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The Challenge Of Stanley, Region Of Flaer.

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Stanley

Doughnuts xP
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WARNING: It may have strong language or any mature stuff.
Do not view unless if you are 13 or over.

Prequel: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?p=3032578

VOLUME ONE
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- Cover - Prologue - Character Bios
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CHAPTER ONE: Colliseum Starts On Flaer
  1. Episode 1 [A Letter Of Stupidity]
  2. Episode 2 [Bloodshot Pokeball]
  3. Episode 3 [Downward Dash]
  4. Episode 4 [Colliseum Styles]
  5. Episode 5 [Forfeit Colliseums]
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CHAPTER TWO: Gym Trees
  1. Episode 6 [Shady Grove]
  2. Episode 7 [Grover And Celadon?]
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Extra
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Notes Or Confusion Awnsers
- You may know that Stanley can dress up his shirt in many
diffrient colors. That dosen't count as other characters.
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FAQ's
None. Send me PM if you want to ask.
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NEWS
04-08-06 - Special Episode And Chapter 2!
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Chapter two is running smoothly. A special episode containing
the mysterious character that you might has been thinking about
is coming up! He does not Own Lugia. He Befriends It.
Click to expand...
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Credits:
- Thanks To Coronis For Some Sprites, Such As Enex.
- Thanks To The Spriters Resource for the Objects.
- Thanks To Spallding For Tiles and Objects.
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Post Or I Will Not Continue This Comic. Don't Let This Thread Die!
 
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zuloon

Bboy Zuloon
Why did you not give credit to Coronis for the Ash sprite and why did you color Steven painfully ugly and make him super blurry?
Otherwise, it's much better than other new comics.
 
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zuloon

Bboy Zuloon
But if you make him look big, at least don't make it blurry. Make it pixelized big, not blurry big. Otherwise it won't match the rest of your comic.
 
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-Yoshi-

Yoshi!!!
This is a good ploted comic, but I have to force my vision to read things Also, Stanley is a very bad recolor and to make it worst, it is very blurry. Try to improve that, try to save it as .png, or many elite posters will come and rate it a bit harsh. Otherwise, it's very promising.
 
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Sahaqiel

Angel of the Skies
Wow, seems you arrived here before the Everyfirstpagehasapost era. That was around the time i got here when everything had a psot on it a minimum of 1 and a half pages long.Either way, this is an ok comic, but some of the art style is bad. Keep trying!,
Sahaqiel
 
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Uber

Teh Ubermasta
Sprites are too small. You should enlarge them to make them more of the center of focus.
 
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Uber

Teh Ubermasta
I don't care if they are overworld sprites. I know they are, but that doesn't mean you can't enlarge them a bit. They are too small for the panels.
 
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Uber

Teh Ubermasta
I'm focusing more on the beackground than the characters because they are so small. I want more focus on the characters. Resize the background and sprites by 200 and you can see them a lot easier.
 
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