Electrobulb
NOT A LIGHTBULB!
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THE BATTLE SUMMER TOURNAMENT!
Chapter 1:Entry battle, and the first companion!
Chapter 2:The forest of gloom!(In the works)
So without further ado, here is chapter one.
The battle-summer tournament!
Chapter 1:Entry battle, and the first companion.
It was the first day of summer, and the trees were in their full glory. Green and healthy, and the weather was beautiful. The sun shone and against the waving waters, and as always, people were sunbathing, and taking a time out…for non-trainers that is…For in the summer, a great tournament takes place, one that is anticipated by many trainers. The battle-summer tournament is a mid year tournament that truly tests trainers mettle. Trainers from all around the world would come to Kanto for the biggest and best tournament around. But this story is not just a story that follows the tournament. No. We follow a boy called Chris, who wants to win this tournament, and get the fabled SB medal…
“Phew…Hey excuse me!” Chris yelled, running after a merchant headed south. “Yes?” The merchant said. “Do you know where I might find Viridian town?” Chris asked. Chris was a slender boy, and had green hair. He always wore his favourite blue top, and his blue jeans. The merchant looked around a bit before answering the boys question. “Yes, if you head west and then south through Pewter city, you should be able to find Viridian.” The merchant explained. Chris nodded and thanked the merchant, before running in the direction he had been told. He saw many different Pokemon on his way, and was even chased by a flock of Pidgey.
When Chris arrived at the Pewter Entrance, he looked around and let in all the beautiful sights of Pewter. The museum was busy, and the sun was beating down. Chris immediately headed for the Pokemon Centre. When he was halfway there, he was stopped by a girl with long brown flowing hair. “You are not going anywhere! You cant just enter this City like that! I oughta-” She was cut of by a man with short brown hair. “Calm down Maria. I am Brock, and this is my gym assistant, Maria.” Brock explained, sitting down on a nearby bench.
“What brings you to Pewter, Boy?” Brock asked. Before answering, Chris examined Brock. He seemed like a nice guy, but was he like his assistant. Chris decided to trust him. “Call me Chris, and I’m on my way to the Battle-summer tournament.” Chris said while itching his brow. “I see…Come to my gym! You can test whether you are truly ready for the tournament.” Brock exclaimed over a hearty laugh. Chris couldn’t help himself, and agreed. Brock and Chris talked about Tactics and strategies all the way to the gym.
“Well, Chris, Let’s begin.” Brock calmly began, getting a Pokeball ready. “Ok, This will be a one on one match between Brock and Chris. Begin!” The judge exclaimed. Both trainers hurled the Pokeball into the air, releasing a Pokemon each. Chris had sent out his Prized Flareon, which used to be his starter Pokemon Eevee. It was red all over, except for its rippling cream coloured hair around it. Brock had released one of his Geodudes.
Chris had 3 Pokemon, Flareon, Meowth, and a Chikorita he had found hurt on a bench on a route. Of course he planed to get more.
“Ok, Geodude, Start with a defence curl!” Brock shouted. Geodude turned a iron colour, before returning to normal, but more toughened up. “Use a Flamethrower Flareon.” Chris said calmly.
Flareon shot a blazing stream of different shades of red and orange at Geodude. It was struck head on, making it topple over in recoil. It got back up, a bit singed. “Use your rock throw Geodude!” Brock exclaimed angry with what just happened. Geodude hurled a pile of rocks and stones at Flareon. “Quick use reflect!” Chris yelled. Flareon formed a pink barrier in front of itself, and the rocks struck it. They turned a bright pink colour, and were reflected right back at Geodude. But alas, they missed.
“Ok. Use a agility attack to get behind the Geodude, then use double team.” Chris said, a hint of arrogance in his voice. Flareon dashed to the other side of the field, and then created loads of copies of itself around Geodude. “Grr…Find the real one! Rock throw!” Brock said. Geodude tried to get the right one, but in vain. There were still 7 copies left, and he had not hit correctly.
“Ok! Finish this! Use a fire blast while your close!” Chris said grinning. The copies disappeared, leaving the one real Flareon. Flareon let lose a massive blast of fire, and it struck Geodude so hard it knocked it out.
“Geodude is unable to battle! Chris and Flareon are the winners!” The judge shouted. Chris jumped into the air, before Brock approached him. “Well done Chris. You have earned this.” Brock said, opening a small box. Inside was a badge. “This will let you enter the tournament. Bet you didn’t know you needed that!”
“Thank you Brock!” Chris said, taking the badge. It was all the colours of the rainbow, and was gold where it was lettered. “Its my pleasure. Also, I’d like to send my assistant with you.” Brock said looking at Maria.
“What?! Why?” Maria asked in shock. “You could learn something from Chris. Go on…” Brock said charmingly. “Oh ok… When do we leave?” She asked.
