Sprites + Hazy = Your Opinions!

[Kinginsoar]

Yes, another sprite thread from me. My other one was around 7 pages long anyway, and I think it died since I haven'tposted on it in a while. Anyway, tell me what you think of my newer sprites.

Trainers:



The 1st two might be the starters for my friend's fangame.

I'll make more later. C&C please.

 

[blazikenBAM]

they're pretty good. i prefer the guy over the girl. to me the girl's expression is strange. the pose she's in seems kinda whimsical, and her expression is serious. maybe make her expression match her pose more..?

but that's just my opinion
good work

 

[Magne-2000lbs.]

your sprites are pretty good! The girl's pose doesn't seem realistic though, but it is pretty cool

 

[-aocom v2-]

The girl's arm looks a tad thick and not long enough. what's going on with the boy's right leg? Its all... wiggly. o-o; I like the color scheme, just a few flaws; fix those up and you'll be fine.

 

[Phillyboomerangs]

not scratches but ok recolor

 

[Chaotic Pink]

The girls pose looks a little too rigid, she appears as if she's leaning on something.

 

[¤Umbreon¤]

I like the colors and shading, it's just the girls arm that disturbs me.

 

[Kinginsoar]

I made a gay youngster.



Improved.

 

[-Espacio-]

Hey Hazy A new thread, cool. The trainers are awesome, the girl is my favorite. And teh gay youngster is kinda bad but kinda good. Make the starters soon

 

[D-Man]

GAY youngster, hmm good idea, but people could get you wrong :S

 

[kuro mizu]

maybe i should suggest not using black lines. I think theyre a turn off on a sprite.

other than the black outlines, theyre pretty good. Nothing special (yet), so I'd like to see more.

:3

 

[Kinginsoar]

You need black outline. Everyone has it.

Introsucing, Ms. Crappy, the ugly pre teen!