The Chronicles of Knyte and Ninjal!

[Konion Champ]

This is (what i hope) my best comic yet...

Characters:
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f130/mikerance/SCRATCHCOMICSPRITES.png
Intro:
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f130/mikerance/knintro.png

Comic One:http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f130/mikerance/comicuno.png

Newest:

 

[zuloon]

Okay, that was a really dumb intro. It told me absolutely nothing. Instead of taking up one whole strip to say their names, just say
Kynte: Hey, Ninja. What do you want to do today?
Ninja: I don't know, Kynte. Maybe let's...

You've thusly introduced them AND started an adventure.

 

[OmegaDragon]

ok, everything that zuloon said and-
try to make borders for your panels
give credits to the spriters resource for those backgrounds.
dont put to much empty space in the text box
hope this helps

 

[zuloon]

Oh, and by the way: Don't copy word for word exactly what I said. What I said was lame, it was just an example. Try to make yours more lively and original.

 

[Konion Champ]

New Comic is up!!!

And i will change the intro eventually...