Spritingness from me!

[Polursine]

NEW

MIXES/Recolours:
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1112/mixesrecolours7lg.png
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1492/mixes8db.png
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1927/mixesrecolours26ip.png
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/7228/mixesrecolours39lr.png
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/2748/sprites3wd.png
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8360/mixes2xd.png
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/3083/awesome3rw.png
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/6186/new0lq.png
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/3631/lot6uh.png

Fakemons:

Chaos

Pixal Overs
Glalie: http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3372/glalie1pd.png
Metagross:http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1620/metagross2ic.png
Meowth: http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6360/meowth5yd.png
Murkrow:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/339/murkrow7hz.png
Regirock: http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/9498/regirockintro4cu.png
Cacturne: http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/3385/cacturne8vn.png
Claydol: http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/6968/claydol4hs.png
Metang:http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/49/metang9eg.png
Electebuzz: http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/7160/electebuzz2tu.png
Grovyle: http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/3461/grovyle2jx.png
Aggron: http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2383/aggron0yb.png
Skitty: http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/622/skitty24sc.png
Sceptile: http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9416/sceptile2xg.png

Torgan
Torgan Map: http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/5017/torganmap4iw.png
Freshwood Town: http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/5899/1freshwoodtown2yr.png
Route 1: http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/4253/2route16za.png
Route 2: http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/2468/3route22mw.png
Maowe Town: http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5528/4maowetown8in.png
Route 3: http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5617/5route34er.png
Bouk Town: http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/4636/6bouktown1hs.png


This is all the Pokemon stuff I've ever done, but I have my fake region that I'm working on it.

Knock yourselves out! How do you like them?

 

[Magical Trevor]

your first try at the revamps was good. The second try on the mixes were better. the rest were crap

 

[dragonfangirl]

The revamps have a black outline you must recoller it too. The second mixes are much better than the firts.

 

[Nevermore]

it would be better if we didn't have to click all the links, if we could just see them. i don't know if it is the same for image shack as it is for photobucket, but try it anyway. put

after, we should see them. ok, i know mixes best, so i will crit the second lot of mixes.
crobat one: the horns are far too big, you should try to make them smaller. the feet do not look attached, look at eh foot on the left how ti sticks out. dragonite: the wing on the left looks wierd, either re-angle it or use the other wing again for that side. also, the tail end looks odd. you should try to make the tail a little thinner so it would look like it fits better.
houndoom: the tail, there is a line between the tail and body that shouldn't be there. remove it or change it to outline the leg better. the horns need to be placed further in on it's head, too.
fearow: the hat should be facing the other direction, and it needs more murkrow. make the beak and legs yellow, like murkrow, and give it murkrow tail.
you have real potential, keep it up!

 

[miken park]

The revamps should be reshaded and the outline should be redone with colours.

 

[Polursine]

it would be better if we didn't have to click all the links, if we could just see them. i don't know if it is the same for image shack as it is for photobucket, but try it anyway. put

after, we should see them. ok, i know mixes best, so i will crit the second lot of mixes.
crobat one: the horns are far too big, you should try to make them smaller. the feet do not look attached, look at eh foot on the left how ti sticks out. dragonite: the wing on the left looks wierd, either re-angle it or use the other wing again for that side. also, the tail end looks odd. you should try to make the tail a little thinner so it would look like it fits better.
houndoom: the tail, there is a line between the tail and body that shouldn't be there. remove it or change it to outline the leg better. the horns need to be placed further in on it's head, too.
fearow: the hat should be facing the other direction, and it needs more murkrow. make the beak and legs yellow, like murkrow, and give it murkrow tail.
you have real potential, keep it up!

Crobat: fixed
Dragonite: fixed, except tail
Houndoom: fixed, except horns
Fearow: That's how I wanted it to look. Its my fakie evolution for Murkrow; Vulkrow! I realised Fearow was the perfect substitute for the change.

IMG tags dont seem to work...

 

[Neopolis]

Revamps need more shading and outline shading too.

Mixes are deformed... Second wave was OK though.

 

[Nevermore]

the horns still look really big and out of place... do you want me to make some smaller horns that you can put on it?

 

[Polursine]

Update: Mixes and Recolors

 

[Koneko]

The first revamps need a colored outline, take a look at the original sprite for help.
The first mixes seem a little off to me they don't apper to be colored the same as the rest of the peaces (little blending)
The second revamps are kinda meh, the Ho-ho looks good though
The second mixes KM_returns all reddy covered those verry well and with your added changes they look good, but the houndoom/kingdra still looks a little off to me, I just cant put my finger on it.
The new stuff is pritty good, I'm not going to nit-pick abot it it's about this form's average

 

