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Sootopolis - City of Love (AAML)

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
Well, it looks like gladdecease is starting a story. The only thing you might want to know is that [this] is translated Pokémon talk. Enjoy! Read on!

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"Another day, another badge!" Ash said happily, holding his new Mossdeep Mind badge up so it would reflect the sunlight.

"That was an awesome battle, Ash." Max commented. "Tate and Liza had a really powerful team!"

"Yeah, but nothing Torkoal and Pikachu couldn't handle." Ash commented.

"Won't you ever admit that a gym battle was actually challenging, Ash?" May inquired. She was starting to get annoyed by Ash's overconfident attitude.

"Why should I if they never are?"

"I know quite a few gym leaders that would contradict you on that statement, Ash. Myself included." Brock argued.

"Name one, besides you." Ash challenged.

"I'll name five easily: Sabrina; Lt. Surge; Brawly; Erika; and you-know-who." Brock proclaimed. Ash sweatdropped.

"Okay...so I have lost once in a while...but not always! And I didn't lose to her!"

"Right...you just didn't win. Just like you didn't win against me, or Sabrina, or Erika..."

"Oh, be quiet!"

"Was Ash just given some of his badges?" Max asked disbelievingly.

"Well, Ash battled me with only Pikachu. I was a rock gym leader. You can imagine how it went." Brock explained. "He lost the first time. The second time, he battled with Pikachu again, and this time a Thunderbolt's sparks set off a fire alarm, which soaked Onix through. Even though Onix was vulnerable to an attack, Ash forfeited. I considered it to be such a noble thing to do that I gave him the badge."

"Oh...that's how. I don't think that would be fair...but that's your decision, I suppose...So who was you-know-who?" Max asked.

"Yeah. Where did she come in to this story?" May asked, her curiosity piqued

"She was the second gym leader Ash faced. They had a two-on-two battle, and she won the first round: Butterfree vs. Staryu. The second round of Pidgeotto vs. Starmie was interrupted by Team Rocket, so they never finished the match. The other gym leaders of that gym gave Ash the badge for saving their gym."

"Was it the Cerulean Gym?" Max asked, confused.

"Yep." Brock confirmed.

"The Water Pokémon gym of Kanto?" Max questioned.

"The one and the same."

"Why wouldn't Ash use Pikachu?" May queried. "Wouldn't it have won easily?"

"It would be the most logical choice." Max agreed.

"Pikachu refused to battle a friend." Ash suddenly spoke up. "He wasn't as obedient back then as he is now."

"A friend?"

"So you knew the Cerulean Gym leader?"

"Yeah..." Ash became quiet again, apparently deep in thought.

"So, which one did you know?" Max asked, his curiosity piqued.

"How many are there, Max?" May asked. She normally wouldn't care, but she wanted to make Ash talk. For him to be so quiet...just wasn't normal.

"There are three: Daisy, Violet, and Lily Waterflo-"

"Four."

"What?"

"There are four Cerulean Gym leaders, not three."

"That's not what the Pokénav says in its gym leader database..."

"Well, it's wrong!" Max backed up, startled by Ash's sudden outburst.

"Okay, okay Ash...if you say so..." Ash was looking angrily at Max. You could almost say he was glaring at the young Pokémon enthusiast, which was a first for Max to experience from his normally pretty even-tempered Pokémon training friend.

"Pikapi..." Pikachu said, trying to calm Ash down. "Pichupi chu Pichapi pi chu Pikachupi...pi chu pika." Ash relaxed a bit.

"I know, Pikachu. It isn't their fault. I just get upset when people talk like that about her...like she doesn't count. You know that. And you do too, Brock." Ash turned towards his breeder companion.

"Hey, man...I didn't know you were so protective of her behind her back...you certainly weren't like that when we traveled with her..." Brock snickered. "What's happened to cause this sudden change in attitude?" Ash flushed.

"This...isn't the time - or place - to talk of that kind of thing." He cleared his throat. "Anyway, where's the closest gym, Max?"

