LOL... I'm not surprised... the dark form of Solarbeam, Lunar beam becomes more powerful the closer the user is to nighttime, and if it could blow up a quarter of a house at ten in the morning, then you have the ultimate dark type attack.Except Zen's poor infiltration skills. tsk tsk. Poor show my fighting type friend, poor show. As a fan of those type of games, stealth based (Assassin's Creed, Splinter Cell etc.) RPG's with stealth options (Oblivion, Fallout 3) I think I've infiltrated enough virtual houses to know that it could have been a lot less messy.
Yeah, well, I never got the hang of such games. Plus he wasn't there for an assassination. no matter how much the world would hero worship him for nixing Reg. either way, they had an easier time escaping with no one in any fit state to give chase.
But at least we got to see Lunar Beam, I want that move for my Umbreon.
Thank you, thank you all!COREI QUEST RULES!!!
In other words, it all went according to plan.Obviously Reg is not to be trusted. And that entire family save Nora and Rosa are insane. Although... I'm sure there has to be some record of Sapph owning those Pokemon. After all, what would happen if he got his Pokemon stolen? A bit of a plot hole there, but by the time anyone figured it out, he would have been long gone.
Too true... now Leopold and Isabelle may have just as well have lost their daughter for good.I still can't wrap my mind about how cruel and closed minded the Saunders clan is. I mean, I'm all for evil, but not at the cost of a girl who only wanted to chase her dream. That's not just low - that's damn low.
If wishes were horses... your Umbreons would pwn all.If I trade you a Pokemon, can you give it Lunar Beam? I need that move now XD
Nah, Nora and Reg's mom isn't much of a fighter. Never has been. Rosa was champion for a very long time and was subsequently rarely home. Leopold was sickened by what it did to his father and swore to never let women one up him in his lifetime.Maybe Rosa made Leonard wash a lot of floors or something like that when he was little; and adding that to a complex of 'must-have-women-barefoot-and -pregnant' meant a lot of trouble for Nora.
That, or he must've had one major fight with his wife or something and he is taking it with the entire gender? don't you think?
Nora's mom, Isabelle, is very much alive. She's just no help in a confrontation, least of all against her husband.On a final note, has anybody mentioned anything about Nora's mother; if she is alive, I'd like to see her reaction towards the treatment of her daughter; that would be a good excuse for ending the Saunders masculine line once and for all, if you know what I mean. If not, a good plot filler could be done from that, or not?
Maybe... But I shall never be ashamed!Who are you, EM1, fgs? xD
You should be ashamed of yourself P:
ah, well... there's always next year...Man, did a lot of things happen in this chapter, I had to read it over twice to fully take in some of the scenes. The Arlene/Sapph was rematch was pretty entertaining as was the quest to save Nora, but honestly, this quote killed it:
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *breathes* XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDQuote:
And without a backwards glance, Rosa Saunders moved off twards the corner amidst a shower of sapphire rose petals, muttering, "Let that be a lesson to you punks. Nobody messes with G."
You would've had a lock for best fic quote if this chapter had been posted before the noms
Who, me?And damn you for teasing us with ships! >D
If only... I really hate March. not to mention April and June...Now that you've posted a gigantic chapter like EM1, I think it'd be fair to the readers if you came out with a chapter as quick as EM1 ;P
Hey, there, new guy! Welcome to Serebii! There's a whole plethora of awesome fanfics out here, this one being one of the best of the best:Edit: This is my first post, so I'm wondering why the Celebi by my name is green. :O
Maybe it's because i'm green to this forum? XD
Or, perhaps, everyone's own Celebi is green so they can tell themselves apart from others without reading the name.
...air dragon said:At this, Zeta’s green eyes narrowed, and...
Zeta flounced out of the closet her cheeks bright pink, leaving Gawain sprawled amongst a mess of mop heads and buckets and a bright red, stinging palm print upon his cheek.
Funny you should mention that fanfic...I'm actually reading the prequel to it. XDAir Dragon said:Hey, there, new guy! Welcome to Serebii! There's a whole plethora of awesome fanfics out here, this one being one of the best of the best:
Simply.play with Frisbees or simple kick back and soak up some sun.
Epic.The two pre-teens glared at each other for a couple of tense minutes, the wind whistling as Haley’s ponytail danced in the wind. Then, in one fluid motion both stomped forward and yelled, “Rock! Paper! SCISSORS!”
On ‘scissors’, both boy and girl swung their fists forwards, showing each other clenched fists.
“It’s a draw!” they yelled in unison, raising their fists again and bringing them down again, both showing open palms. Again, they yelled, “it’s a draw!”
A third flash of fists. Both scissors.
“It’s a draw!”
The duel of luck raged on, drawing a couple of curious and frightened stares as the yokels around them gave the duo a wide berth as they walked up and down the street.
“It’s a draw!”
“It’s a draw!”
“It’s a draw!”
“It’s a draw!”
“It’s a draw!”
“It’s a draw!”
