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Eternal Daydreamer

Surrender to the Sea
Well, I have been asked when I was going to do my OC super hero story. I have characters. I have villians. Problem? I don't have a plot. This normally, isn't a problem for me, if you get to know me. Lately though, it has become a hassle to put down my thoughts. I'll give brief bios of each member (And I do mean brief, I'll give more info on request though).

They are:

Prime Gun (A.K.A Micheal Sagar)
Age: 29

He's the leader of the group. At age twenty-nine, he's more streetwise than most. This is because not only did he work in gangs in his teens, but also, Gun is a murderer. He kills just to see his victims die. Though he shaped up in later years. Thanks to the Starbolts of course, though.

Gun is very smart and modified some guns to fit his violent lifestyle. It's amazing to note, however, his father was a pastor.

Shewolf (AKA Angela Garvie)
Age: 26

After being cursed by a wolf demon when she was eighteen, Shewolf did not stop her athletic career until she was around twenty-two when the curse's effects actually could be seen. This was minor changes in the first years of the curse, subtle changes in hair color and eye color for example. In her early twenties, though, it became really noticable. (The tail for one.) See, the curse is to be become a primal wolf-like beast over a long period of time. For lack of terms, we call her a werewolf. Though at the moment she just looks like a woman with brown hair, green eyes, and a wolf tail.

Shewolf herself is very vain. Though not so much as she was, thanks to her meeting Shimonoseki Takashi. More commonly known as the Starbolt TK (For more information on him, read Starbolts or PM Ledian_X). They are dating and I forsee a marriage coming up, though TK does notice Shewolf's vainity of course...

Glutton (AKA Cristopher Dussel)
Age: 31

Once a German wrestler, this gentle giant loves children (and food). His genitically enhanced strength gives him a good edge on the mat. He doesn't fight much anymore and is mostly a babysitter to Katie (See Valentine).

Glutton's high metabolism keeps fat off him most of the time, though there is a slight ring of fat around his middle. Gun used to say that he found him training with monks, though it's not proven.

Velvet (AKA Helen Atlas)
Age: 26

A rich snob that used to work for the mafia? A dream? Nope. This snob once shared a classroom with the Starbolt Jenna. And saw her burn down the school too. This motivated Velvet to turn sour.

Though the Crew are called rogues, Velvet is one of the only ones (except Prime Gun himself) that has a real crinimal record. Though, the mafia boss Guidicelli didn't like his girlfriend leaving him....

Slowfire (AKA Jeremy Jacobs)
Age: 34

A retired lawyer, Slowfire actually had to stop because of laziness. Feline Catus, a cat demon that hangs around with him now, cursed him to burn with eternal cold flame. And be eternally in a state of lethargy. This lethargy can be transfered to others.

A lazy fellow by nature, Slowfire picked up this curse in stride. Though he was a lawyer and isn't as quick of tongue as others, he can give good advice to those who listen.

Sir Giles of Surrey
Age: 29

Well, he's a knight. From the thirteen hundreds. A time portal had opened when he was riding to catch a deer and he went through it. Now Giles is a crusader in the twentieth century.

Very religious and respectful to women and people with wealth, Giles is very out of place in this time frame. Though, he does fight with honor and skill that he gained in his own time...

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Valentine (AKA Buffy Johnson)
Age: 31

If you can't tell by her clothes, Val is what we would call a brothel girl. Though, she's not as a **** as she dresses though. In fact... She's quite the oppisite! Her twin sister, Holly (AKA Circe), made the outfit when they were still working with each other. That was before an accident that made it clear that Holly was the evil twin.

See, both of them have this power of controlling men through kissing. (It's got to do with this natural hormone that I forgot the name of..) Anyways, Val is a calm bookish girl and legeal gaurdein of Holly's only daughter, Katie.

Katie herself is a seven year old who loves to go out on missions but so far has been confined to the base...

Foreman (AKA William Frankfurt)
Age: 24

Foreman was a miner in Kansas before an earthquake closed up the mine. Which, actaully his fault. This man can make earthquakes out of nowhere! Just by stomping! Wow!

He's not a deep thinker, normally, but he's not an idiot either. Foreman can bring up a good defense at times, though, and be a burden in other times. Some say that he's dating Valentine but it's just a rumor.

Prowl (AKA Doctor Samantha Pearson)
Age: 33

She was once a bioligist in the wilds of South America, though an encounter with Doctor Savis (a colleague) changed her outlook on life. Enhanced strength, agility, hearing, sight, and a deep understanding of the langauge of beasts.

Prowl dislikes this look but is still a deep thinker as she was. A private tutor, if you will, of Katie. Some say she's the protecter of all things beastlike in the city. Poaches beware!

So there you have it. The Twilight Crew. Their main enemies are Team Dawn, a team dedicated to stop sinning and such.

I would like some ideas for a plot, if you don't mind...

PS
Yes, this does take place in the universe of the Starbolts. All ideas of the Starbolts are approved by Ledian_X.
 

Eternal Daydreamer

Surrender to the Sea
Oops. I forgot to say I needed help comming up with a plausible plot. >< And anyways, dude, I gave a list of the heroes and I had a brief summary of what the villians would be. Didn't you read all of it?
 

ShadowCloud62

Child at Heart
Well, I could come up with a plot for you, maybe something where your characters get stuck in another dimension. Would you mind telling me the setting of the story? Once I know the setting AND the characters (which I already know the characters) I might be able to put pieces together. Also, are they all heroes?
 

Eternal Daydreamer

Surrender to the Sea
They all are heroes. Sort of. Anti-heroes really. The setting? Some city somewhere. I believe a city called Maxiville.

Universe idea? I sort of like it, but I'm not too sure. My brain has been pretty scattered lately.
 

ShadowCloud62

Child at Heart
The city sounds like some high-tech city...maybe you could try having a city blackout? Meh, pathetic idea....a new dimension is something I have tried...and it works!!! *looks at link to story* Anyways, another idea:

Maybe a very good friend of theirs dying and revenge.

Or...

A string of murders occuring around the city and they investigate on their only suspect--a military veteran.
 

Ledian_X

Don Ledianni
Okay,

Now that we got this posted, I can probably beat out some ideas for ya. This group of anti-heroes is a great idea and I know you based them on the seven deadly sin.s This is what I think might work for your first story:

You could do:

1.) Origin story. How they all became the Twilight Crew.

2.) Team Dawn or Circe does something bad like take over a small island or something and you guys need to stop them.

3.) Circe controls a bunch of men in the hopes of getting what she wants. Some men might be people with superpowers (causing a crossover with the 'Bolts)

4.) We could delive into the sins part of the group and such.

I might have more later. See ya on IM. All four could be part of the same chaptered story.

LX
 

Eternal Daydreamer

Surrender to the Sea
Maybe a very good friend of theirs dying and revenge.

Or...

A string of murders occuring around the city and they investigate on their only suspect--a military veteran.
I don't know... I'm really scattered brained lately...

And to Ledian, the same response. Sorry fella but yeah...
 
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