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Sprites, From a Dragon?

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dragonzrule

<- Currently Hunting
I want to set a goal for this thread. I want to create sprites that not only have a good concept, but also are fun to look at, have great colors, and look freaking sweet.

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( http://www2.istockphoto.com/file_thu...ny-glasses.jpg )
The Groucho Pokemon

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The High Soaring Pokemon

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The Microscopic Pokemon

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The Rebirth Pokemon

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The Destruction Pokemon
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Thankyou for coming, the thread should grow rapidly (hopefully).
 
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Atari

Atari

Did it on 'em
With only one sprite to look at, there's not much for people to comment on. :/

What is this sprite's name, if it has one? What are some specifications of it? Grass Clown doesn't much describe anything, and by looking at it I can't quite tell what it is.
 
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thedudemister

Dood!
dragonzrule said:
Its supposed to look goofy, its a clown pokemon. :p
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Ohh, ok. So that is your plan with all of them I assume. The new one looks even better. ^^ What the things on his chin? You should put up where the idea of the Pokemon came from in the first post.
 
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Rapid Distortion!

Amateur Philosopher
Alright. Want some legit crit? Too bad, I don't care. You're gettin it.

Grass Clown- What? No. If your goal for this thread is sprites that are "fun to look at", this guy just made you fail that goal. He's horribly ugly, reminds me more of a drug addict than a clown. Someone already mentioned his nose, and you should listen. Its gross. Clown noses are red balls, not droopy brown-orange sausages. Love the rest of his body structure, very nice idea with the hair tufts. His eyes... please, please change the color. Gross once again. Blue or something, if he's a clown. and give his some damned happy clown makeup.

High Soaring- Awesome. Wicked. I really like this guy. I'll find some stuff to fix for ya. Okay, for the angle that his eyes are aimed at, his wings have been given way too much of an angle. The left one (when we look at it) is far too small. Also, feathers on the bigger wing (especially the end of it) look awkward. The one deep break in them might be the cause, or the strangely askew tips of all of them. Love the hanging banner things, but the Left one has problems. They're flat, right? So why doe that one look kinda rounded? If you make it from the side like I kinda see it, fix the thickness of it. The curve on the left/bottom side of it is too perfect a curve, I think thats what I'm trying to get at. And it tapers from small to wayyy to wide. Other than that, great work on him.

Really love your type markers, look super sweet. Another thing- Lots of people like making flying a first type rather than second, but if he's gonna have flying first, take away the normal please. Very good work on everything, hope to see more soon man.

EDIT: Found one other thing, on the flying type tag, it doesn't have a capital F. that's annoying :p
 
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dragonzrule

<- Currently Hunting
The "clown" isn't supposed to be a clown anymore. I forgot to change the description. Its based off of Groucho Marx. Its supposed to look weird. I will consider changing the eye color though.

I fixed the bird's wings and things. The left banner is curled up because its flying. That's why it looks that way.

I greatly appreciate such great crit, you are welcome to my thread anytime.
 
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Massa

Active Member
I LOVE THE MARX BROTHERS

I think if you don't want people to keep commenting on the nose, you'll probably need to add your source material to the first post. I'm not sure there is quite enough information to make it too obvious it's based off him-you might give it a pseudo-stache and dark eye markings to represent the glasses. Other than that, I think it's very unique. Are you planning on making pokemon based off of Harpo and Chico?

I agree with Rapid Distorition! that you need to change the lowercase 'f' to a capital, it's a bit distracting.
 
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the1stpkmnfan

Your Big Buff Bro
The High Soaring Pokemon looks awesome! I think it could fit in perfectly in a Pkmn game.

Though, I was expecting I'd be like a Flying/Psychic type. But hey, it's your sprite, and it's still cool.
 
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gtab x3

Well-Known Member
The Doom pokemon looks rather neat and clean, i like it, but the head is bothering me, if you know what i mean
 
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dragonzrule

<- Currently Hunting
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The Destruction Pokemon

Destruction/fire part of trio. This one is attack orientated.

I changed doom to rebirth because ice seemed peaceful. It is sp.attack orientated.

Electric is last on the list.
 
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dragonzrule

<- Currently Hunting
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The Microscopic Pokemon

Ok, I made a pokemon based on a cell. Decided to make it part psychic because of the nucleus. I'm trying to work out a position for the electric part of the trio. Should come soon.
 
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Pika-Freaka

Active Member
I like your sprites a lot, even though the nose on Groucho looks awkward. I know what it is supposed to look like and it does a lot, but it is still bothering me. Also, as other people said, you need to capitalize your ''Fs'' in fire and flying. Other than that, good job.
 
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