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Tales Of Mao-Doku

Discussion in 'Fan-Comics' started by MrRandell, Jun 5, 2009.

  1. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Please comment when you read. Thanks

    Hay there!
    The comic I'm making may look like a typical Pokémonstory in the beginning, but it's going to turn out quite different.

    I'm just a beginner, remember that while reading ^^

    C ya!

    #1 The first catch
    #2 Prof. Beech
    #3 Start your Journey!
    #4 The mummy Pokémon
    #5 Collision
    #6 Cat Fight
    #7 Package Delivery
    #8 Dan again
    #9 The contest begins!
    #10 Package? What package?
    #11 Activity
    #12 Odd
    #13 Round 2
    #14 Speechless
    #15 Dead End
    #16 What's going on?

    EXTRA
    Protest

    Character Bio's:
    Jason
    Alice
    Prof. Beech
    Dan


    Credits:
    Sinnoh tiles by: Kymotonian and Speeddialga
    Sprites from: The Spriters-Resource
     
    Last edited: Mar 8, 2010
  2. Meguel13

    Meguel13 Well-Known Member

    This comic is really good for a beginer; not sure if thats a custom region though. I think you should make custom characters instead of recolours.
     
  3. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Thanks ^^
    Except for Prof Beech I designed the haircuts myself though.
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2009
  4. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Last edited: Jun 13, 2009
  5. Mastercougar

    Mastercougar The Infinite Fire

    This is very well-done. The sprites are used very effectively, as are the backgrounds. You display impeccable management of textboxes and panel layouts, especially for a beginner. Your spelling and grammar are excellent, which is rare for beginners. And your writing ability seems to be strong, leading us in an interesting direction. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~MC
     
  6. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Last edited: Jun 15, 2009
  7. Moo66

    Moo66 Well-Known Member

    It's pretty good for a begginer.
    It's original which pretty much means it's not a journey comic. It's not boring and bland, and it includes a small amount of comedy. So far it's shaping up to be a pretty good comic.
    The only thing is that it might be a little too small. It might just be my opinion though.
    I look forward to more episodes!
     
  8. Zero-Wolf

    Zero-Wolf Lost my memory....

    3 episode. I notice it has missing one word. "Why? O,God why did hey leave me like this!" Adds ? and T in hey.
    This is a good comic. ^^
     
  9. dawsoc

    dawsoc Yes, I'm still alive

    i liked them they gave me a laugh!
     
  10. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    That's so nice to hear!

    #5 Collision
    Introducing some new characters

    Hope you like it ^^
     
  11. Moo66

    Moo66 Well-Known Member

    Good new episode. Nothing really special, but the plot's advancing. These episodes might not be the best, but they're necessary. You'll learn little things like this as you make the comic. I wonder what'll happen next?
     
  12. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    2 new episodes!

    #6 Cat Fight
    #7 Package Delivery

    I just noticed that I wrote 'Skitty kom back' instead of come.
    'Kom' is Dutch for 'come', I think I wans't realy paying attention ^^
    And now you've learned a word in Dutch =D
    Soon you'll be speaking it fluently!
     
    Last edited: Jun 21, 2009
  13. aclover

    aclover VICTORiOUS

    Wow.
    I read all of them so far and they. are. brilliant!!
    are we gonna see more of those wierd people who dress funny?
    you know the three people who shouted MOVE!
     
  14. Raesa

    Raesa Raichu fan <3

    Whoa, I liked it ^^ hope to see some more soon:)
     
  15. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Hope you're happy with this one!
    (I do hope you didn't expect 3 episodes or something, because I went on a camp with my youth movement and didn't have any time to make some more)

    #8 Dan again
     
  16. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Last edited: Jul 15, 2009
  17. Zero-Wolf

    Zero-Wolf Lost my memory....

    That's pretty good and I don't see Dan in the contest. Is Dan in it? I want to see more!
     
  18. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    He's standing right next to Alice.
    His battle will come ^^
     
  19. Zero-Wolf

    Zero-Wolf Lost my memory....

    I see Dan. It's hard-ish to see the comments in people saying when some of people are blocked by it. lol
     
  20. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

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