Eternal Daydreamer
Surrender to the Sea
I'm at it again! This story this time around is a re-write of Charlie/Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. It will not be totally off either of them but instead a combination of both. So of course it would be wise to watch both of them at least once. Plus, perhaps read the book, too.
I will not tell you who is who until they show up. This is to keep it a surprise. In fact, I will not tell you if they are Pokemon or human characters, either! Not to insult you guys, though. Here's the prologue:
The Chocolate Factory
Prologue
A mighty factory stood out from the rest of the buildings in Stevens City. The main structure was of a light purple hue that shone almost on it’s own. Spreading off of this main feature was two corridors that went almost to the gates but not quite, they were of the same hue.
The factory rose about three or four stories above the nearest building, a department store that was a block away. That was not including the smokestacks which made the factory even taller by about three more stories. All of this was intimidating to an average person walking down the street.
Even a complete stranger to Stevens City knew what factory this was. It was the famous factory of Ally Kazam, a chocolate making wonder. To those who didn’t know (there wasn’t many), a sign was placed above the mighty door of the factory. The sign read this: “Ally Kazam’s Chocolates”.
Kazam’s many chocolates and other sweets are legendary far and wide. From his ice cream that never melts (even in the summer) to amazing candy eggs that when put on one’s tongue becomes a chocolate flying type! These candies are consumed by many creatures a day, from children to Charizards (a dragon Pokemon). All of these are of course made in this one factory.
“Who works there?” is a commonly asked question about this factory. The main reason for this was that the gates were always locked yet the candy keeps coming out. Even Ally Kazam doesn’t comes out. He hasn’t since about twenty years or so, no one remembers anymore if he is a Pokemon or a man.
The reason that the chocolate factory was closed to the public was this: all other candy makers became jealous of Ally Kazam’s success and sent in spies to steal his secrets. Kazam, although sorry, closed the factory for what seemed forever. But one day, smoke began to rise out of the smoke stacks once again. Everyone in the town rushed to the gates to see if the legend was going to welcome back his workers but he did not. Thus, inspiring an air of mystery
But all of this would change when one ordinary day, Ally Kazam sent out a notice (by a way no one knows) about a contest. This contest would make the factory open it’s gates once again. Even if it would only open to only five people...
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I know that the prologue is short. I didn't want to give much away yet give you a slight opening into the world of this story. Please review, if it isn't too much trouble. PM if you have questions.
I will not tell you who is who until they show up. This is to keep it a surprise. In fact, I will not tell you if they are Pokemon or human characters, either! Not to insult you guys, though. Here's the prologue:
The Chocolate Factory
Prologue
A mighty factory stood out from the rest of the buildings in Stevens City. The main structure was of a light purple hue that shone almost on it’s own. Spreading off of this main feature was two corridors that went almost to the gates but not quite, they were of the same hue.
The factory rose about three or four stories above the nearest building, a department store that was a block away. That was not including the smokestacks which made the factory even taller by about three more stories. All of this was intimidating to an average person walking down the street.
Even a complete stranger to Stevens City knew what factory this was. It was the famous factory of Ally Kazam, a chocolate making wonder. To those who didn’t know (there wasn’t many), a sign was placed above the mighty door of the factory. The sign read this: “Ally Kazam’s Chocolates”.
Kazam’s many chocolates and other sweets are legendary far and wide. From his ice cream that never melts (even in the summer) to amazing candy eggs that when put on one’s tongue becomes a chocolate flying type! These candies are consumed by many creatures a day, from children to Charizards (a dragon Pokemon). All of these are of course made in this one factory.
“Who works there?” is a commonly asked question about this factory. The main reason for this was that the gates were always locked yet the candy keeps coming out. Even Ally Kazam doesn’t comes out. He hasn’t since about twenty years or so, no one remembers anymore if he is a Pokemon or a man.
The reason that the chocolate factory was closed to the public was this: all other candy makers became jealous of Ally Kazam’s success and sent in spies to steal his secrets. Kazam, although sorry, closed the factory for what seemed forever. But one day, smoke began to rise out of the smoke stacks once again. Everyone in the town rushed to the gates to see if the legend was going to welcome back his workers but he did not. Thus, inspiring an air of mystery
But all of this would change when one ordinary day, Ally Kazam sent out a notice (by a way no one knows) about a contest. This contest would make the factory open it’s gates once again. Even if it would only open to only five people...
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I know that the prologue is short. I didn't want to give much away yet give you a slight opening into the world of this story. Please review, if it isn't too much trouble. PM if you have questions.