Tekcor the Lizard

[Mega Trickster]

I feel too lazy to type what I did on the link. So I will make a short version.
Tekcor is a cartoon I made up and this is just a simple drawing and coloring of him.

Tekcor the Lizard

 

[2cool4serebii]

I developed a type of eye cancer attempting to view that picture. I never had too high hopes for it, but.. all I'm going to tell you is this: RE-DO IT. NOW.

 

[Nylf]

^How should she re-do it? Critiscizing like that is no use what so ever. You just insulted her, and told her to re-do it with out pointing any means to do so accurately.

Anyway, my review.

Well, it's certainly got 'cartoony' down. It looks good, I mean giving it the cartoon headway, but the limbs could use a little work, as while his left legs seem attached to the side of the body, his back legs just seem to come out of it. Also, slightly more detailed hands would probably make it look better. The head's okay, but could look more lizardy with a more defined nose than a triangle. You could also narrow his neck a bit, make the body, neck and head clearer to tell apart. Finally, proper elbows and knees wouldn't hurt.

Though it certainly does look cartoony, and it is a nice design. The colourings good as well, nice and bright. And from the description, he certainly seems wacky enough. So yeah, he's pretty good.

Hope that helps.

 

[Raunchy_fad]

You know what? I actually like it. It looks great for what it's supposed to be, man, all... wiggly and cartoony. It works well. What I also like is that it's not a bad picture that's attempting to be good, it's just naturally simple and... neat.

So there ya go, man.

 

[Shadowfaith]

Okay, that was uncalled for 2cool4Serebii. If you dislike a picture then don't reply just stating that you don't like it, give is feedback and ways in which it can be bettered. Insulting a persons art work in such a manor is uncalled for and replying in such a negative manour without giving feedback and reasons is not helpful in the least. If you haev the nerve to turn around and say such a thing then give a reason and some tips.

As my my review on it. I suggest you give the body a little more shape, such as a hump for the back and such. You certainly have the cartoony part nailed and the head is fine in that catagory, but add a little shape to your character for full effect, even cartoon characters have a little more detail, okay? ^_^

 

[Reubo]

Here are some complaints:

1- Yes, it is supposed to be cartoony, but even cartoons need some detail. Little bent rectangles just won't do for legs. Even little bent rectangles with feet on the end will do. But rectangles alone won't do. Also you should make the legs get narrower as they get closer to the feet.

2- The body being a rectangle also isn't a very good idea. You need something a bit more realistic. Try making the body kind of like an oval, with a tail coming out of one end, and the head/neck coming out of the other. Of course don't make it entirely an oval, just the basic shape of the body.

3- Same with the tail. Study real-life lizards and make the tail more tail-shaped.

4- The pose needs to be redone. I don't know why a lizard would be sitting in midair with his legs sticking out forward.

5- This isn't really manditory, more of a style issue, but gradients are not really a good substitute for shading. It would be a good idea to add real shading, but if using gradients is your style, go on ahead. Gradients are just fine for backgrounds.

Here are some compliments:

1- Well, the head. It's just not bad. It's actually OK. You might want to round out the nose a bit, but besides that, it's fine.

Okay, fine that was one compliment, but the truth here is, it has a lot of potential, but it's just not very good right now. You want to add lot's more detail and pay more attention to the drawing. Keep it up!