The end of Kanto

[Pikachu kiddo]

Season 1
Episode 1

credit
Jackster-for the MD sprites
The spriters resource-For alot of pokemon sprites

 

[Tolneir]

a little random, dont you think?

 

[Jerry_Francis]

Okay, your new so i'll go easy on you. The grammar isn't the best, and the plot isn't at all clear (it should be revealed in comic one), so I would suggest fixing the grammar and making that the prolouge.

 

[nattydbzmaster]

i like it its good make more

 

[Nixx]

You need to check your grammar, your spelling, and your text boxes. Also, I don't know what is happening, and that should be clear.

 

[nattydbzmaster]

i can understand fine

 

[NEO GOHAN]

I understand fine too: THIS NEEDS WORK.

it makes no sense, you can't spell simple words like "take", "buy", and "hello", (and fridge) and you could at least give an introduction to the story.