*tears well up in eyes* Goodbye, Flash. You were very well loved and respected.Hello everyone..i just want to say i hear by resign as Squad fives Captain..
I honestly dont want to but im not on enough to maintain my position so with that said
if it is ok with Golde, i appoint you the new captain of squad five. Rex be keep her safe man ive taught her all i could lol...everone else MC, NL, Zam, ILP, Dauc if ur till here, and anyone else i have missed lol i had fun as a senior member of this club and the last, i can truly say that it was a awesome experience seeing that this was my 1st forum/club i have joined and actually enjoyed. Im out..if anyone wants to stay in touch with me then most of u should have me on FB hit me up sometime.
So, I figured I'd comment on Eon's chapter while I was here.
I got a mention as partial comic relief. I like that. Keep it up.
You continually make it more and more interesting with the way Rouga flips back and forth between helpful and mentoring and serious and dark. Makes a nice duality that works well without being the cliche of "I'm dark sometimes and fear that, but can still be helpful." Y'know, he's not an Ichigo.
In regards to the small foreshadowing of the sequel: It was placed in a time that it makes sense without seeming out of place. And, without sounding weird, I like the creeper vibe Yazzu and Rozzu give off. They're kind of the delightfully repulsive weirdos that can add a reluctant laugh to a slightly tense scene.
To sum it all up, I was impressed.
You continually make it more and more interesting with the way Rouga flips back and forth between helpful and mentoring and serious and dark. Makes a nice duality that works well without being the cliche of "I'm dark sometimes and fear that, but can still be helpful." Y'know, he's not an Ichigo.
In regards to the small foreshadowing of the sequel: It was placed in a time that it makes sense without seeming out of place. And, without sounding weird, I like the creeper vibe Yazzu and Rozzu give off. They're kind of the delightfully repulsive weirdos that can add a reluctant laugh to a slightly tense scene.
To sum it all up, I was impressed.
While we're on the subject of fics: Remember that Arrancar thing I talked about a little while ago? Yeah, that fell apart quickly when I found out that my plot made no logical sense at all. Though, I do have another idea, but it is *sighs* shinigami focused again. The main reason I bring it up, is that I was wondering if, should I get stuck, I could bounce ideas off one of you guys.