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[Clockworkz]

A series of stick figure comics made in roughly 5 minutes each in paint. I ain't winning any art awards, so don't whine about it not taking effort or skill to do it. I'm going off hilarity factor here. Jokes make the comic. So, without further ado...

Comic 01

 

[munchlaxboy]

YAY! First POST! its pretty good. I can live with it.

 

[blueguy]

A series of stick figure comics made in roughly 5 minutes each in paint. I ain't winning any art awards, so don't whine about it not taking effort or skill to do it. I'm going off hilarity factor here. Jokes make the comic. So, without further ado...

Comic 01

Well, if you're going to go for the "hilarity factor" and neglect any visual presentation the comic should be funny... which it isn't, and to make up for such poor artwork you need some very funny stuff.

 

[Mega Trickster]

Yay stick figures! But it's not really funny. Sorry dude. D=
I don't care how the comic looks but at least it should be worth a laugh. That just really wasn't funny because thats a really old joke.

 

[Clockworkz]

Well, if you're going to go for the "hilarity factor" and neglect any visual presentation the comic should be funny... which it isn't, and to make up for such poor artwork you need some very funny stuff.

Thank you. Your obviously intelligent statement of how I can improve has most definately supported my ideas within the comic itself. I am eternally grateful.
Wait. No.

Comic 2
MAY CONTAIN USAGE OF THE "F" WORD.

 

[Blues]

If you're going to say to hell with visual, at least make your comic funny. Random violence in three panels is pretty stupid. You think you're good, knocking off any crit with a bad joke, but it just shows you don't know anything about taking it and using it to become better.

 

[blueguy]

Thank you. Your obviously intelligent statement of how I can improve has most definately supported my ideas within the comic itself. I am eternally grateful.
Wait. No.

Comic 2
MAY CONTAIN USAGE OF THE "F" WORD.

... Huh? I'll just ignore that then, because I stand by what I said. When something lacks visually it sure as hell better have substance, and your first comic was garbage. *whispers* There's no "may", your comic does. This comic was better, despite being sort of offensive and disgusting. The art still stinks by the way, and I don't think you've made up for it yet.

 

[Blivsey]

Wow. I think that blueguy sumed it up pretty well, there. And this is the guy that I let get on my nerves at the April contest thread. He's not even worth my frustration, let alone anger. >_>

Oh, and sarcastically rejecting intelligent advice from a reader will NEVER get you brownie points. Take your crit like a man, workz.

 

[Clockworkz]

I take criticism when there's something to work with. Just saying "make them funnier" doesn't really help. At all. Blues gets it. "Random violence in three panels is pretty stupid." He at least points something out instead of stating the almost-obvious declaration of "It's not funny." And on that note, Blues' crit will be taken to heart. Yes; perhaps he's right. Random violence is not always funny, and I will take the hint to vary my content.

Also, as stated before, I don't care too much about hte presentation. As long as things are vaguely discernable, that's good enough for me. Critique the art as much as you want; it'll fall on deaf ears. If you've seen my stuff in the Fan Art section, you'll know I CAN put time and effort into stuff like this, I'm simply choosing not to at this particular moment in time.

Yes, I'm sick evil ****. I know. My sense of humor is tasteless and irrefutably violent. But that seems to appeal to people I know outside of this board, which is why I decided to post it.

Just to clear a few things up. I'm not mad. I'm just worn out and tired and sick.