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The adventures of Jetx and... ehem... 'friends'...

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Yeah, this is basically my new attempt at a comic. I pretty much did cameos (that the word?) and a few people from my website signed up to join in. Yeah, it's about Jetx (who is based on me but has a different personality) and he is generally quite a cruel yet misunderstood person. And if anybody read my last comic (the team aqua one) I'm not going to do that one anymore and am now doing this. I wasn't originally going to post it here but apparently I'm pretty good with humour so I thought you guys might want a laugh.

Current episodes:
Chap 1: Meet Jetx! But I warn you, he's not really that great...
Ep 1: Funny Names...
Ep 2: No! Not Jonny!
Ep 3: Walking.
Ep 4: Changing flowers.
Ep 5: The great barrier of water. (double length!)
Ep 6: An unfair punishment.
Ep 7: Mistaken...
Ep 8: Cruel Orders
Ep 9: A Well Deserved Beating
Ep 10: Fired
Ep 11: Jetx gets evil!
Ep 12: The million pound plan
Ep 13: A "short" flashback...

Specials:
R.I.P Steve Irwin



Most recent:

http://i10.*******.com/2cpcj8k.png

Fan Stuff
Jet being dragged - Shynki (from Breloom Woods)
BIG MUMA - Eevee (from Breloom Woods)
The ultimate battle of all time...Or just Jetx and Shynki - Lord Ryu (from Breloom Woods)(He was once here under the name of Ice_Scyther)

Credits:
Spriter's resource for most stuff.
Dafearo(svensk) for teaching me how to do proper speech bubbles. XD
New001 for ripping some of the sprites.
Me for team aqua leader and Jetx.
Shynki (from BWF) for Jetx back sprite and battle sprite (not overworld)
And Neopolis for the sweat drop... I think so anyway...

Please C+C, comment, compliment, whatever.
 
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Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Wow, the good reviews live on. o_O

Thanks for reading and stuff.

EDIT: Just though I'd post the ad I'm using for it: http://i7.*******.com/21cs1on.png
 
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Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
Woot! This is really funny! :D I'm sure gonna follow this. Wonder what will happen from now on...
 

Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
Well its pretty good but you need to work on your reposing when
''Girl form the beach'' has an angry face in the last pannel of
comic 3 it is petheticly done. Other then that its a good comic
 

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Thanks for the cc and stuff. I might get started on the next episode soon.
 

Cousin Woofer

Just a minute.
Well this was a pleasant surprise. You, sir, have some good characters on your hands. Good characters are the basis of any great comic, and they can make for some of the best jokes. So yeah, nice job so far. My only suggestion is that you should try not to go for the obvious joke. Think of the best way to exploit the given situation, to make it as off-the-wall or funny as possible. You'll come up with some memorable lines that way.
 

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Wow, thanks. I've still got a few more new personalities to come. I think one of the memorable bits I could develop would be the hide and seek game that jet plays with somebody - but that's ages away.

I'll try to work harder on getting memorable jokes then, thanks. :)
 
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Matt`

r u srs?
This looks like a pretty good comic. It uses speech bubbles, and the plot is original. The only thing I'll comment on is that the text in the speech bubbles are a little squished and would sometimes get cut off.
 

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
This looks like a pretty good comic. It uses speech bubbles, and the plot is original. The only thing I'll comment on is that the text in the speech bubbles are a little squished and would sometimes get cut off.

Okay, I'll work on that. Thanks. :D
 

Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
Okey, four post in a row is not good thing. You should remove three post or this might get closed or something.

I know it's annoying that no one is reading but first off all, EDIT! There's an EDIT button for a reason. If you update once and when the next post is done, no one had replyed, Edit the previous post! And if no one writes for a while, you should copy the text from yourlatest post, delete it and then post the same thing again. This way your comic will go up to the first page without breaking the rules, right? :)

Okey, so about the new comics:
They are pretty good. Good sprites and original story even though you included Team Aqua. And remember that you have just started your comic so just keep on making it until you get more replyers. :)

//Anton
 

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Two new comics for you, guys. A rather lame episode ten but a slightly better episode eleven. Entitled 'Fired' and 'Jetx gets evil'.

I also added two more fan things I received on my forums which both seem to be based around the theme of me getting hurt. Oh yes, everybody hates me. I'll try to get another episode up in a couple of days, until then, I hope you guys are happy! School starts tommorow so I'll have a little less spare time to work on this unforetunately.
 

Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
The to new episodes look good.

Not that much to say about "Fired", but "Jetix gets evil" was sorta funny and leading to the question: "what will happen to the poor Psyduck!? 0_0"

Good luck with school tomorrow btw.
 

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Thanks Anton, I'm pleased to see I managed to add suspence to the comic. What will happen to Quak? All shall be revealed soon enough...
 

Jetx

hooray, it's Jetx!
Episode twelve 'The million pound plan' is up.
So is a REALLY bad R.I.P Steve Irwin special which you will not like, so don't give me a hard time about it. I already know it sucks, and no, the last panel is not meant to be an awesome punchline. :(
 

Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
Hehe, Episodes 12 was sorta funny. I liked it. :)

It suprises me that there's only me replying on this comic. :S
But just hang on cause if you just keep going you will automaticly (sp?)
get more readers as time goes. Don't give up. ^^
 

Kinginsoar

Advanced Spriter
Hehe, Episodes 12 was sorta funny. I liked it. :)

It suprises me that there's only me replying on this comic. :S
But just hang on cause if you just keep going you will automaticly (sp?)
get more readers as time goes. Don't give up. ^^

Hi, I'm a reader. ^o^ <woot!

Yes, Episode 12 was very funny Nice job, Jetx.
 

kinglax

will give nethin 4it
Very funny. The steve irwin thing was... mean. Lol, oh well, he's dead now, and won't care. *Walks away and is smited by a crocodile* Curse you Steve Irwin! lol, jk.
 
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