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The Adventures of Nathan and Blaze!

How's My Comic?

  • They Rock!!!!! Make more or I shall shoot a virtual gun at you!

    Votes: 3 27.3%

  • They're pretty good.

    Votes: 3 27.3%

  • Could use some improvement

    Votes: 3 27.3%

  • OMG!!!!! They reek!!!! Burn these at once!!!!!!!

    Votes: 2 18.2%
  • Total voters
    11
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SuperQ

I Pity The Fool!
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Hey everyone, this is my first comic, and I'll try to update as often as possible! Enjoy!

Season 1- Getting Started
Episode 1- Pick a Pokemon!(Start of Adventure)
Episode 2- Setting Off(The Secret's Revealed)
Episode 3- Oldale Town(Mini Comic- First Town On Travels)
Episode 4- First Capture!(First Pokemon Encounter! Who will it be?)
Episode 5- Larv's Story(Larv's Troubled Past)


Please Post Honest Comments!

I got the sprites at:
The Spriter's Resource
The Spite Resources Board
To Everyone Who Lent Me Sprites
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
My commentary:

A journey comic is not always bad, charizard, it depends on the quality, and art of the artist him/herself. If this comic does not follow the normal "cliched" format of a journey, then you should not complain!

A comic, I would have to disagree. There is nothing humorous about it. My advice is, DO NOT TRY TO BE FUNNY, Let the funny come to you. If you try to hard, it stinks, and becomes well, stupified.

Also, plan out your comic, this comic seemed rushed alittle.

Work on dialogue, the dialogue had some gramatical errors, and well, wasn't all to appealing

You do have some room for improvement, what ever you do, don't give up, these people are trying to say constructive critism


I know Journey's are cliched, but where has the last Journey comic that was good been created? I hardly see one "cliched" journey on the first page.

Also, "Another Journey comic!?"

That would only be good, if, there were like five or more jouney comics on the first page. Not like three or less.
 
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Wesheg

Zigzagoon luv
Lots Of Double Posts.
More MD Sprite Comics, NOOOOO!
Work on your drawing, like with the Brendan guy sending out larvitar, or Team Magma killing Tyrants, It Burns, Really.
 
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