Steel Soul Plot
Our story begins in the world of Lekan.
Our hero is a girl named Lulu Gin.
Lekan was a mechanized world of cities filled with skyscrapers, however their ancient traditions still existed in this modern world.
Lulu belonged to a clan of demons.
They had the ability to control magnetism and gravity.
A man named Nenji Asuka was the president of the world.
He was a kind and benevolent leader, or so they thought.
Lulu had never fit in, in her family so she decided to join the military.
As she returned home after her training was completed she saw explosions coming from her town.
She rushed home to find her whole family dying.
She went to her mother’s side.
Her mom told her that a group of bandits came in told them they where now under their rule and that when they refused to submit they bombed the village.
Her mom gathered those still alive knowing they were all far to wounded to survive much longer.
They all gave the last of their strength to Lulu through an energy transfer spell.
Lulu’s mother gave her the sacred sword of their village and with her last breath simply said, “I love you.”
Lulu went back to the military base to get their help but they said they couldn’t for “confidential reasons”.
She then decided to get them herself.
When she found them she immediately attacked them, but during the fight the military intervened and came to the bandit’s side.
Lulu fled.
She was certain there was more to her family’s slaughter than meets the eye and thus decided to go straight to Nenji Asuka himself for answers.
When she reached the government building she stormed in, beat-up the entire security force, and busted straight into Asuka’s office.
She yelled at him, “What the hell were you thinking?! Killing my family like that you dirty *******!!!”
After staring at her for a bit he got up walked in front of his desk and pressed the speaker button.
He told his secretary to get the military commander in there immediately.
After about a minute a large bodybuilder-like man in a military uniform slowly walked into the room with his legs shacking.
Asuka simply said, “Why is this girl still alive?”
The commander simply muttered something under his breath.
Asuka grabbed him by the collar, pulled him right up to his face and screamed at him, “Why is she still alive you filthy groveling pile of ****?!!!”
The commander now shacking so much he could barley stand said,
“W-we we-we-weren’t able to kill her Mr. Nenji Asuka Sir… Eeep.”
“…Die.”
With that Asuka created a ball of lightning and electrocuted the commander, killing him.
After staring at the smoldering black mass that was once the commander Lulu managed to look at Asuka. She noticed a glowing mark on his forehead and yelled at him, “What’s that mark on your forehead?
” after waiting for a few minutes while Asuka stared at her she said, “I’ve seen it before on myself but I didn’t know what it was and whenever I asked about it no body would answer me.”
Asuka stood in shock at this after a while he looked at her again he examined her face very carefully and then started crying.
He managed to ask who her father was. She said.
“He abandoned our family after trying to kill my mother.”
Lulu then realized what was going on and slapped him.
She turned around and began to walk out.
Nenji put his hand on her shoulder and asked. “Would you join me? … I know I wronged you in the worst way, but actually I had thought you were dead. When I met your mother it was love at first sight but the elders of your clan said it would disgrace the clan if we had a relationship but we were far to in love to care. Thus we had you. Your mother said one day she didn’t know if we could take care of you and that with the villagers thinking of you as a symbol of disgrace and all it might just be best to end your life there. The next day you were gone and I found your mother crying. I thought she had killed you. In a blind rage I tried to kill her. She fled. I left in a deep depression. I see now she probably tried to but couldn’t bring herself to do it. I hired those bandits to avenge the death I thought you had gotten. So what do you think of me?"
“…What will happen to me now?”
“You’ll be executed.” Said a new voice in the room. “Both of you.”
It was coming from a very large man in a military uniform.
“I won’t let you hurt her!”
“You don’t have a choice!”
“Run.” No you don’t!!! “Who is this guy dad?”
“You just called me dad!”
“I’m still furious with you but this really isn’t the time for hard feelings. Now who is this guy?!”
“He’s the real ruler of this planet. He runs things backstage in the government.”
“Yes and your time has come Asuka!
” The mysterious man shot a stream of fire at Nenji but he dodged.
Nenji raised an electrical barrier.
He then performed the same spell the villagers used to give Lulu their energy.
He then called a big dragon to the window.
He gave her a note and told her to get on and that she should leave.
Since Nenji had performed the transfer spell his field was severely weakened.
The man broke it and as Lulu flew away the man killed Nenji. She then remembered the note she opened it.
It read,
Dear Lulu
Lulu, if you are reading this then it means I was wrong about your mother and that I’m now dead. I wrote this letter just in case you were still alive. I am sorry for all the trouble I caused you and your mother. Since I am now dead you are probably in danger too. You can find refuge at my family’s house. It is located at the top of Mouse Mountain.
Love Dad
When lulu reached the mountain she knocked on the door and an elderly woman answered.
Lulu told her, her story.
The woman allowed Lulu to live there Lulu lived there.
She had many adventures, met many, fought many, and learned much. That is the origin of Steel Soul.
The End
this one is number two. it was designed for an older audience than my first one obviously from the swearing. please critique.
