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The adventures of Luke & Klark + your storys!

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Mew-100

Future Scriptwriter!
"Luke & Klarks team!" (Short)

Luke & His friend Klark are about to Go to the pokemon leuge!There Pokemon team is raised quite well!
Luke's team:;385; ;003; ;384; ;383; ;380; ;151; !
Klark's team: ;150; ;160; ;186; ;254; ;382; ;381;!
 

Mew-100

Future Scriptwriter!
"Their box Pokemon!" (Short)

Luke's and klark's shared pokemon box: ;354; ;311; ;312; ;315; ;321; ;330; ;319; ;324; ;351; ;350; ;373; ;365; ;132; ;006;

(They go in 1,2 so lukes are the 1s and klarks are the 2s eg luke has banete and klark has the next pokemon Luke has the next pokemon etc)
 
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Olyon

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Damn it Mew-100! Have you even read the rules? I've already...

You know what, forget it. Mew, just read the RULES they're at the top of this damn page! Take into account what I said previously, PLEASE. Do you see any of these types of 'fics' around? Has anyone else decided to do this? NO. Don't you realise this is wrong? If you don't know if its right or wrong, PM a damn mod.

-.- please read the rules. Please.
 

Xiang

Well-Known Member
Read the rules, "smart one." No smilies, too short, and really NO EFFORT AT ALL. This is a rule-breaker. thank you, you've been reported. have a good day.
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
>> why is everyone stealing my 'have a nice day line' ;; stop emulating me. One me is enough.

To point out what hasn't been pointed out: Three lines, does not a fic make. ANNOYING EYE HURTING SMILIES, does not a fic make. But seeing as you praised a rule breaking script fic, and created this trite, I'm betting, your talent, whatever there is, does not a fic make either.

What, was it too hard to write out the pokemon names? Did you think it'd make you look cooler having people know you wasted a small ammount of time figuring out the pokemon's numbers for the smily code? Well it didn't and no one's impressed. Atleast the scripter actually wrote the species name of the pokemon, instead of using smilies.

Where is the plot? The depth the characters, what, are Luke and Klark female? Male? Both? Niether? BLOBS OF SPEAKING JELLO? WHAT!?

Oh their teams are raised quite well. LEGENDARIES. GASP. EGADS. Some of the most powerfull titans of the face of the earth, caught by two Mary Sue characters, that probably think 2+2 equals pie. As in the stuff you eat, not the greek meaning of the word or whatever.

Even if this was following the rules, it would still be lame, tacky and unoriginal. It'd also have absolutely no appeal or plot, or anything else to make it anything but one more very bad, tasteless trainer fics that help provide bad names to other trainer fics or newbies trying to write one.
 

Dragonfree

Just me
Is there any rule in the FanFiction forum this is not breaking?

By the way, Renegade, I've been using "Have a nice day" to end my rants for longer than I've known you. :p So no, it's not "your line".
 
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