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The Five Senses

JirachiandLucario

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The Five Senses


Prologue:
The Five Senses,
Touch,
Hear,
See,
Smell and
Taste.
The senses help us learn, and live.
The senses are a powerful thing,
and they are about to get even more powerful.

In the Year 1991,
five humans were born with a stronger sense.
Whether it be,
Touch,
Hear,
See,
Smell or
Taste,
these humans were more powerful than any before them.
This is their story.​

*Jhoto Region 2001*

“Good night honey,” said a calm gentle voice. The boy in the bed smiled and lowered his head onto the pillow as his mother turned off the light. She closed the door softly making the quietest creek possible. The young boy of 10 years of age quickly fell asleep.

***
Bang!
The boy woke up suddenly after he heard the load noise outside his door. His room was still pitch black and the lack of a window made it even darker than normal rooms. He was panting heavily, his body covered in sweat. Burn, the boys newly born Cyndaquil was yelping at his door.

“Burn! Come here!” The boy said still panting. It was easy to tell the boy was scared. What had made the load noise and what was Burn yelping at? Once the Cyndaquil was on his bed and had ceased his yapping the boy could here voices outside.

“Where is the boy?” a man yelled.

“I…I don’t know what your talking about,” His mother cried.

“Don’t play games with me women! Where is your son?!” The man yelled again.

“I don’t have a son!” She yelled at the man. The boy was stunned, why would his mother say such things. “Wool,” he heard her whisper “go get Zach to safety.”

“Safety?” Zach thought “Is something bad happening?”

“What was that?!” The man yelled. “What did you whisper to that Flaffy?!”

“Nothing!” Zach’s mother cried. Zach’s door opened and a sliver of light flooded in. Wool stood in the door way, her pink wool illuminated by the hall light. She quickly closed the door and walked over to Zach’s bed.

“Flaffy!” She cried grabbing Zach’s hand. She pointed to a small bag and Zach’s dresser. Zach knew what she wanted him to do. He quickly grabbed the bag and opened up his dresser drawers. He stuffed clothes into his bag. Zach also put on some blue jeans and a white t-shirt.

“Is that your son’s room?” He heard the man yell.

“No!” His mother said.

“Well than I guess you won’t mind if I take a look in there will you?” the man said.

“No!” His mother screamed as she cried.

“Graaah!” He heard another man scream.

“Ahhh!” The man that had been yelling at his mother was screaming too. “Get him off of me!” Zach could hear his mother running down the hall now.

BANG! The sound of a gunshot could be heard down the hall.

“Roger!” Zach’s mom screamed. Then there was another gun shot and a blood curdling scream form his mother. A loud thump signified his mother had fallen to the ground. Zach’s door creaked open and his mother crawled in.

“Zach,” She panted, blood was dripping from her chest. She clutched her chest and hissed in pain. “Zach honey, you have to leave now. Take Wool and Burn with you to our cabin. I’ll see you soon.”

Zach grabbed a jacket and threw it on. He also grabbed his favorite toy, a stuffed Pichu, and slipped on his shoes. “Goodbye mommy,” He said crying.

“Wait Zach” His mother whispered, “take this.” She held out a small golden locket. She wore the locket around her neck every day. Zach walked over to her and took it from her hand. He gently hugged and kissed his mother goodbye. “Leave now honey.” His mother said.

Zach picked up Bark in one of his hands. The Cyndaquil, being a new born was small light and easy to carry. With his other hand he grabbed Wool’s. “Goodbye,” he whispered. Then, with Bark in his left hand and Wool in his right hand he ran. He ran right through the wall and outside. Now all he had to do was reach his cabin and wait for his mother and father to come.


Chapter 1: Touch

-Kanto Region 2006-

“Goodbye guys,” a young teenager said to his pokemon. “I’m going to work.” The young teenager was named Zach Swaney. Zach is not like any normal human, because Zach has a better sense of touch. Zach can walk through solid objects and sense vibrations in them.