Brock looked over at his Pokémon trainer friend. The conversation topic may have been changed, but something was up with Ash. He refused to actually say what had happened to him, but something most definitely had happened before Brock had returned to travel with him. It was almost like...he didn't trust Brock with his secrets anymore.

Before long, the group had decided to travel towards Sootopolis City, which contained, as Max had informed the group, a Water Pokémon Gym. Far from cheering Ash up, he simply went deeper in thought.

They found a ferry that was headed towards the island Sootopolis City was loated on, and ordered themselves tickets through the Nurse Joy at Fallabor, where the ferry would ship off.

And Ash still didn't speak much...

One night that week...​

'What did she mean? Why on earth did Misty give me her handkerchief?! I know what they normally mean - but this is Misty we're talking about here. She couldn't have been saying something like 'I love you' - right?' Ash sighed, then rolled over on his sleeping bag to face his electric Pokémon buddy. "I'm so confused, Pikachu. You were there, you saw her give me this." He held out the handkerchief. "What do you think she meant?"

"[Misty meant what she said - or in this case, as good as said.]"

"And what do you mean by that?" Pikachu sighed. Ash could be so dense sometimes.

"[Well, lets take you through this, step-by-step. Misty gave you her handkerchief, right?]"

"Right..."

"[And, normally, when a girl gives a boy her handkerchief, it means that the girl loves the boy, right?]"

"Right..."

"[So, if Misty gave you her handkerchief, and giving your handkerchief means you love someone, then that means...?]"

"She wanted me to keep my face clean?" Pikachu facefaulted, then slapped its face with a paw.

"[No, it doesn’t!]"

“Then what does it mean?”

“[Figure it out for yourself!]” Thanks to that comment and a Thundershock, Ash was immediately rendered immobile. After a few minutes, he regained the ability to speak.

“What’s got you in such a rotten mood, Pikachu?” He asked, confused. “I’m just wondering about this stupid handkerchief Misty gave me.”

“[Why are you asking me? Why not Brock?]”

“I can’t trust Brock like I can you.”

"[Well, if you trust me so much, tell me why you care so much.]

“What d’you mean by that, Pikachu?”

“[Why do you care? If that handkerchief really was so stupid, why didn’t you leave it at home, or throw it away?]”

“...”

“[Just as I thought. You -]" Pikachu began to say, but...

"Prepare for trouble!"

"[Oh, no.]" Pikachu rubbed its temples with one paw. It really didn't need this right now.

"And make it double."

"To protect the world from devastation."

"To unite all peoples within our nation."

"To denounce the evils of truth and love."

"To extend our reach to the stars above."

"Jessie."

"James."

"Team Rocket blasts off at the speed of light."

"Surrender now or prepare to fight!"

"Meowth! That's right!"

"Team Rocket!" Shouted Ash, May, Max, and Brock, right on cue.

"Pi pikachu!" Added Pikachu.

"Do you mind?" May grumbled. "It's kinda late, ya know..." Team Rocket almost facefaulted, but became very angry.

"How dare you?!" Jessie shouted, her head twice as big as normal.

"You cannot simply schedule a Team Rocket attack!" James added.

"Yeah, 'specially when we worked so hard tinkin' up a dis plan!" Meowth held up a giant rubber hand connected to a giant coiled spring.

"Didn't they use this one before?" Brock whispered to Ash. Team Rocket overheard and almost fell over.

"This is a new plan!"

"We worked really hard thinking up of it...right, Meowth?"

"Yeah, we worked hard tinkin' it up, jus' not recently." Jessie and James fell on their faces.

"Now it's hello Pikachu," the hand grabbed Pikachu, "and good-bye, twoips!" As Meowth finished his statement, Team Rocket hopped into their Meowth balloon and began to fly off, yelling to Meowth about being original.

"No! Pikachu!" Ash shouted as he began to run down the path near their campsite. Brock, Max, and May followed suit, Max grabbing Ash's backpack as he passed it.

