Holy run-on sentence, Batman! Something does need to be done about this - it's the worst run-on I've seen in a long time:/As Sapph sat up in bed and looked outside his room window at the opalescent mountainside that bordered the city and the Icy Pass (which he and Haley would have to traverse to get to their next hotspot on their Corei tour) he felt beneath the bright green scrubs he was made to wear whilst recovering at the stiff white bandages that concealed the scar that Anuvi’s Yaiba no Hayashi had left on him since his most recent and final berserker rage.
These recollections then led to the memory of Zen’s old trainer
Sleet pounded on the windows as Haley was led down the corridor by the principal to her new classroom.
For all three: "Led" is the past tense of "lead."A golden white Pokémon led the way out of the subzero confines of the Icy Pass,
Search me... lol. Thanks for enjoying that part, really. I thought I had screwed up the first flashback badly, writing from Carla's POV and switching to Haley's rather than sticking with Haley's POV throughout. Well, if it worked...Is it me or the relationship between those four reminds me of the 'Pax armada' of before world war I somehow?
Guess so... heeheeheeOK so let me get this straight. Two fire stone pokemon evolved Saph met up with his brother and Haley rival and he catches a new pokemon and his strongest okemon can't use it's most powerfull move without being in danger of dieing and you wrote that in a way that carries very well.
O.O Whatever works for ya, mate...This is why I don't go to bed until 2 in the morning.
'Til next time.*jumps off a balcony* *realizes can't fly* *falls on head*
Yeah, you caught me... fortunately, he'll be a lovable a**hole... wait, that made no sense at all...Kaynid is going to be the new ***hole to take the place of Zen isn't he.
It's all good. Sapph can't win every battle...ok, thought you won a new badge cause chapter 31 you were in a gym battle but i guess i was wrong. But any ways nice work on a new pokemon capture
Somehow that made me laugh... *Scratches head while trying to figure out how...*Holy run-on sentence, Batman! Something does need to be done about this - it's the worst run-on I've seen in a long time:/
Yeah, there will be drama... more drama to shake a forest at! Especially amongst the pokes in the near future...So, now we're moving onto foursomes, huh? And considering the history that they have with each other, may the drama ensue! It's funny who you can meet in some random ice cave. The same sort of drama would ensue, I imagine, if/when Keynid gets cycled into Sapph's active roster. I really don't figure that his "King of the world" attitude is gonna mesh with the rest of the group. Still, from a distance, drama can be fun XD
True. Don't mess with Miss Calculus of the World, girls...Interesting backstory between Carla and Haley, with the long-standing rivalry of smarts of sorts. Though I know of a certain girl, born and raised in South Carolina, that could pwn the both of them in that regard XD
(PHAILED ATTEMPT AT MODESTY FOLLOWS...)Whole lotta developments - new capture, not one but TWO Fire Stone evolutions, and now a pair of rival-esque traveling companions. And the crew seems to be going through a lot of those lately XD
You ought to check out HoSS (second fanfic, currently on chapter 2). The invite is extended to all! Read it and let all hell break loose through your reviews!Again, a nice, solid chapter here.
that's great! now, put the sugar down nice and easy, and step away from the soda pop...FINALLY!!! I CAUGHT UP!!!
I've caught up with the other people!
I Really like this fic!
I can't say anything about it because I'm too excited!
It's so good, I keep putting exclamation marks at the end of each sentence!
*Haley proceeds to b*tch-slap Kindindra again.*WHY Can't lavander and Anuvii like each other? Cause you said recently it was all "Mentor-ish"... Seems like you were duplicating the Sapph/Nora Predicament... But that made sense, Because there's already Evergreen Joy Jr. that shares affections with Sapph, and Haley Seems to have a crush on him...
>Get's double-slapped by Haley<
OK! I take that back about Haley... Kinda ...
Well, the tall and short of it will be revealed in the double chapter special. Let's just say what happens next will leave anyone...But, as I was saying, Sapph has enough girl troubles without Nora...