Zach walked out of his small house in Vermillion city and walked down to his work. He was a construction workers apprentice and was helping to build a large building. Zach jogged through the shopping district of the town and up to the almost finished building.
As he neared the site the grabbed a bright, shining, yellow construction hat off of a small shelf. He put it on his head covering his short brown hair. At the time Zach was wearing faded blue jeans with many holes in them and a black t-shirt. Zach wasn’t as big as the other people working on the building since he was only 15 years old and 5’8”. However Zach was beginning to grow some visible muscles.

Zach was looking for Phil, his teacher. Phil told him what to do and how to do it. Phil was usually behind the building in a make shift office. However today he wasn’t, instead he was looking for Zach. As Phil spotted Zach he ran over to him. Phil was a large man, about 6’6” with a thick neck and large muscles. He wore a white shirt with a jean jacket over it and a white construction hat.

“Hey, Zach!” Phil said with his strong New York accent. “Some people are lookin’ for ya. Their in my office.” Phil pointed towards a small portable and crappy office near the back of the building.

“Oh,” Zach said quite confused. “Thanks.” He walked towards the “office.” Zach knew the safest way to the “office” and so, naturally, he didn’t take it. Instead he took his way to the office. Through the walls of the building and out the other side he went, it didn’t take long. He now stood in front of the crappy excuse for an office. He put his hand on the knob of the door and opened it. The door made a loud and obnoxious squeak. Zach stepped into the small, portable room only to see two men he never wanted to see again.

“Oh,” Zach sighed “you guys again.”

“Why Zachary, you make it seem like it’s a bad thing for us to be here.” said one of the men sitting on a mall couch in the left corner of the room. Both of the men wore identical black robes and black sunglasses. The two had the same haircut; well you couldn’t call it a haircut since they were bald.

“Isn’t it tough,” Zach said to them. “Aren’t you guys going to try to kill me, make me run away from my home and kill the ones I love?” Zach had gone through this ordeal three times before, and he was fed up.

“Well of course not,” the other man said. “Not if you come to us without a fight.”

“Why should I? You’re just going to dissect me to get to my power.” Zack said. He was leaning against a wall ready to run when the time was right. The two men knew what he was going to do and were waiting patiently for him to do it.

“Why yes we are,” The first man said. He stood up and put his hands behind his back. “you see, we of Revolution want to change the world. But to do that we need your help, well actually we need your sense.”

“Change the world?” Zach chuckled. “Yeah right! You want to rule the world.”

“If that’s what you want to call it.” The second man said also standing up. They were getting ready to strike and Zach was getting ready to run. “Now why don’t you…” The man put out his hand signifying Zach should grab hold of it. It was now or never for Zach. Zach jumped through the wall and burst out the other side!

“He’s running.” The first man said into a walkie-talkie.

“Roger that.” A voice said coming from the walkie-talkie. Outside Zach was running through the building on which he worked. He came out the other side just as three black cars rolled up in a semi-circle around him.

“Zach, come in with us and we can help you.” A voice said coming from inside one of the cars.

“Liar!” Zach screamed at them.

“Then you leave us with no choice.” The voice cut off as the windows to the cars slid down. Pokeballs flew out of the open windows, each opening and emitting a white light. Soon the white lights all took the form of Beedrill. The giant bug pokemon stared at Zach with menacing eyes. Their black and white “fur,” while poorly groomed looked beautiful in the morning sun.

“Pin Missile!” a voice shouted from inside the car. The two giant stingers on the Beedrill lit up blinding Zach. Each glowing stinger shot out hundreds, no thousands of small projectiles as bright as their stingers. Luckily for Zach the pin missiles were solid objects and fazed right through him.

“It’s a good thing these people never learn.” Zach thought as he ran straight through one of the cars. All the while the Beedrill kept shooting pin missiles, which blew up when they hit each other. Their masters were oblivious too, for they thought Zach was in the midst of the attack being hit by thousands of tiny projectiles. All of a sudden the Beedrill stopped shooting and calmed down. A cloud of dirt covered the Beedrill’s masters view.

Meanwhile, Zach was racing down the streets of the town. He went the shortest way possible, through walls, people, cars, pokemon, anything! It took him about two minutes to get through the town and to his house. As he reached his house he ran through the left wall of the family room. He panted from exhaustion, and quickly woke up his sleeping pokemon.

“Zach, what is it?” a Typhlosion asked as it stood up from it’s small bed.

