SoulGuardian's Revamps!

[SoulGuardian]

These are my first revamps so tell me if they're good or not.

GSC Cooltrainer Male Revamp:
[url=http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gfiojq6.png]Coolboy[/URL]

GSC Supernerd revamp:
[url=http://img452.imageshack.us/my.php?image=huai8.png]Smarty[/URL]
More to come!

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

the "coolboy" looks like he need more shadow and/or highlights in his clothes... they look flat

its good though

 

[SoulGuardian]

the "coolboy" looks like he need more shadow and/or highlights in his clothes... they look flat

its good though

Stand up and look at it, then it won't look so flat.

 

[Prime Wolf]

Not much shading, and it looks rushed, but keep practising and you will get it

 

[SoulGuardian]

Not much shading, and it looks rushed, but keep practising and you will get it

Like I said, stand up and look at it. I shaded it ALOT.

 

[dragonmaster_jonathan]

if you cant take criticism, then dont show us your sprites... all we're saying is shade it some more

 

[SoulGuardian]

if you cant take criticism, then dont show us your sprites... all we're saying is shade it some more

I can take your critism. Sorry if I was acting n00by before...I will shade more.

 

[Prime Wolf]

Like I said, stand up and look at it. I shaded it ALOT.

Im sorry, but standing up wont help Im not trying to be mean, but it hasnt got much shading, and the little shading you did, it isnt great.

Maybe a little more shading will do.

 

[SoulGuardian]

I told dragonmaster that I will shade more. I understand now.

 

[Prime Wolf]

I told dragonmaster that I will shade more. I understand now.

Sorry but by the time i posted it, he had posted, sorry about that

But it would look great with extra shading.

 

[SoulGuardian]

Sorry but by the time i posted it, he had posted, sorry about that

But it would look great with extra shading.

I don't feel like reshading that one right now but if I make a new one I will shade alot. Thanks for the advice guys!

 

[SoulGuardian]

I made a new revamp!

 

[Zahro]

They are too pillow shaded, and the outline is too dark. You should also use more colours. The shading is indeed not good.

 

[SoulGuardian]

They are too pillow shaded, and the outline is too dark. You should also use more colours. The shading is indeed not good.

I think I need help with shading...Also, I didn't really like this one either...

 

[Zahro]

I am talking about both of them.
And there are enough tutorials here so, go ahead. And you'd better start with revamping Pokemon, not trainers. They are more easy.

 

[RisenJade DragonKnightGT]

They both are very flat.I don't want to stand up and get out of my chair lol.Either way you look at it.It's still flat because you pillow shaded it by just following up on the outline.Almost all of the shading you did is 1 pixel thick.