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Okay, your new so i'll go easy on you. The grammar isn't the best, and the plot isn't at all clear (it should be revealed in comic one), so I would suggest fixing the grammar and making that the prolouge.
it makes no sense, you can't spell simple words like "take", "buy", and "hello", (and fridge) and you could at least give an introduction to the story.