Star Wars Empire Comic

[Gutsman]

i do not own star wars or any of its logos

here it is tell me what you think of curse its only the first one its only a preview actually im getting started on a manga langht one right now. http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c224/cobradude6666/starwarsempire.jpg

 

[Sindakwil]

Umm, this isn't good. You shouldn't use JPEGs. Try PNG. The ships don't match the background making them look VERY tacky. What happened to Darth Vader's TIE Fighter? It looks like part of it's flying off! Oh, and get some REAL explosions. Honestly, your special effects suck.

Sorry if I'm being harsh but this seriously needs work.