They soon came upon a large body of either fresh or salt water. Team Rocket's Meowth balloon continued across it, the criminals aboard it cackling in glee at their apparent victory. Ash dove into the water and swam after them. Brock called out Mudkip and Max found Corphish's Pokéball. Brock started swimming after Ash, while Mudkip and Corphish helped Max and May travel through the choppy waters. May swallowed some of the water and immedietely spat it out. Definitely salt water. Thankfully, land was soon in sight. By the time May and Max were on shore, Brock was kneeling on the beach, panting slightly. Ash, equally exhausted, was driven on by his need to save Pikachu. He reached for his Pokéballs, but discovered to his dismay that he had left them in his backpack at the campsite. He continued calling out his electric Pokémon's name, though there was prctically nothing he could do to save it.

Once May was dried off, she was ready to get to work. "Let's go, Bulbasaur!" May shouted, throwing a Pokéball. Out popped a blue-green Pokémon holding a flower. "Razor Leaf!" Bulbasaur let loose an incredibly sharp leaf that cut through the spring holding Pikachu captive. This caused Pikachu to fall out of the balloon and straight into Ash's arms. They tumbled down a small hill and into a small pocket of earth shaped to easily fit a person lying down.

"Okay, Pikachu," he said, releasing his electric buddy from the glove it had been held captive in. "Thunderbolt!" Pikachu complied, and the Meowt balloon exploded with a bit more of an impact than normal, sending Team Rocket flying.

"Look's like Team Rocket's blasting off again!"

"Great job, buddy," Ash said, rubbing Pikachu's fur. He looked back towards the top of a small hill, on which May and Bulbasaur were standing. "You guys did good, too!" Ash shouted to them. May seemed to have not heard Ash, because she continued to look around, as if she was searching for someone. Soon Brock and Max joined her on the hill. She talked to them, and they began looking as well, all thoughts of sleep forgotten.

"I guess they can't see us," Ash noted. He turned around. "Well, we could always go into the town over there, Pikachu," he said, pointing towards the lights up ahead. "They might have a Pokémon Center we can spend the night in and we can wait for Brock and the others to find us there. It's better then spending a night out in the cold..." He looked down at his yellow mouse Pokémon friend. "What'd'ya say, Pikachu?"

"Pika pika!"

"Well, lets go!" The Pokémon and trainer headed off into the night, hoping to find some shelter at a familiar place.

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Hope you enjoyed the first chapter! Please comment! Later!

Edit: So sue me! I wanted this to be as accurate as possible, and there is no grass gym in the Hoenn League!

Second Edit: So sue me again! Same thing as above, and there are two Mossdeep gym leaders. There would be, just to torture me...

Third Edit: My gosh, am I a perfectionist or what?! Well, I hope this chapter will make more sense tied in with the rest of the story now...I'll change some parts of the other chapters soon...

Fourth Edit: For crying out loud...! *sighs* I cannot escape the confines of my perfectionism, can I...? Oh, well, Corphish is spelled right now.

Fifth Edit: Well, here's another few changes...Sootopolis is a city, I now know, so...
 
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Mistystar89

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Despite the few spelling errors, gladdecease, this story is great! I like how it goes. It sounds awesome so far! Like Breezy said, it does wanna make you keep reading because it's exciting. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for Chapter 2! ^_~

Mistystar89
 
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Kobrelaire

Guest
not bad at all... somewhat like the TV, even though I totally despise Team Rocket.

*Roooaaar! I am the all mighty Kobrelaire!*
 

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
Ooh...so this is what getting reviews feels like!

Glad you like it so far...

Hope you aren't incredibly confused by the title, but it will come into the story eventually...

I might be able to get the next chapter up by Sunday...

A big thanks to all readers! If you like my stories, I have others here you can read...

Later!
 
Wicked sweet story ya got here, Gladdecase!

What I don't get is why Ash won't say Misty... probably a part of the plot, right?

Keep up the good work!
 
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gladdecease

Master Coordinator
Well, you asked for it...and here it is! Chapter 2 of...

Sootopolis - City of Love​

In case any readers are wondering, this is a list of Pikatalk translations:

Pikapi=Ash
Pikacha=Brock
Pichupi=May
Pichapi=Max
Pikachupi=well...someone else...
Pipipi=another mystery...
Pipika=a third unknown​

Enjoy, and please review!