But Anuvii doesn't have anyone! Honestly, Give em a chance!
Glad you enjoyed the funneh... Zen will move into that role a lot more in the future...But, of course it gets forgotten in light of Anuvii's startling revelation... After that Joke, I ended up like Zen after Ace winged him: Fallen off bed, but I was laughing!)
Eh, no. Zen drew it out of her and inplanted it in Anuvi. Think of it as an Essence transfusion... lol. Lavender's evolution will be permanent if she manages to attain it via the canon-legit manner (Stone/Friendship/Rock)By the way, when "Lav" had the Plate power trapped in her, would that inside of her of kept her a leafeon? That would mean that for her to stay a form, forevermore, she would have to have an essence caught within her...
Yep, looks like you got it...So, let me get this myth strait, Arcuas has power over all elements, correct?
Then, he creates special plates that are each imbued with a power of his, correct?
Then, he sends these rocketing across the earth, and all who are passed over, are made to that type?
And the ones not passed over are Normal typed? Correct?
What of Dual-types? Were they passed by two plates? Thant means the plates flew off at differing angles! Amazing!
Ah you mean ??? like in attacks like Curse, right? Yh, i can think of a way to fix it in...By the way You had BETTER end up including something about the ??? Plate that was removed from the game! (Sealed away pokemon, anyone?)
You're still holding onto the sugar aren't you?0_0 I just realized my P.S. is larger than the main part!
Those that had gripped her the closest
Singular/plural number agreementeach filled with a red and white (...) pokéball
True, he was worrying a lot more frequently these days,
the repair work that had been done to his jacket.
“Please come again!” the woman called cheerfully as he left, pulling his jacket over his messy brown hair and threading his arms through the sleeves.
I want you to find it... and bring me its life force.
I TOLD you plant life and Mother Nature would rise up and consume us all! I TOLD Y'ALL!“I wished to discuss Zula’s actions with you.”
“But of course, my lord,” Vulca replied
Anuvi: I hope so!Whoa, since Yaiba no Hayashi is now Acciao del Selva, will Anuvi get it back?
Lavender: You could stand to mention it more... ^_^Really, have I mentioned that Lav and Crimson are my favorites on Sapph's team?
Crimson *sweatdrops*: Um... Reg is Nora's brother. Haley's brother is Kamren.And, Nora is travelling with REG? Like, Haley's brother Reg? Aww... Man, if they get together, he should change, like Gary.
Tyrus: Uh... Deep-freeze?How did you manage to make a tomato cool?
Zen: Thank you, thank you! You're a great crowd!I like Zen and Anuvi the best.
Mighty: This is called Character Development and is essentially...Sapph seems to be changing from a kid to someone that could beat his brother and think nothing of it.
Mace: I don't.I like the grass/electric idea.
Pyrrhus (emo aura surrounds his body) : So Team Shadow intend to rend another family apart? Have they no qualms, no shame, no conscious at all?! Doth the dark abyss of evil so permeate thine souls that bonds of such deep connection matter nought to your unredeemable souls?*Jaw Drop*
That is just NO FAIR!
Zula's Squrage is Anuvii's sister?!?!
Blitzkrieg: SQueeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...Now, on a lighter note...
Lavender as a Jolteon makes me lol.
Suger Rush all the way! ^_^
Anuvi:And, I thought up a name for a new attack for Anuvii!
... Wind Edge.
Well? I wanted Anuvii to still get to use a sword, so I came up with the idea of him charging the foe with a leaf blade wrapped in wind!
For more, see The Corei NetworkFawna, Anuvi’s sister, had always been a heroine to him as he grew up. Now that he’s come face to face with her on the battlefield, armed with his own lost technique the Yaiba no Hayashi, and Legenido City, Sapph, Haley, Carla and Rubin in danger, Anuvi must make the ultimate choice… and find a way within himself to follow the path he’s chosen.