Our story begins in the world of Lekan.
Our hero is a girl named Lulu Gin.
Lekan was a mechanized world of cities filled with skyscrapers, however their ancient traditions still existed in this modern world.
Lulu belonged to a clan of demons.
They had the ability to control magnetism and gravity.
A man named Nenji Asuka was the president of the world.
He was a kind and benevolent leader, or so they thought.
Lulu had never fit in, in her family so she decided to join the military.
As she returned home after her training was completed she saw explosions coming from her town.
She rushed home to find her whole family dying.
She went to her mother’s side.
Her mom told her that a group of bandits came in told them they where now under their rule and that when they refused to submit they bombed the village.
Her mom gathered those still alive knowing they were all far to wounded to survive much longer.
They all gave the last of their strength to Lulu through an energy transfer spell.
Lulu’s mother gave her the sacred sword of their village and with her last breath simply said, “I love you.”
Lulu went back to the military base to get their help but they said they couldn’t for “confidential reasons”.
She then decided to get them herself.
When she found them she immediately attacked them, but during the fight the military intervened and came to the bandit’s side.
Lulu fled.
She was certain there was more to her family’s slaughter than meets the eye and thus decided to go straight to Nenji Asuka himself for answers.
When she reached the government building she stormed in, beat-up the entire security force, and busted straight into Asuka’s office.
She yelled at him, “What the hell were you thinking?! Killing my family like that you dirty *******!!!”
After staring at her for a bit he got up walked in front of his desk and pressed the speaker button.
He told his secretary to get the military commander in there immediately.
After about a minute a large bodybuilder-like man in a military uniform slowly walked into the room with his legs shacking.
Asuka simply said, “Why is this girl still alive?”
The commander simply muttered something under his breath.
Asuka grabbed him by the collar, pulled him right up to his face and screamed at him, “Why is she still alive you filthy groveling pile of ****?!!!”
The commander now shacking so much he could barley stand said,
“W-we we-we-weren’t able to kill her Mr. Nenji Asuka Sir… Eeep.”
“…Die.”
With that Asuka created a ball of lightning and electrocuted the commander, killing him.
After staring at the smoldering black mass that was once the commander Lulu managed to look at Asuka. She noticed a glowing mark on his forehead and yelled at him, “What’s that mark on your forehead?
” after waiting for a few minutes while Asuka stared at her she said, “I’ve seen it before on myself but I didn’t know what it was and whenever I asked about it no body would answer me.”
Asuka stood in shock at this after a while he looked at her again he examined her face very carefully and then started crying.
He managed to ask who her father was. She said.
“He abandoned our family after trying to kill my mother.”
Lulu then realized what was going on and slapped him.
She turned around and began to walk out.
Nenji put his hand on her shoulder and asked. “Would you join me? … I know I wronged you in the worst way, but actually I had thought you were dead. When I met your mother it was love at first sight but the elders of your clan said it would disgrace the clan if we had a relationship but we were far to in love to care. Thus we had you. Your mother said one day she didn’t know if we could take care of you and that with the villagers thinking of you as a symbol of disgrace and all it might just be best to end your life there. The next day you were gone and I found your mother crying. I thought she had killed you. In a blind rage I tried to kill her. She fled. I left in a deep depression. I see now she probably tried to but couldn’t bring herself to do it. I hired those bandits to avenge the death I thought you had gotten. So what do you think of me?"
“…What will happen to me now?”
“You’ll be executed.” Said a new voice in the room. “Both of you.”
It was coming from a very large man in a military uniform.
“I won’t let you hurt her!”
“You don’t have a choice!”
“Run.” No you don’t!!! “Who is this guy dad?”
“You just called me dad!”
“I’m still furious with you but this really isn’t the time for hard feelings. Now who is this guy?!”
“He’s the real ruler of this planet. He runs things backstage in the government.”
“Yes and your time has come Asuka!
” The mysterious man shot a stream of fire at Nenji but he dodged.
Nenji raised an electrical barrier.
He then performed the same spell the villagers used to give Lulu their energy.
He then called a big dragon to the window.
He gave her a note and told her to get on and that she should leave.
Since Nenji had performed the transfer spell his field was severely weakened.
The man broke it and as Lulu flew away the man killed Nenji. She then remembered the note she opened it.
It read,
Dear Lulu
Lulu, if you are reading this then it means I was wrong about your mother and that I’m now dead. I wrote this letter just in case you were still alive. I am sorry for all the trouble I caused you and your mother. Since I am now dead you are probably in danger too. You can find refuge at my family’s house. It is located at the top of Mouse Mountain.
Love Dad
When lulu reached the mountain she knocked on the door and an elderly woman answered.
Lulu told her, her story.
The woman allowed Lulu to live there Lulu lived there.
She had many adventures, met many, fought many, and learned much. That is the origin of Steel Soul.
The End
this one is number two. it was designed for an older audience than my first one obviously from the swearing. please critique.
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