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Ash opened his eyes, then immediately shut them again, squinting against the light. At first, he couldn’t remember where he was, but it suddenly came back to him.

Team Rocket.

Getting separated.

Coming here, to the Pokémon Center.

Getting a room.

And, most recently, going to sleep.

Slowly, the black haired teen opened his eyes again, rubbing the exhaustion from them. He sat up and looked around. “Pikachu?” He asked the room.

“Pikapi!” A yellow Pokémon cried, jumping onto Ash’s bed. Ash smiled.

“Have Brock and the others come yet?” Pikachu’s smile turned down.

“Pikacha pi Pichupi pi Pichapi chu pi ka, Pikapi.” Then Pikachu brightened. “Pi, Pikapi, pi chu cha ka chu...”

“Someone else? Who else do we know in Hoenn?” Pikachu seemed too excited to answer. Instead, it prodded Ash’s back, forcing him out of bed. Then it nudged him towards his backpack, opened it up, and pushed Ash’s clothes towards him. Ash laughed at Pikachu’s over-eagerness.

“Okay, Pikachu, okay! I’ll get dressed! Just as long as you don’t Thunderbolt me...” Ash trailed off. Pikachu got a glint of mischief in its eyes. Ash’s eyes, on the other hand, widened with fear. “You couldn’t...” he started. “You wouldn’t...AAGH!!” Apparently, Pikachu could, and would.

A few minutes later, Ash stumbled out of the room, fully dressed, but slightly charred. He handed Nurse Joy the key, and asked her to keep a lookout for Brock, Max, and May. With Pikachu leading the way, the duo headed out the door, down one street, up the next, and made a left so they were right in front of a large building. Ash looked down at Pikachu.

This is where the person we know is?” He asked, unsure. Pikachu shook its head in the affirmative, they continued inside. To Ash’s surprise, the building was actually a gym.

“Pikachu...did you trick me and bring me here just so we could have a gym battle together, only one Pokémon on our team?” Pikachu shook its head. “No? But this gym doesn’t seem familiar...” Pikachu shook its head again, but this time in frustration.

“Pi ka chu, Pikapi!” It shouted, running into the main arena. Ash followed through the double doors, and stood still, right in the doorway. This place...was amazing! It had three different battlefields; a water, an ice, and a normal one, all regulation sized and in perfect condition.

“Water fields...?” Ash suddenly realized. “This must be the Sootopolis Gym! How’d we get here so fast, Pikachu? I thought it would take us days to get here, not a quick run and swim late at night.” Ash noticed Pikachu was no longer in front of him. He quickly looked around the room, and saw a yellow splotch in the water field. He sighed. “Come on, Pikachu, there’s no time for a swim...” He approached the field, when he noticed there weren’t one, but two yellow Pokémon in it. “What...?” Ash wondered aloud. Pikachu lifted its head and noticed Ash.

“Pikapi! Pi! Ka Pipika cha chu!” It called, waving Ash over. Ash came over, wanting an explanation, when the other Pokémon turned around.

“Psy yai yai? Duck.” A Psyduck said, getting out of the water. It took off its water wings, and looked at Ash. Pikachu jumped out of the water and stood next to the Psyduck.

“Pipika, pi chu Pikapi.” Pikachu said to the confused duck Pokémon.

“Psy yai psy?” Psyduck queried. Pikachu nodded, then gestured towards the Psyduck.

“Pikapi, pi ka Pikachupi Pipika.” Ash’s eyes widened again.

She’s here?!” He exclaimed.

“Pika.”

“I can’t see her now! Not yet!” Quick as Pikachu's agility, Ash grabbed Pikachu around the middle and raced out of the room.

“Psy yai yai. Duck.” Psyduck called out in a short good-bye.

“Who were you talking to, Psyduck?” A feminine voice asked.

“Psy? Duck.” Psyduck commented, holding its head in its hands. The red-haired girl sighed, coming into the room.

