underneath the URL) put who made the Knuckles sprite there. It will get people to focus on the actual comic.
 

TheDarknessWithin

Link PWNs you all.
Episode 4
Sorry for the long time no update, I had something that kept me busy.
This episode will be continued.

Credits:
Sonic was ripped by Bonzai XX2
Knuckles found at Shyguy Kingdom.
Chemical Plant Zone ripped by Flare.
The only thing which bothers me is the credits at the bottom of the screen. They are, quite frankly, annoying. Put them on each post. like, if knuckles appeared in one of them, then after the comic strip, (underneath the URL) put who made the Knuckles sprite there. It will get people to focus on the actual comic.
Done. Thanks for your suggestion, and G'night.
 
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jhoto moto

Guest
(jhoto moto, please, if you don't like the comic, at least try to be CONSTRUCTIVE. Tell Shadow how he could improve, and so on.)
I will not because I myself have bad comics and need good advice
 

Mastercougar

The Infinite Fire
Hmmm, it's pretty good, and kinda funny, but it bugs me that nothing really gets resolved from comic to comic.
 

Felix Feral Fezirix

Densetsu no Pikachu!
Man you are teh funny. Since the plot is about to begin I have come to the right place at the right time. XD. Now I shall wait for the plot to start. ANd the way you use those sprites and hilarious! Although the sprite of Sonic flipping over still has the pole in his hand...(the original context was when he was swinging from a pull-up bar) but nobody's perfect.

This is great. THe only thing bad about it is some awkward sprites here and there and maybe the plot. Oh well.

Pika out.
 

MaskedManAbsolkid

Well-Known Member
Good, except for the fact that Tails was killed off. Even though he was killed off great, will he return?
 
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