The Diary of an Invisible Trainer

[The Red Butterfly]

Hey! I decided to write another fic while still writing my first one THE FINAL SHOWDOWN! I really hope you all like this one and Tell me what you think of my new story when you’re done reading! I want to hear what all of you have to say good or bad!

INTRODUCTION

Dear Diary,
I heard around town that my twin brother recently won the Whirl Cup. I know I should be happy for him but I can’t find the heart to do that. You see my brother and I have always loved pokemon so for our eighth birthday our parents got us both one. My brother got the boy nidoran since he’s a boy and I got the girl nidoran since I’m a girl. I got so close with my nidoran it instantly became my best friend. I named her Jadie after me. Jadie got me through my toughest times and was always there when I needed her most. I knew what a good team we made together and couldn’t wait to go out and try to win badges in my home region of Johto. Finally my brother and mines much anticipated tenth birthday came and our parents let us go to travel and master our skills. My brother won his gym battles left and right while I lost every single one. Finally after my brother had won his eighth badge he decided we should go home and tell our parents that he’d be competing in the Johto League. It broke my heart watching my brother show off his hard earned badges and listening to my parents say how proud they were that he was their son and how lucky they were. Then came the dreaded moment of when my parents turned their big I’m-ready-to-hear-your-big-accomplishments eyes on me. I told them I didn’t win any badges. Their soft eyes turned cold. My dad then swiftly picked my nidoran up and started to walk outside. Terrified I screamed and my mother took me to my room, sat me down on my bed and gave me the big family speech. She told me that for the past ten generations everyone in our family carried the title of Legendary Trainer. She also said since I didn’t work hard enough I didn’t deserve a pokemon and my dad was taking it to the wild to be free. I started screaming. I was so furious with my parents and how they took away my one and only best friend and my only joy in life away from me. My mom then told me to stop and act like a proper lady and I was bringing disgrace to our family. Also she said I had better start acting like my brother if I wanted any respect from them and like that they shut me out in the cold darkness. It’s like I wasn’t even part of their family it anymore. It was like I was invisible. So that night I ran away-far away not knowing where to go. I finally found a cave so I hid in there by myself for a few days. I soon realized I couldn’t stay there forever so I left and picked up on pokemon training again. The only time I trained and battled was at night. I got very good very fast. Even though I did battle again I still didn’t want to be seen so I’d hide behind a tree or emerge behind a dark shadow. One day however, I will show my face and the world how truly powerful I really am and get revenge on the family that shut me out in complete darkness.
Sincerely,
The Invisible Trainer

 

[Dilasc]

Delete the copies of this thread,
After all, they'll still stay dead.

Anyway, this is a bit too short. There is no paragraphing, and you have a few spacing issues at some point. This leads me to believe you typed this up in the reply box, which is bad. You may want to work on revising this.

 

[Yami Ryu]

Guess I was wrong that this was the forum glitch. seriously, you need to not make copies of a single thread, even if it is poor and not getting the reviews you want. It's your own damn fault for not trying to make something people can read.

 

[The Red Butterfly]

As the sun set dusk fell over the city of Blackthorn. Everyone scurried into their houses to get some shut eye. Everyone but Jadie. Deep in the Dragons Jadie stepped out into the moonlight from her dark corner. She walked out of there and deeper into the city looking for a trainer worthy of her time.
“Skarmory lets go!” a boy yelled as he released his poke ball. “Do you see any pokemon we can battle?” He asked looking around. Just then a rustle came from the bush behind him. “Did you here that skar?” he whispered to his pokemon slowly stepping away from his spot. “You were looking for a battle?” Jadie asked from behind the bush. “Uuuhhh…..who are you let me see your face!” the boy asked. “Battle me and win and you got yourself a deal.” Jadie said in low icy voice that made chills run up the boy’s body. “Are…you..the invisible trainer?” he asked shaking. “So you’ve heard of me?” Jadie hissed. “YEAH AND I’M NOT SCARED SO COME ON SKARMORY LETS BATTLE!” he asked closing his eyes with fright. Skarmory flew up in the sky then came down and landed protectively in front of its trainer. “Houndoom go” Jadie said in almost a whisper and she launched her poke ball in the air. Houndoom stood straight up and put its head up high and proud.
“Skarmory agility!” the boy yelled. The bird flew in the air and moved side to side so fast it looked as if there was a string of silver light in the sky. “Houndoom lay down” Jadie said softly. The pokemon obeyed her and laid down in its spot. The boy saw his opportunity. “Skarmory steel wing right below you.” He said very confidently. Skarmory flew down and stretched out its wing and aimed right for Houndoom. It was right above the pokemon head when Jadie yelled “Houndoom jump on Skarmory!” Houndoom jumped right up and pounced on top of Skarmory. “Oh no! Skarmory shake it off!” he yelled frustrated. The pokemon helplessly attempted to shake the pokemon off of it but it couldn’t get the Houndoom to budge. “Houndoom fire blast all over it!” Jadie commanded. Houndoom jumped off Skarmory into the air, looked down and unleashed blazing hot fire onto the steel bird. The pokemon cried of pain from the critical direct hit. It fell to the ground and made a huge bang. “Skarmory!” the boy cried as it retuned it to the poke ball. Jadie returned hers also. “Looks like you don’t get to see me after all.” Was all Jadie had to say. The boy stood puzzled as he watched the dark figure disappear into the darkness. He couldn’t let this go. The boy followed her into the Dragons Den. As soon as Jadie got herself situated comfortably he made his move.
“So this is what you look like” he said walking towards her being able to see thanks to the moon. Jadie jumped up. “What do you think you’re doing here?” she hissed. “I was thinking about asking you the same thing.” He said “shouldn’t you be home?” he asked. “No I’m a trainer I’m allowed to travel.” She answered. “Same here. My name is Dulton what’s yours?” he asked kindly. “Jadie” she answered pulling back some of her black hair out of her face.” “Cool Jadie maybe I’ll see you around and you can teach me some of your awesome battling techniques.” He said. “I highly doubt it!” Jadie snapped back. Dulton turned around and smiled at her then faded into the night.
Dear Diary,
I don’t get it everyone is supposed to be scared of me and not know who I am. I’ve battled a ton of trainers and no one bothered to ask me why I’m out only at night. It’s what I’m used to I shouldn’t be getting be getting any attention, no likes me. At least that’s what I thought. This kid named Dulton I battled followed back here and wants to see me again. He also got a glimpse of my face, something no one has seen for five years. I wonder if this is some sort of sign to get back to life again and walk around in the sunshine, TO MAKE FRIENDS! ………I’m too scared to though. How do I know they’ll just slip away from me just like Jadie did. Maybe I’ll have to get back in the world and find out.
Sincerely,
The Invisible trainer (for now)