Haley turned her scissors into a victory sign and grinned as Sapph clenched his open hand in frustration at his loss.
“Best two out of three!”
Seven rounds later, Haley and Sapph walked to a large, log-fenced area with the words, ‘UTOPIA ISLAND NATIONAL PARK’ stamped in stencil lettering on a neat sign board.
Good. I’m not good at fielding complaints…Wait!
boy are you spoiling us. But hey... I'm not complaining.
What else is new? For a grammar Naz of sorts, I certainly phail at doing a good job every now and then.Just gonna make a few observations here.
-I noticed a few spelling errors, nothing major though.
Dark types are also known as the evil type for a reason you know…-Lavender is amazing as an Umbreon. Like scary amazing. No nonsense win.
You know what? I could use that… all props to you, of course.-I reckon Rapid Fire would have been a much cooler name for Arcana's uber move she used. Not to impose or anything. *whistles*
Zen thanks ya…-Zen just keeps getting cooler and cooler. I never knew such coolification existed
Herbert is a happy Gym Leader because of your fan mail…-Herbert rules nuf sed.
Believe you me, I can’t wait to show you.And that's all i wanted to point out. Very nice chapters, I can't wait to find out what happens at the Cove.
LOL, Lavender as an Espeon is Lavender on her good side…O.O at Lavender as an Umbreon, and an Espeon. Remind me to never get on her bad side...
‘S alright… You’re reviewing now.Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I'm pretty bad at it, I am caught up on chapters, though.
More Herbert Sr. fanmail! SQUEEEE!I agree with Diddy, Herbert is my favorite Gym Leader.
Cool, just do it fast. An announcement concerning it lies at the end of these messages.Wait, you're accepting OCs for the League? Interesting... I must've missed that post, sorry... I may just hafta PM you an OC.
For the sake of being an evil writer, I’m gonna leave you guessing.Lavender is one of my favorite characters in this fic, I'm wondering what she'll evolve into... That is, if she evolves. I started to think maybe she'll stay the same because of her ability.
Yh, lots of character development for the guy, and more to come! I think I do a better job with Kamren than any other character, most of which are sorta anime stereotypes.I really liked the scene between Carla and Kamren at chapter 37.
It really was a great change from the guy who if memory serves me right was at the verge of killing Saph in earlier chapters, and who at least managed to rig his alarm clock in order to get the fire starter.
I do, but like with Araleon, I’m gonna leave you guessing.P.D: It is me, or are planning to turn a certain pair into an item later in the story?
If you know what I mean.
****** shotgun, not amused**comes out of the closet*
So yeah, hm... Pretty nice place you've got here and- okay let's face it: I was lazy. But hey, I'm here now, right?
Another Lavender fan… wonder what would happen if I evolved her… well, we’ll see… And though the idea was inspired by Red’s Eevee, I had to think of an alternative to Sapph carrying evo stones around with him.I noticed a few typos in places, mainly unfinished words and such, but nothing too terribly damaging. What's more awesome is that gym battle. More specifically in that battle, Lavender. I don't care if she was inspired by Red's Eevee or not in the PokeSpecial manga; she's probably the most unique Eevee I've ever read about. Really like the character more than what is healthy, probably.
LOL, the continent’s agricultural populace is coming for youuuuu… XDIn fact, let me start a rant about how I adore your creativity. What really sets your work apart from all the other good fics out there is your ability to make quality material all from your head. It's like Tolkien or something. I enjoy reading TCQ mostly because of the variety of new fakemon, attacks, and places you can throw out there. What's more, the vast majority of them are indescribably awesome, or otherwise hilarious to imagine (vegetable pokes for the win).
Don’t worry, I plan to stick around a while. I’m only 22 (23 soon) so other than keeping my inner child alive, I think I’ll work this for what it’s worth.Because I can't say much about plotting having not tried a full length story before, and characterization is A-okay in my book, the potential helpfulness of this "review" has come to an end. So yeah, um, don't disappear off the face of the earth, or something. =P *glares pointedly at zombie-Saber*
Until next time!
The battle of good vs evil continues next time… on Rock Paper Scissors Z… XDEpic.
Rock Paper Scissors is freakin' serious.
Let’s not forget the Kent’s ultimate purpose of their journey. I’ll refresh your memory soon.So Kamren (who seems to have had a huge character overhaul) and Carla are reunited. Haley has another rival (how many does she have now? xP) in Nicola, which you set up nicely with the concluding sentence of Chapter 38.
Good point with the Herbert muddle up. He’s Herbert Sr, but without introducing Herbert Jr, it’d be rather out of place.One thing I didn't get was why Herbert, when introducing himself, called himself the "First". Maybe he were the Second or the Third Herbert, but not the First P: Although, the battle between him and Sapph was pretty nice. I agree with the majority in stating that Lavender is amazing
… maybe. *evil grin*WHO ARE THOSE TRESSPASSERS? TEAM SHADOW??? >D
As always, you’re one-liners say it all, Merlock. Welcome back.not bad both chapters were great air dragon keep it up