Tamanta, my first ever scratch.

[Jetx]

Okay, please aknowledge the fact that this is my first scratch and it isn't perfect. I know it's small, but take a look at cleffa. Things like cleffa and igglybuff are small sprites, so I made tamanta small too. Here it is:
http://i2.*******.com/qnw9jn.png

Critisism is appreciated, but I'd like to know that I didn't completely suck.

Thanks.

 

[zuloon]

Put some more effort into it. But keep trying. Lol here's my first pixel piece:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/zepher229/sprite1.png
It sucked. A lot. Yours is way better. I know. But then I got better and better and now spriting isn't an "I gotta get better"! It's just a hobby.

 

[Jetx]

Wow, thanks. it may look pretty bad, but I put alot of effort into finding the rights shades. Hopefully I'll get as good as you one day.

 

[zuloon]

Lol...I'm okay...that pic that I posted blinds me nowadays though. It's complete with pillow shading and everything. For some reason everyone on www.runescapecommunity.com really liked it, giving it 8/10s and such, even though they usually flamed me.

My only advice is: "Practice makes perfect!"

 

[Magical Trevor]

it's cute but the eys and mouth seems wierd

 

[Koener22]

The left wing/fin thing is a bit too chuby

 

[Sassafras]

Yeah, good for a first sprite. Try drawing it loosly and then neating it up. But yup its pretty good for a first sprite.

 

[Jetx]

'kay, thanks for the help.

i did draw it loosely at first and then straightened it up, but, I guess the best way to improve would just be more practise...