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The adveantures of Idiots: No Trainers!

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Infinity

Gone...
If you're going to make a comic it is best that you use speech bubbles (perferrably the rounded end rectangle ones). The joke is a bit weak and it's kinda been done a lot. To get a comic right takes months of practice usually. I do think you have a better start than i did, but I do think you should go to the Academy for soem help...
 
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Divine_Light

Espeon will own all!
Me thinks you used the pre-released screenies of R/S/E, You should realy use speech bubbles, And may i say a good story line and a couple of jokes and good sprites makes a comic, This could be like MD and go far, If you need any sprites then just PM me
 
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I made a second comic strp. Doubt it will be good though. Read if you wish.
Also. I signed up at the academy.
 
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Okay I did. But the plot will be original. As the creator of that comic said, the plot still has yet to be revealed.
 
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Kinginsoar

Advanced Spriter
I'm the creator of Pika Ventures.

The comic does need some work. The scenery is a little blurry, maybe use some towns/cities of R/S/E from The Spriter's Resource, which aren't blurry but clear. I used Coronis' overworld sprites and gave him credit, you can too. Maybe think of a different attack teacher, like Jirachi or Celebi. But you got the right idea comin' along.

You should use SB on all of them. I just figured out how to do them, so I'll fix the others. I know you've got potential!

Actually, Dafearo, I like to think of it as...he liked my comic, and wanted to make something like it. I don't blame him. ^^

~Hazy~
 
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Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Why did you post the same comic three times? Well, it's okay, but it's a bit basic.
 
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