Gamzee Makara
Flirtin' With Disaster
D.R.O.N.E.:Art isn't my specialty. But I'll bloody try...ACTIVATING "HAIKUGENERATOR.EXE"!
6 (positive message) > 8 (an emotive piece) > 4 and 7 (imaginative) > 1 > 5 > 3 (typism isn't nice) > 2 (too on the nose)
#7: Gloriously poetic, excellent vocabulary
#1: Pretty accurate, and relatively well put together
#5: Similarly well put together and accurate; I'd probably rank this and #1 equally, if that's an option
#4: Probably the best lyric-wise, but loses quite a few points for missing a syllable in the final line
#8: On the salty side (though I don't blame you), and a bit inaccurate taxonomically, but gets points for blowing my mind regarding Rotiart's name origin
#6: A bit vague, and hard to read
#3: Saltier than #8
#2: Painfully basic in terms of content; not interesting or imaginative at all
]from worst to best: #2 -> #6 -> #5 -> #7 -> #1 -> #3 -> #4 -> #8
Snowball: Backpedaling. Now you're an even bigger coward!Tara: I was talking about my haiku being shitty. Not yours. Brian
Tara: WHAT??! I actually was calling out my own shitty haiku! Brian's Haiku is great!Snowball: Backpedaling. Now you're an even bigger coward!