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DunsparceGX
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This is my first FanFic, so please tell me exactly what you think ok.
"blah"=talking
'blah'=thinking
Chapter 1:The Beginning
The sun shines brightly in Kanto over a simple two story brick house with a blue roof.This is the house of our hero. "Uhhhhh." yawned a sleepy boy "Another troublesome day and to think living in a house all alone for the summer was fun,"said the young teen sarcastically.
'At least I get to start my pokemon journey today.'He left his fairly large room. It was a pretty nice room with blue wallpaper with a pokeball design on it, a queen sized bed with a pokeball designed blanket, a blue pillow barely hanging off the bed, and a few shelves here and there.He slid down a fleet of stairs into the kitchen which was a normal looking kitchen.
"Eevee, flareon wake up it's breakfast time." yelled the future trainer two his only to pokemon. His pokemon joined him for breakfast.As soon as they were finished eating, the phone rung.
"Coming."said the young teen to the phone.He picked the phone up to hear laughing 'if it's
a prank caller I'll kill them' then a voice broke his thoughts "Hello Nick is that you?" a
female voice said
"Yes it's me Ma'am" said Nick sleeply
"As usual you're always wide and awake."said the voice giggling and after hearing that comment Nick anime fainted "Hello Nick are you there?"said the woman
"YES I'm here Mrs.Ketchum!" said Nick with a bit of annoyance in his voice.
"I just wanted to let you know Ash will come over in a minute or two."
Then the phone hung up " Ohhhh great I get to have a little friend with me on my journey."said Nick with an extreme amount of sarcasm in his voice.He got dressed in a black t-shirtwith a pair of jeans and a belt for carrying pokeballs.
There was a knock on the door.
"Looks like Ash is here."said Nick in his usual lazy voice "COMING." yelled Nick to Ash
"Okay."said Ash from behind the door Nick got his stuff packed in a backpack
"Okay Flareon you have to watch eevee and the house until mom gets back okay."said Nick to his best companion
"Flareon," said the blazing pokemon in front of Nick. Nick opened the door and walked outside to his "little friend" and he locked the door and they started off to Oak's lab.
"So Ash what's your dream" said Nick trying to start up a coversation
"It's simple Nick to be a the greatest Pokemon Master." Ash said punching the air " Well Ash you'll have to beat me first before you can do that 'cause that's my dream to." said Nick while putting his hands behind his head
"I Guess that makes us rivals." said Ash "okay but, lets take the rivalry to the battles okay." then someone interrupted their chat.
Please review!
"blah"=talking
'blah'=thinking
Chapter 1:The Beginning
The sun shines brightly in Kanto over a simple two story brick house with a blue roof.This is the house of our hero. "Uhhhhh." yawned a sleepy boy "Another troublesome day and to think living in a house all alone for the summer was fun,"said the young teen sarcastically.
'At least I get to start my pokemon journey today.'He left his fairly large room. It was a pretty nice room with blue wallpaper with a pokeball design on it, a queen sized bed with a pokeball designed blanket, a blue pillow barely hanging off the bed, and a few shelves here and there.He slid down a fleet of stairs into the kitchen which was a normal looking kitchen.
"Eevee, flareon wake up it's breakfast time." yelled the future trainer two his only to pokemon. His pokemon joined him for breakfast.As soon as they were finished eating, the phone rung.
"Coming."said the young teen to the phone.He picked the phone up to hear laughing 'if it's
a prank caller I'll kill them' then a voice broke his thoughts "Hello Nick is that you?" a
female voice said
"Yes it's me Ma'am" said Nick sleeply
"As usual you're always wide and awake."said the voice giggling and after hearing that comment Nick anime fainted "Hello Nick are you there?"said the woman
"YES I'm here Mrs.Ketchum!" said Nick with a bit of annoyance in his voice.
"I just wanted to let you know Ash will come over in a minute or two."
Then the phone hung up " Ohhhh great I get to have a little friend with me on my journey."said Nick with an extreme amount of sarcasm in his voice.He got dressed in a black t-shirtwith a pair of jeans and a belt for carrying pokeballs.
There was a knock on the door.
"Looks like Ash is here."said Nick in his usual lazy voice "COMING." yelled Nick to Ash
"Okay."said Ash from behind the door Nick got his stuff packed in a backpack
"Okay Flareon you have to watch eevee and the house until mom gets back okay."said Nick to his best companion
"Flareon," said the blazing pokemon in front of Nick. Nick opened the door and walked outside to his "little friend" and he locked the door and they started off to Oak's lab.
"So Ash what's your dream" said Nick trying to start up a coversation
"It's simple Nick to be a the greatest Pokemon Master." Ash said punching the air " Well Ash you'll have to beat me first before you can do that 'cause that's my dream to." said Nick while putting his hands behind his head
"I Guess that makes us rivals." said Ash "okay but, lets take the rivalry to the battles okay." then someone interrupted their chat.
Please review!
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