Thanks everybody!
That's great advice, liveletlove_mix. I'm gonna try and come up with something comical to throw in there. Man, that's a good idea. Thanks. I need to get to work on that ASAP.
And I'm glad you stopped by even though i haven't been keeping up with your fic. i saw the other day that you were on chapter 13! Oh mai! But no worries, I'm gonna get there.
Hahaha. Tell me how that goes!
[SPOILER="Michael and Michelle] You said that happened in the past. Something tells me that later on Michelle is cheating on her husband (you did put "Mrs" in those little snippets and in the dialogue she did say "Rische". I could be wrong though! XD[/SPOILER]
[SPOILER="RE: Michael and Michelle]Not quite. Michelle Rische's husband will come home in the next episode of hers.[/SPOILER]
You keep on making so many close predictions, you might have to spoiler tag your whole comment!
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope you continue to enjoy it as I move deeper into the world of the story.
duncan
Yeah, I didn't know if I wanted to kill Nick now or not, but it ended up being for the better. i can't say so much now, but yeah. Dophinimine is powerful for a lot of reasons.
Griff:
Thank you! I'm sorry that you feel that way, but I'm very glad that you stopped by to read this much! There WILL be pokemon. It's not apparent yet, but they'll be here..................................................................
And thanks to Mix, there WILL be comic relief!
This next chapter will probably be up in five or six days.
All I Need won't continue until this one is done.
Author's Cut
Michelle's first little paragraph of speech was cut down from the original. Here's the beta:
"To escape the ups and downs of life, people turn to seeking a higher purpose, nobler goals, and absolute truths. Are you content with just being happy because you know you’ll always be? Has this inhibited your search for meaning in your life? I drink a cranberry juice because I don’t like to be numbed by alcohol. I don’t like to be numbed period. Do you need me to be numbed before I find you overwhelmingly attractive or before I agree to leave with you? Is that satisfying? Changing my reality because the reality is that you really aren’t enough to do the job on your own? Being numbed is a very dangerous thing. You don’t eliminate scary things because you can’t feel fear. You can’t get rid of tragedy because you don’t have the ability to mourn. And so what you’re really doing is turning a blind eye to what’s killing you"
The next Author's Cut will have a lost conversation between Nick and Michael.
One thing: you might want to throw something in for comic relief, just to make the dark bits stand out more.
That's great advice, liveletlove_mix. I'm gonna try and come up with something comical to throw in there. Man, that's a good idea. Thanks. I need to get to work on that ASAP.
And I'm glad you stopped by even though i haven't been keeping up with your fic. i saw the other day that you were on chapter 13! Oh mai! But no worries, I'm gonna get there.
Hehe, so that is how Michael and Michelle met. Hehe, like their conversation. The way how Michelle say how much she is liking him by using percents is quite amusing to me. Maybe I should do that to a guy sometime XDDDD.
Hahaha. Tell me how that goes!
[SPOILER="Michael and Michelle] You said that happened in the past. Something tells me that later on Michelle is cheating on her husband (you did put "Mrs" in those little snippets and in the dialogue she did say "Rische". I could be wrong though! XD[/SPOILER]
[SPOILER="RE: Michael and Michelle]Not quite. Michelle Rische's husband will come home in the next episode of hers.[/SPOILER]
You keep on making so many close predictions, you might have to spoiler tag your whole comment!
Really great chapter here. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope you continue to enjoy it as I move deeper into the world of the story.
duncan
And Gowlman... That was unexpected (sort of). Every chapter so far has really impressed upon me about the power (and horror) or Dolphomine.
Yeah, I didn't know if I wanted to kill Nick now or not, but it ended up being for the better. i can't say so much now, but yeah. Dophinimine is powerful for a lot of reasons.
Griff:
Its a very good writing style but its a bit too dark for my tastes. Will there be any pokemon in this, out of curiousity?
Thank you! I'm sorry that you feel that way, but I'm very glad that you stopped by to read this much! There WILL be pokemon. It's not apparent yet, but they'll be here..................................................................
And thanks to Mix, there WILL be comic relief!
This next chapter will probably be up in five or six days.
All I Need won't continue until this one is done.
Author's Cut
Michelle's first little paragraph of speech was cut down from the original. Here's the beta:
"To escape the ups and downs of life, people turn to seeking a higher purpose, nobler goals, and absolute truths. Are you content with just being happy because you know you’ll always be? Has this inhibited your search for meaning in your life? I drink a cranberry juice because I don’t like to be numbed by alcohol. I don’t like to be numbed period. Do you need me to be numbed before I find you overwhelmingly attractive or before I agree to leave with you? Is that satisfying? Changing my reality because the reality is that you really aren’t enough to do the job on your own? Being numbed is a very dangerous thing. You don’t eliminate scary things because you can’t feel fear. You can’t get rid of tragedy because you don’t have the ability to mourn. And so what you’re really doing is turning a blind eye to what’s killing you"
The next Author's Cut will have a lost conversation between Nick and Michael.
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