The Adventures of Myou.

[The 'M']

This is only my secound comic.

It's about a young boy named Myou, who wants to have a lot of pokemons and become a great trainer.

It starts the day Myou is going to get his first pokemon.

Day 1:

Episode 1
Episode 2


More episodes coming up!

 

[Magical Trevor]

I absolutly love it. Where'd you get the sprites from

 

[Bu†cH]

I love it visually! ^_^
But not everything else (The overused and cliched storyline and the fact that this is another uber journey comic). T_T

 

[Bagonclaw]

Sprite: Good

Background: Small, but good

Story: Bad. That is the most overused plotline I have seen in my entire life. Unless you can give it an orginal twist. [hint] Search the forum for Poke- chow, Everstone, or Netted bliss [/hint]
Speech bubbles: Good, but not the kind everyone wants to see. Use baloon tails. If I didn't tell it to you, someone else would have got on your case.

Spelling: Bad. He "were" going? I don't think so. Minor spelling mistakescan cause anyone to give you a bad spelling grade.

One last thing: Don't use emotions in speech bubbles.

I'm watching you.