Vapor: Save us, oh mighty one, lord of the obvious... save us *rolls eyes rudely*I TOLD you plant life and Mother Nature would rise up and consume us all! I TOLD Y'ALL!
Ento: Corei doesn't seem to be an ideal holiday spot this year... somebody should have warned them darned tourists...Anyway, looks like this town is not to be the place to be, with both Light and Shadow descending upon it. Especially with killer tomato Pokemon causing all sorts of trouble.
Volt: Yeah. but Jolteon are usually all over the place due to outrageously awesome speed. That's why AD made me a cooler, humbler Jolteon. I hardly ever talk when i appear. I'm all about the battles and keeping things calm between my teammates.Hyper JolteonLavender is hyper. And a bit predictable. It's not a problem, just that I saw it coming from a mile away. I will warn not to go overboard on the hyperactiveness, though. An older fic author tried too hard to make certain characters of theirs too hyper, and ultimately it ruined the experience for me. So just don't make her too hyper, and you should be okay
Ace: Readers were debriefed on the "Anuvi has a sister" record in Chapter 21... so that shold be no shock.ZOMG Anuvi has a sister? And she has his powers? And Zula is her partner. That I did NOT see coming. We move from trainer-trainer drama to Squirrage-Squirrage drama. I can't wait...
Bolt: Sounds wicked! Hey, guys! Think Carla will give me an attack like that?Meh, I think both attack names are kinda odd. Naming special, super powered attacks after large American luxury sedans is the new black, don't 'ya know?
Zen (looking down a clipboard) :OK, so you'll join Neos345 and SamuraiDragon1 on the PM list... now where's Matt Silver gone?I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, but be warned that I'll be without internet for the next month. Also, please start PMing me when new chapters come out. I don't check the forums for fic updates anymore unless I get a PM. Thanks.
Keynid: Why? The Mighty Keynid was only present in one chapter to date!I like this chapters
Lavender: AD actually scripted a reply to this question... *Ahem* It says: " Well, shadowlight, that is a very good question. I first debated this during the Sapph vs. Ricon battle, having Lavender duke it out with Farfetch'd as Sapph's second Pokemon. But with so many Flying alternate Eeveelutions, I couldn't just pick one, for copyright reasons. I mean, there's already Feathreon and Zepheon (awesome designs. I especially liked Feathreon) but even if I am abe to make up an uber cool Eeveelution design for the other nine elements of Eeveelution, what will I call them? Kazeon? Toxeon? Serpeon?"What Happens if Lavender is hit with a type that would make her an undiscovered eeveelution? I am sorry if you already said and i didn't notice.
Crimson: I hope she's not... for Anuvi's sake...I wonder if Anuvi's Sister is being controlled or doing this of her own accord? It sound as if she has free will.
Mighty: The actual plural form of the species slugma, or the Vocanica gastropodus, which resides in volcanic lava streams and exudes a sheel temperature of 123.09 degrees Centigrade, or 345.435 degrees K, which happens to be a mere 0.08% of it 's core temperature...I Hope You All Don't Get Eaten By Slugmas(Slugmi, Slugmeese, Slugma)
)_( Dude, you are... How do I put this politly...Blitzkrieg: More, please!
Easily the best lines in the chapter, nice imagery.Opening her eyes sharply, the gold and white was replaced with a shining neon green light as her dreadlocks sprouted thorns and elongated from her skull into the ground, green light tracing their path which led straight into the woods that surrounded the chalet-filled valley.
These Light people seem more dangerous than Team Shadow...now they're going after ex-operatives... scary. *shudders*She dropped to her knees in shock as her vision began to fade. Staring up unseeingly into her assailant’s merciless gaze, he went on in the same soft voice, seemingly unperturbed; as though shooting people was in his genes, “For your crimes against man and alleging yourself with Pokémon to carry out your acts of darkness, the Light brings you... salvation.”