[Nevermore]

when you ahve new stuff, post it as well as putting it in the first bit so that the topic gets bumped to the first page again.
the new mixes are your best yet, you're really improving the fastest i've seen yet. you're very good now, how long have you been spriting for?
sealeo: the whiskers look wierd. you shouldn't ahve them sticking in the air like that, ahve them sideways.
ampharos: only one wing, you should put the other wing on. also, the claws, since there is a line between the wrist area and the arm on each one, they look like they're just fancy oven gloves... take away the line, and put the other wing pon. you should move the current wing over to the right more, too, it looks like it's coming out of the middle of it's back.
ryhorn: this is pretty good. i think you should take away the ryhorn horn because it looks wierd with both types of horn on it.
girafarig: this one is pretty good too. one thing: when mixing, it will always look better if you use the colours of the pokemon that you used least of, in this case, recolouring the yellow of gifrafarig to the cream of ponyta.
jigglypuff: this one is just about perfect, best yet. remember when mixing though, new shadows are created, there should be a darker shade just underneath the flower.
espeon: great recolour. no improvements needed.
umbreon: where there used to be a ring on it's ear, there is a darker patch where it should be light. also, the darkest shade on the body, that's an outline colour, right? it loks really blue. you should find a colour to replace thta, a darker purple.
bayleaf: this is an interesting one. well, there are some patches pon the leg furthest to the right which are far too dark. if there is no colout to replace that, find one or make one. apart from that, great.
quagsire: it's mouth and nostrils are still blue. also, i think you should recolour the back patches to be whitle, like it's face. the bag it is holding under it's arm... it's ok like it is, but if this were to be a really great mix, you must make it like delibird. the delibird's sack is it's tail. try taking away the tail and amking a scratch one.
much better, though, keep it up!

 

[Polursine]

1) Sealeo: The whiskers look better that way, I just tried to out themoutways; looks bad.
2) Ampharos: Fixed
3) Rhyorn: fixed
4) Girafarig: Fixed
5) Jigglypuff: Fixed
6) Espeon: no need
7) Umbreon: fixed
8) Bayleef: Fixed. How did I miss them?!
9) Quagsire: Fixed. Looks weird though.

I have been spriting (pokemon) for a short time now, but before that I have created my own region using the Routes+cities of the R/S/E game; but they're heavily editted. That I started some time last year and haven't ouched since then.
Go to http://firebirdsnest.redirectme.net/index.php?showtopic=660&st=0&#last to see the "Torgan" overworld sprites. [I'm lazy not to upload them here. I'm cautious!]

 

[Polursine]

NEW: Mixes and Recolours2! Check 'em out!

 

[Electabuzz]

Hmm. I'm not going to comment on each individual sprite, as KM did, but I will make some general statements.
-Make sure, when mixing, to not flip parts, because it doesn't look natural. If you must, make sure to reshade, so that there's a consistent shading.
-Define a light source, and from there, make sure to shade accordingly. Your revamps are very flat.
-Black outlines aren't fun - so don't use them. Try to shade your outlines as well as the sprite itself.
-Try not to cut and paste so much, and instead, make your own custom parts.

These are just some basic pointers. If you keep listening to advice, you'll definetly improve. Keep it up!

 

[Nevermore]

krabby: never jsut shrink something, it completely screws up the outline and shading on ti, killing the sprite. you should shrink it to fit, then fix the outlines and patterns on it.
pidgeoto: gotta love that one. great job.
graveller: a good idea, but you should make the hands match, all wearing gloves.
vileplume: also good in principle, but doesn't seem marril enough. try making the flower white, and the body blue with a white belly like marril.
kingler: original, well made. good job.
sharpedo: this jsut looks unnatural. mixes like this are very hard to pull off. if you want to mix a big bulky pokemon with a smaller pokemon, it's usually a better idea to use the smaller one as a base.
ho oh thing: ok, nothing too special. you should recolour it's belly with ho oh colours too. maybe give it legs the colour of ho oh legs.
exxecutor: very origial idea, and done fairly well. if you wanted to make it a fantastic sprite, pattern the body like metal, like on the eyes.
seedot: the seems to be some problems with the outlining, other than that, fine.
octillary: great idea. one thing that could be done to it, put on it's head litlte bumps like on koffing.
shroomish: a little odd, but well done. great work.
kabutops: the claw furthest to the right looks wierd. you shouldn't have it sideways, it doesn't look right. the wing, you need to fix the dent in it. once those are done, that will be a very good sprite.
fairy thing: wing to the left, outline issues, looks like a chunk is missing. apart from that, great.
next one: the spike att eh top, some outline has been removed. the eye pupils look different sizes. tentacle to ther ight, outline removed.
oddish thing: the leaves are the worng way round,t hey face left while the body faces right.
lapras: the tail doesn't lok right at all like that, it had whit in the outline and conflicts with the position of the body and flippers. i think you should take away the tail and recolour it like aerodactyl, wiht a purpl belly.
ok... that took a while. you're getting much better, keep up the good work.

 

[Samayowa]

GOOD STUFF:
http://img398.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mixesrecolours0xu.png
Mixes and recolors

Mixes. Proper mixes

http://img93.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mixesrecolours28nz.png
Mixes and Recolours2

MEH:

Gold Revamps

Gold Revamps agian


BAD STUFF:

Mixes; Blascepert, Veriztiose, Felosium





This is all the Pokemon stuff I've ever done, but I have my fake region that I'm working on it.


Knock yourselves out! How do you like them?

tehe, you're sprites are really good, that is except for those last mixes but I still give you a 10/10.

 

[Polursine]

All fixed!

 

[Polursine]

The Hell with it! I'm taking requests! As I am running out of ideas!

 

[Electabuzz]

I say that you should take 'suggestions' because sometimes, it will turn into a request thread and it'll be moved/closed.

 

[Polursine]

Huh?......