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The Amazing Transforming Trainer!

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Blazing Charizard

Guest
Hi; this is my first sprite comic so don't be disappointed if it's not as good as you think it'll be. Special thanks to blueguy for the inspiration to make this; PokeChow was the first comic I ever read.

Part One: Prof. Birch's Lab
Part Two: Running All the Way to the Battle Frontier?!

More updates later! It takes a looooong time to make up the storyline and make the comics so PLEASE be patient.

EDIT: Here's Part Two again, this time edited. Note: I'm going to use Times New Roman for speech instead of cutting out each letter separately, so don't be surprised if the text looks different.
Part Two renamed and revamped: THIS was Birch's Pokemon?!
 
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blueguy

used Metronome!
I really love the concept of a trainer or pokémon that can switch between the two. It seems interesting, however Part Two makes absolutely no sense to me. :S
 
B

Blazing Charizard

Guest
-_-;;

Well basically, after somehow running all the way to the Battle Frontier to make sure Professor Birch doesn't catch her, the trainer looks in the Poke Ball (sorry if you didn't know that she opens the Ball, I didn't know what pic to put in to show that!!) and finds a shiny Flygon. She's a bit perplexed because she expected something different.

And the Minicomics 1, 2, and 3 have to do with the old men pics. I just thought that would be funny since the old man's always popping up in Viridian city.

*sobs* I worked so hard on Part Two, too! -_-;;
 
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jellsprout

Well-Known Member
Perhaps you can let her say more in the second comic, like "So this was Birch's pokemon" when she opens the pokeball.
 
Atari

Atari

Did it on 'em
Comic 2 actually would have been a lot better with the minicomics separate. Nothing really makes much sence with it combined... Chapter 1 was was pretty good, though.
 
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Flygon

Guest
VERY confused. The plot isn't too comprehendable. It confuses me. Also, a transforming trainer may not need a Pokemon, she err... kinda is one.
 
T

The Noise

Banned
Confusing, and far, far, far too messy. It needs a lot of work, in many areas including bubbles and humour. The effects lack any luster, and the whole thing seems far too basic (plot wise, although we haven't seen anything yet), your basically leaving us clueless to what is going on.
 
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