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Sprite Village adventures

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PikaPika

Guest
Welcome to this intresting little somewhat comedic thread! This is my first comic, so it may not be all that good.


Welcome! (comic 1)

Comic 2
Comic 3
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Specials:
 
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Kal-El

Mush! Mush!
That wasn't terribly funny, the background (Yes it has a "g") was just persistant too much and trying to read the writing on blue was difficult. But if you keep at it you will do better.

Is that the Pikachu from "Hey You, Pikachu!"?
 
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PikaPika

Guest
Yeah, I think so. For some reason I'm no good at being funny when I try to be, but when I talking seriosly to people, they think I'm hilarious. Anyways, I'm still getting used to Photoshop.
 
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jellsprout

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Comic 1: The background colours are awfull, the sun/moon is constantly changing, you can't read the text very well and the humor isn't funny.

Comic 2: The Pikachu is talking to Birch while Pikachu is facing the other direction, the comic is all blurry and the humor is again not very funny. Atleast you have text bubbles now.

Try to save the comics as PNG instead of GIF.
 
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PikaPika

Guest
jellsprout said:
Comic 1: The background colours are awfull, the sun/moon is constantly changing, you can't read the text very well and the humor isn't funny.

Comic 2: The Pikachu is talking to Birch while Pikachu is facing the other direction, the comic is all blurry and the humor is again not very funny. Atleast you have text bubbles now.

Try to save the comics as PNG instead of GIF.
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Okay, like I said, I'm new at this, so I just have a basic idea of what I'm doing. Whhen I get better, these ones will be remade.
 
K

Kal-El

Mush! Mush!
PikaPika said:
Yeah, I think so. For some reason I'm no good at being funny when I try to be, but when I talking seriosly to people, they think I'm hilarious. Anyways, I'm still getting used to Photoshop.
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Sprite Comics, believe it or not, work better in normal Paint. >>

The second one was just - weird, too blurry too. And it looked like when you copied the May sprite you forgot to get rid of the white.
 
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PikaPika

Guest
Jesus Freak Josh said:
Sprite Comics, believe it or not, work better in normal Paint. >>

The second one was just - weird, too blurry too. And it looked like when you copied the May sprite you forgot to get rid of the white.
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I tried to get the last frame less blurry, and I tried my best. You should have seen it before, when it was a LOT blurrier... :D But the others should be up soon, I have found a good source for Brendon (SP?) Sprites.

Edit: I got it done! Now to post it... It's much, much better this time.
 
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