Well thanks. I was kinda hoping for a reply from Dar or Juice, but thats cool too.
In other news, I have C4D and CS3 now! Whoo!
Ask and ye shall receive.
I should probably make a tutorial to save my doing this again and again
Definitely an improvement. The lighting is much better, but could still use work. Notice how a better render and lighting make minum jump out that much more? Ditch the black brush, it clashes, doesn't look good. You need to use colours which complement blue or that pale yellow on the body. Black is too solid, removes contrast and depth. You could do with using some gradient maps and photo filters on your banners, if you have that option available with your program. It would means that all the colours blend together better, atm the background and render and brushes are all too separated by their colours.
I know i said before about leaving empty space, but this is taking it to the other extreme. You've started off with a banner that is too big, i say that, because I prefer not to enlarge renders as they lose focus and quality. But yeah, you're banner is five times (if not more) bigger than the bulk of your render, as a rule of thumb I try and keep it as 3.5 or less. I think itf you'd chopped some height off the banner it would help a lot too, helps focus things if the render is more concentrated.
Flow. Big thing in a banner, makes a massive difference to the overall aesthetics. Look at Minum, it's jumping up and too the right, and therefore your banner should flow the same way. The background fo your banner at the moment flows the opposite way, those swishes are going from right to left. You might want to vary the shapes in yuor banner as well, variety is interesting and gives you more to look at. You've only used line brushes in your banner; on the Bouffalant one I've used circular brushes splatter brushes, vector brushes, smudged renders, clipping masks and displacement filters. The move you use, the more interesting it looks. the trick is to find the balance between interesting and crowded. I tend to crowd one part of my banner, and leave other parts blank, so this helps maintain the balance.
I'm really sorry but I'm too tired and lazy to write more, hope this helps in the meantime.