“I could’ve sworn I heard someone in here, besides you, Psyduck.” She dove into the water field.

“...I must be imagining things...”

Abruptly, her comment was interrupted by a loud “CHU,” a burst of light from out in the hall, and a familiar cry of pain.

“...or not...”

“I know that voice,” the girl said softly. She quietly slipped out of the pool and started moving towards the double doors. About to open them, she heard that familiar voice speak.

“...I just can’t talk to her yet, Pikachu.”

“Pika, Pikapi. Pi pika chu Pikachupi pi Pipika pi Pipipi! PIKACHU!” The boy talking to the Pikachu was illuminated in the burst of light that came when the Thundershock hit him.

“Ow...fine, I’ll tell you why, if you’re going to get so violent.” The Pikachu’s cheeks continued to spark as a warning. “I promised myself when she left, that before I talked to her next, I would understand what that handkerchief meant.”

“Pika, Pikapi - ”

“Let me finish, Pikachu. I wanted to be able to respond to whatever it had meant...and you know how well I understand it now. I can’t talk to her until I know what that handkerchief meant!” As the boy and Pikachu walked off, the girl smiled. Such a noble thought, for such a dense teen. She went back into the pool and swam a few laps, finally just floating on her back, drifting across the pool.

“Psy...duck?” The girl chuckled, merriment and slight impatience reflected in her blue-green eyes.

“Psyduck, return.” She held out a Pokéball, and Psyduck disappeared inside of it, leaving the girl to her thoughts.

"It’s not like you, like, have anything else to do, li’l sis..."

"Yeah. That, like, boyfriend of yours is already gone, so you, like, have no reason to not go where we say..."

"How many times must I tell you? He’s
not my boyfriend! And I’m not going to Sootopolis City!"

"Like, sure you’re not, Misty..."

"Yeah, you’re going to go help Wallace!"

"He can use your help..."

"What’s this? The Sensational Cerulean Sisters saying the runt is useful?"

"We wouldn’t have, like, trusted the gym to anyone else..."


“Maybe they should have...” Misty muttered. Psyduck popped out of its Pokéball and tilted its head to one side.

“Psy? Psy duck.” It said.

“No, Psyduck, I’m alright.” She said reassuringly. As she was talking, a small yellow and white Pokémon waddled into the room, trilling and waving its arms from side to side.

“Toge toge priii!” It said. Misty pulled herself onto the side of the pool and smiled at the antics of the baby Pokémon.

“Everything alright, Togepi?” Togepi suddenly looked sad, which was a change for the happy little Pokémon. “What’s wrong?”

“[I’ve been called for...]”

“Called for?”

“[By the supreme Togetic.]”

“A supreme Togetic?”

“[Apparently, my help is needed...and I must go immediately...]” Misty’s face fell, as she understood.

“I see. And I can’t leave the Sootopolis Gym...not until Wallace doesn’t need my help anymore...and I don’t know how long that will take...well, if you must go...”

“[...and I must...]”

“Then go. But, hey,” Misty said, trying to lighten the moment. “If you ever want to talk, you know where to find me.” Togepi smiled.

“[I guess so...and I guess this is good-bye...]” Togepi prepared to Teleport, but Misty stopped it.

“Hold on just one second, Togepi.” She tossed a few Pokéballs. Out came Goldeen, Gyarados, Staryu, Starmie, and Horsea. “You have to say good-bye to everyone before you go. It’d be rude not to.” Togepi smiled slightly.

“[Very well.]” Togepi did so, some of the others getting a bit emotional about their baby Pokémon friend leaving them at last. Then, it was time for Togepi to leave. “[I’m sorry, but this can’t wait any longer...]” With that, Togepi teleported out of the room, and out of Misty’s life.

Little did she know, she would be seeing her egg sooner than she could ever have imagined...

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Well, that was an evil foreshadowy cliffhanger. Oh, well. Hope you like it! Later!

Edit: Well...not very many changes to this chapter...hope you like 'em!
 
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NO! NO! NOT THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:( That was an evil thing to do...

:D But I'll get over it...