“Tomorrow. Chris, you can sleep here.”
THE BATTLE SUMMER TOURNAMENT!
Chapter 1:Entry battle, and the first companion!
Chapter 2:The forest of gloom!(In the works)
So without further ado, here is chapter one.
The battle-summer tournament!
Chapter 1:Entry battle, and the first companion.
It was the first day of summer, and the trees were in their full glory. Green and healthy, and the weather was beautiful. The sun shone and against the waving waters, and as always, people were sunbathing, and taking a time out…for non-trainers that is…For in the summer, a great tournament takes place, one that is anticipated by many trainers. The battle-summer tournament is a mid year tournament that truly tests trainers mettle. Trainers from all around the world would come to Kanto for the biggest and best tournament around. But this story is not just a story that follows the tournament. No. We follow a boy called Chris, who wants to win this tournament, and get the fabled SB medal…
“Phew…Hey excuse me!” Chris yelled, running after a merchant headed south. “Yes?” The merchant said. “Do you know where I might find Viridian town?” Chris asked. Chris was a slender boy, and had green hair. He always wore his favourite blue top, and his blue jeans. The merchant looked around a bit before answering the boys question. “Yes, if you head west and then south through Pewter city, you should be able to find Viridian.” The merchant explained. Chris nodded and thanked the merchant, before running in the direction he had been told. He saw many different Pokemon on his way, and was even chased by a flock of Pidgey.
When Chris arrived at the Pewter Entrance, he looked around and let in all the beautiful sights of Pewter. The museum was busy, and the sun was beating down. Chris immediately headed for the Pokemon Centre. When he was halfway there, he was stopped by a girl with long brown flowing hair. “You are not going anywhere! You cant just enter this City like that! I oughta-” She was cut of by a man with short brown hair. “Calm down Maria. I am Brock, and this is my gym assistant, Maria.” Brock explained, sitting down on a nearby bench.
“What brings you to Pewter, Boy?” Brock asked. Before answering, Chris examined Brock. He seemed like a nice guy, but was he like his assistant. Chris decided to trust him. “Call me Chris, and I’m on my way to the Battle-summer tournament.” Chris said while itching his brow. “I see…Come to my gym! You can test whether you are truly ready for the tournament.” Brock exclaimed over a hearty laugh. Chris couldn’t help himself, and agreed. Brock and Chris talked about Tactics and strategies all the way to the gym.
“Well, Chris, Let’s begin.” Brock calmly began, getting a Pokeball ready. “Ok, This will be a one on one match between Brock and Chris. Begin!” The judge exclaimed. Both trainers hurled the Pokeball into the air, releasing a Pokemon each. Chris had sent out his Prized Flareon, which used to be his starter Pokemon Eevee. It was red all over, except for its rippling cream coloured hair around it. Brock had released one of his Geodudes.
Chris had 3 Pokemon, Flareon, Meowth, and a Chikorita he had found hurt on a bench on a route. Of course he planed to get more.
“Ok, Geodude, Start with a defence curl!” Brock shouted. Geodude turned a iron colour, before returning to normal, but more toughened up. “Use a Flamethrower Flareon.” Chris said calmly.
Flareon shot a blazing stream of different shades of red and orange at Geodude. It was struck head on, making it topple over in recoil. It got back up, a bit singed. “Use your rock throw Geodude!” Brock exclaimed angry with what just happened. Geodude hurled a pile of rocks and stones at Flareon. “Quick use reflect!” Chris yelled. Flareon formed a pink barrier in front of itself, and the rocks struck it. They turned a bright pink colour, and were reflected right back at Geodude. But alas, they missed.
“Ok. Use a agility attack to get behind the Geodude, then use double team.” Chris said, a hint of arrogance in his voice. Flareon dashed to the other side of the field, and then created loads of copies of itself around Geodude. “Grr…Find the real one! Rock throw!” Brock said. Geodude tried to get the right one, but in vain. There were still 7 copies left, and he had not hit correctly.
“Ok! Finish this! Use a fire blast while your close!” Chris said grinning. The copies disappeared, leaving the one real Flareon. Flareon let lose a massive blast of fire, and it struck Geodude so hard it knocked it out.
“Geodude is unable to battle! Chris and Flareon are the winners!” The judge shouted. Chris jumped into the air, before Brock approached him. “Well done Chris. You have earned this.” Brock said, opening a small box. Inside was a badge. “This will let you enter the tournament. Bet you didn’t know you needed that!”
“Thank you Brock!” Chris said, taking the badge. It was all the colours of the rainbow, and was gold where it was lettered. “Its my pleasure. Also, I’d like to send my assistant with you.” Brock said looking at Maria.
“What?! Why?” Maria asked in shock. “You could learn something from Chris. Go on…” Brock said charmingly. “Oh ok… When do we leave?” She asked.
“Tomorrow. Chris, you can sleep here.”
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