SuperJolteon's Art

[superjolteon]

Hello to one and all. I've decided to post some art of mine, or sketches if you will so feel free to view and give C&C. I'll most likely post character portraits whether they are concept or well known characters, but may post a few sketches of other things. Anyone who wishes to request any art they'd like me to draw, feel free. The exception is that they must be people, animals, robots, or even pokemon. And any other kind of living thing of course! I'm also more into drawing realism than cartoony/manga-resque art but if you absolutely want me to then I can if I feel up to it!
Anyways, enjoy..

Male Hero Character

Evil Sorceror

 

[Act]

Hn, I'm not a big fan of the first one. it's definitely a step in the right direction, but the proportions of the face are very strange. Remeber, eyes are about halfway down the face, the center of the nose about halfway from there, and the center of the mouth halfway from there. His nose is very long and his mouth very low, and it's not really centered.

The second one is much better-- everything seems to be in the right place, and there is a depth in his eyes that was missing from the first one. Again, though, although the nose is the right size, I'd be careful about setting the eyes too high. It's always better to draw out your lines for a face as opposed to just estimating where things should be.

I'd really like to see more of your stuff I like realistic things much better than anime ones.

 

[eldes]

your art is quite good , good shading and i like the lips and the nose, they seem to be pro. but one tiny thing the nick is sorta short and the shoulders are huge for the picture what you say?

 

[superjolteon]

your art is quite good , good shading and i like the lips and the nose, they seem to be pro. but one tiny thing the nick is sorta short and the shoulders are huge for the picture what you say?

Which one? The 2nd? Yeah I did that on purpose to emphasize the huge bulkiness of the guy. Maybe its slightly disproportionate but oh well.

Act: Yes, think you've touched on my weak spot there! I have slight trouble with faces, and yes I've noticed thats what was wrong with the first face! Think its the nose that really makes it look disproportionate. Thanks for pointing that out. So is it just the faces you're only concerned with?
I'll improve on this for sure now!

Sure Ill do some more art when I got the time! Any requests from you guys? Remember, if you want, I can alter the style of the character/thing from anime to realism if you'd like.

Btw, think the images should be re-scaled down? looks a little big.

 

[eldes]

yeah the second one so you did it on purpose

 

[Act]

So is it just the faces you're only concerned with?

Well, techinically, both are portraits, so the face is the focal point.

As for the size, you could always link to them or make nifty little thumbnails.

 

[SuperGlalie]

Well although i cant draw that well (and you know it!) i must admit i do like the top picture as it looks like a hero would (the clothing anyway and hair though the face does seem a bit weird but thats already been stated). The second one i reckon does look a bit weird all over though i love the touch with the right eye - i take its supposed to be a scar but anyhow i know that youll get it sorted as ive seen what you can do.

Also with requests could you do a Glalie for me (poss to use on my sig) as you know how much i love them and if poss could you do one of Bella at some point so i can show her it?

p.s. about the manga i found your perfect birthday present...

 

[superjolteon]

Yea sure if and when i get the time! Do you want Glalie to be realistic or like the Pokemon anime? Also, I can't really sketch Bella as I don't have a pic of her and I don't have a super long lasting memory! Unless I could do a quick one when I go round yours sometime.

Off-topic: Ooh..Manga pressie eh? Sounds intriguing.

 

[Sin]

Wow, putting these in links or thumbnails would be a good idea. I can only see the second one (Its just my computer, not a problem with the files) But it looks pretty nice. The eye brow seems unnaturaly arched but I guess youre going for a 'evil' look here. The nose looks great though.
-Sin

 

[SuperGlalie]

I could give you a picture of bella sometime as i have one on my laptop. Plus id love to have a realistic glalie pic. cheers

 

[superjolteon]

Update:

Glalie pic for SuperGlalie:


Link/Wolf Moonlight:

 

[Clockworkz]

As much as I love your shading, I'm going to have to say that the wolf's head looks hideous. Do you use references? If not, start using them. I have no major problems worth noting about link; I am curious about your medium, though; they look like oil pastels; am I right?

 

[superjolteon]

As much as I love your shading, I'm going to have to say that the wolf's head looks hideous. Do you use references? If not, start using them. I have no major problems worth noting about link; I am curious about your medium, though; they look like oil pastels; am I right?

Correct. What exactly is wrong with the wolf's head then? Specify the areas concerned.

 

[Dark Registeel]

I think that your artwork looks pretty good.
Good job!

 

[superjolteon]

I think that your artwork looks pretty good.
Good job!

Thanks matey! I've got a university interview in 3 weeks so I'm gonna add the link one to my portfolio. I've got other works but they're obviously work from college to do with design and life art so they're going in as well. If you want to have a look at some of these and comment feel free to ask if you wish.

 

[Clockworkz]

As you can see here, the head slopes down from the top at a prety steep angle, and slopes off gently and smoothly into the muzzle; the eyes are quite a distance from the ears, and not nearly as large. It's near impossible to differentiate the lip from the back fur around its mouth, and its teath wouldn't really be as visable; also, wolve's don't grin. It you want it baring its teeth realistically, then find a reference of that as well. Its muzzle wrinkles up, and its teeth are gritted together, and its ears go back as well. The ears are also a degree larger than yours.
Your lupine anatomy could use some work =P

 

[superjolteon]

As you can see here, the head slopes down from the top at a prety steep angle, and slopes off gently and smoothly into the muzzle; the eyes are quite a distance from the ears, and not nearly as large. It's near impossible to differentiate the lip from the back fur around its mouth, and its teath wouldn't really be as visable; also, wolve's don't grin. It you want it baring its teeth realistically, then find a reference of that as well. Its muzzle wrinkles up, and its teeth are gritted together, and its ears go back as well. The ears are also a degree larger than yours.
Your lupine anatomy could use some work =P

Hmm true but as link is a game character I didn't really want the wolf to be as realistic as in real life. So I wanted to make it look more character-like and in a similar style to link. Therefore this art is not meant to be totally realistic. I should have mentioned this before so sorry about that! But yes, I think the head could be better refined in this case.

 

[Shadow_Fox]

Hm the Galie looks like it should be a bit rounder and as Clockworkz has already pointed out, the wolf could use a bit more... defined face. Game charater or not the wolves from the Zelda games have semi-realistic details and shapes, from what Ive seen of them at least. My apologies if thats not correct. I really like the oil pastels.
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[superjolteon]

Hm the Galie looks like it should be a bit rounder and as Clockworkz has already pointed out, the wolf could use a bit more... defined face. Game charater or not the wolves from the Zelda games have semi-realistic details and shapes, from what Ive seen of them at least. My apologies if thats not correct. I really like the oil pastels.
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Thanks for the comments. Yes the Glalie I kinda rushed a bit and I was getting used to using oil pastels again. Meh theres my excuse!

 

[zuloon]

Can you do a Zangoose in Oil Pastel? He's my favorite pokemon! <3