The Comic of dumbness!

[Prime Wolf]

If the comics appear small, click on them to enlarge them

This is a comic based around Team Magma (now Team Storm), Team Aqua (under new mangament), Team Leaf (apparent weetbix importers) Wes, uh Carl (he prefers to be called carl) And a Shadow Lugia

Comics
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Comic 1 (Team Magma and a ....picture)
Comic 2(A new beggining, Brenadan and may finally die)
Comic 3(Lugia The Loser)
Comic 4 (Team Leaf! And A Moltres!)
Comic 5 (Wes...uh, Carl and an Articuno!)
Comic 6 (Wes....uh, carl vs. Shadow Lugia and an Angry Zapdos!) *warning conatins blood, but in a funny way, if that makes sense....*
Comic 7 (Swelly, and a tanning Groudon!)

Specials
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Special 1 (Shadow Lugia Behind The Scenes)

Next chapter coming soon

 

[PerappuPal]

its alright

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Never use smilies on text-bubbles
"I" always goes capitalized
People read from left to right, I can see as if Birch talked first
And most important: R/S Hero´s name is Brendan, not Brendon

 

[Prime Wolf]

New Comic!

Comic 2 (t3h Pokemon)

I also edited my first post enjoy

 

[Octillery]

Okay. Don't use smilies. Or acronyms like WTF. You can't ACTUALLY say IRL can you?

Second of all, its a crappy journey comic with swearing. You swear to a point where its very unnecessary. Swearing doesn't make a comic. If you must swear, only use it lightly. I mean lightly as in if a character is extremely, extremely mad or just once in a while.

 

[The Admiral]

Okay. Don't use smilies. Or acronyms like WTF. You can't ACTUALLY say IRL can you?

Colon left paranthesis. Suck it. Yeah, nobody will know what it mean,s but suck it anyways.

Second of all, its a crappy journey comic with swearing. You swear to a point where its very unnecessary. Swearing doesn't make a comic. If you must swear, only use it lightly. I mean lightly as in if a character is extremely, extremely mad or just once in a while.

It's called "The Comic of Dumbness" so maybe that was intentional. <<;;

Question: Is this serious? It seems more like parody.

-PM

 

[Prime Wolf]

It's called "The Comic of Dumbness" so maybe that was intentional. <<;;

Yeah it was intetional, but i guess it could be calmed down abit, lol.

Question: Is this serious? It seems more like parody.

-PM

Well it is still going to have the adventure of getting badged but it will take the mick along the way.

I will make a new one soon, but my Computer is running slow so all the pages with resources arent very fast. =/

 

[XD375]

It's okay, and I don't mind, but some you should warn the little ones about the swearing.

 

[Chaos Rush]

It isn't that good, and don't swear! You did heavy swearing...

 

[Prime Wolf]

Comic 3 (battle with a rival)

Yeah sorry aboyut the swearing, i will try, lol, to tone it down

 

[Chaos Rush]

That Comic is a little bit funny...
I did laugh at that one...(especially the Bagon fart!)

 

[Prime Wolf]

LOL, I changed the swearing, i use Biatch for b*tch, but theres only one swear word in this comic

Comic 4 (Oldale Sucks!)

 

[Chaos Rush]

Well, I didn't laugh, and you should'nt swear in your comics. Especially this word:
F***

 

[Prime Wolf]

Update

Comic 5 (1st Wild Pokemon!)

 

[Prime Wolf]

Update

Comic 6 (A new beggining, brendan and may finally die!)


I know long name, lol

 

[Chaos Rush]

Um.. I can't zoom in on ur comic. Try reposting, but make it readable.

 

[Prime Wolf]

Um.. I can't zoom in on ur comic. Try reposting, but make it readable.

Um i used Image shack, but just put your mouse on it and you should see a little box in the bottom right corner to enlarge it.

EDIT: try this link

http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic6wt3.png

 

[Chaos Rush]

Well, I could see it better, but it was still blurry. Also, heavy swearing is not allowed on this forum...so stop ur swearing!

 

[Prime Wolf]

Well, I could see it better, but it was still blurry. Also, heavy swearing is not allowed on this forum...so stop ur swearing!

It wasnt that heavy i called him Assholie, i will chnage his name though I will keep it as Archie.

 

[Chaos Rush]

You just broke a big rule. You said "A**hole". And also, you said "S**t" in ur comic. Swearing is not allowed! Stop breaking SPP rules!!