Keep up le good work!!

Toodles ye good folk...!
 
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Kobrelaire

Guest
*Nods twice*

LIke it, dont like chiffhangers. Ughh...

*Roar! grrr... snarls... meow?*
 
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mistyflower

Guest
This Is The Best Story Ever!! Im A Pokeshipper To The Max! Never Stop Writing These! Im Dying To Know What Comes Next!!!! :)
 

Akane

Well-Known Member
Aw man. You left it as a chiffhanger? NOOO!! Oh well, this is so good. Please continue this. It feels like I am watching a epsiode. I so looking foward to chapter 3. Keep up the great work!
 
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mistyflower

Guest
how do you rank up your trainer level? i want to get to cascade...
embarrassing...
 
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HydraCores

Guest
Wow, normally I prefer fanfics with mroe description, but this ranks up there with other "dialogue-heavy" fics that I REALLY enjoy (such as Legends of Hoenn and Legacy of a Master).

Keep up the good work, it's important to use your own style and I can tell you your style works great!
 

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
mistyflower said:
how do you rank up your trainer level? i want to get to cascade...
Not sure how they do it, but after a certain number of posts, you become a Boulder Trainer, then a Cascade Trainer, then...eventually you become a champion of Kanto or Johto or something, then you become a Coordinator, then a really good Coordinator, then a Breeder, then a really good Breeder, then...I dunno...

Anyhoo...the next chapter is coming along...for anyone that wants to know, I shall be trying to add more description about Wallace based on the information in the manga section of serebii.net...and I am attempting to describe a contest scene or two, and a battle or two!

*wipes sweat off forehead*and I'm doing all this stuff at 2 am in the morning, I might add...I'll never get my sleep schedule back to normal before school starts...

Glad ya like it! Later!
 

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
Aaah!!! I need help!!!

Should any of the following people have new/evolved Pokémon?

a: Ash

b: Brock

c: James

d: Jessie

If so, what Pokémon? [I'm basing all current desicions on what Pokémon they have now in Japan, so don't mention any already evolved in Japan]

Also, what Pokémon should Wallace have?

a: Seaking ;119;

b: Sealeo ;364;

c: Whiscash ;340;

d: Huntail ;367;

Any besides these? Please let me know asap...or writer's block will control me for life!
 
Hmm...

I think that Brock should get a Feebas, and should evolve Mudkip into a Marshtomp...

And maybe James should catch a Mawile...

And perhaps Wallace should have a...

Golduck
Milotic
Whiscash
Gorebyss
Glalie
Azurill (who keeps evolving) or a...
???

That's all... for now...
 
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Sapir_Johar

Guest
Oooh, I like this story. I'm glad Ash is thinking about what that handkerchief means and I think it's a good idea to realize it for himself before he talks to her. That way he knows what to say. I can't wait to see what happens next. Uh, I don't know about the question you had but I think Wallace has a Milotic.
 
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Kobrelaire

Guest
yeah, I was going to say Wallace had a Milotic, but i also think he should have a seaking. Since TR hardly trains on anything but Ash's pokemon, I don't think their's should evolve, but maybe they should get new pokemon instead? I think Ash or Misty should have evolved pokemon, being the main characters
 
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Kris Bambii

Guest
This story is realy good! I am SO gonna keep reading. I was waiting for someone to write this since so many people on the ps thread were always talking about this topic in the old one. Anywayz, gotta jet.

~Kris~
 

xsweet_peax

+kiss of an angel+
o wow! I like this story..its good. You are good. However, I hope you dont move the story too fast. I love story that sticks to the anime and isnt so "I LOVE YOU ASH...I LOVE YOU TOO MISTY *kiss kiss*". I mean thats one of the moving too fast that I really really hate. I mean they will NEVER do that on the show..at least I really hope they wont. So I hope you will stick it to the anime and do the things that they will do...like blushing and getting jealous and caring if the others are hurt or something. Those stuff are what makes the story really good...that shows us readers that the two really care about each other but wont admit it and stuff. I LOVE them kind of stories and I hope you make it like that XDD
 
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