“They’re…here.” Zach panted taking out a pokeball and shooting a red beam of light from it. “Hide…in here…Burn.” He took out another pokeball and sucked up his Amphraos. “You do the…same Wool.” He took out his last pokeball and sucked up his newly caught Seadra.

A week earlier he and Phil had taken a trip to Cinnabar Island to get some supplies for the construction of the building. While they were on the boat, Zach had decided to go fishing and caught an angry Seadra. Wool fought the angered pokemon and with its thunderbolt easily injured it. Zach threw a pokeball, which fell with a thump on the floor of the ship. It shook once, twice, three times and pinged. Zach had made his first successful capture. He later taught the Seadra Surf for reasons known only to him. Zach had named the Seadra Jerk, since it was one.

Zach ran into his room and picked up his backpack which was already packed with all of his stuff incase something like this ever happened. By now the men in the three cars had found out Zach had escaped.

“Noctowl! Find him and bring him to me!” One of the men said throwing a Pokeball and releasing a large owl pokemon. With great speed it flew off and soared over Vermillion.

Back in Zach’s house, Zach was putting on his escape uniform. It consisted of a long black coat that covered his whole body and a large black hat. Now that he was ready, he burst out the front door and down towards the docks. He didn’t suspect that a certain Noctowl would spot him and fly off to tell its master. The brown owl flew back to his master.

“Owl!” It screeched.

“Did you find him?” his master asked. The Noctowl nodded and flew off towards the docks and Zach. The three black cars raced after the bird pokemon. Zach had finally reached the docks just as the Noctowl and three black cars had.

“Zach, we know that’s you, so why don’t you just surrender and…” the man was cut off by Zach.

“Never!” He yelled, running towards a nearby boat.

“Go Vileplume!” One man shouted as he threw a pokeball out of the window. Out of the ball popped a giant purple creature with a giant flower on its head. “Go! Use Sleep Powder!” The strange pokemon let out a pinkish powder from a hole in its giant flower.

“Burn! Use Flamethrower!” Yelled Zach as he threw a ball and let out his Typhlosion. The blue and yellow dog’s neck lit up with a mane of flames as it shot a giant blast of fire from its mouth. The fire shot through the powder burning it and the pokemon that was dispersing it, to a crisp.

“Return!” Zach and the Vilplumes master said shooting a red beam of light from their pokeballs. Before the men in the black truck had a chance to catch him Zach ran off down the dock.

He ran as fast as he could towards a ship. The ship spat exhaust from its smoke stack and began to slowly move away from the dock. It was now or never for Zach. He jumped over the edge of the dock as a sailor yelled at him. He reached the boat and fazed through the wall. The men in the black cars pulled up as Zach disappeared into the ship.

The doors to one of the cars opened up and two men stepped out. They were wearing the same thing as the men who had first come to see Zach. A black robe covered their bodies and sunglasses covered their eyes. Their perfectly bald heads shined in the sunlight. The two men were about the same height, and could be easily mistaken for identical twins. They walked over to a sailor standing at the dock which the boat Zach was now aboard, had just been.

“Excuse me sir,” one of the men said. His voice was deep and scratchy. “Would you mind telling us where that ship is headed?” The man pointed to the large white ship in which was Zach.

“Oh, yes.” The sailor said quite confused as to whether he could trust the two men. “Its headed for Olivine city.” The Sailor had told the truth to the same men even though he didn’t really want to.

“Thank you, my good man.” The man said patting the Sailors broad shoulder with his gloved hand.

“Oh well your welcome.” The Sailor replied brushing off his blue and white stripped shirt. The sailor toward over the men who looked quite tall in their attire but really weren’t. The two men left the dock only to disappear in their black car once more.

“Call Jhoto headquarters and tell them what has gone on.” One of the men said to the other who had taken out a Pokenav. “Tell them the kid will be in Olivine.” The mans deep scratchy voice coming from the mans mouth made the other man shudder.

“Did you get the boats name?” The shuddering man asked as he punched in a phone number.

“I believe it was, the S.S. Pikachu.” The man with the deep scratchy voice announced.

“You mean, that was the great S.S. Pikachu. The biggest, best and most expensive cruise ship in the world?” The other man asked with his high squeaking voice while putting the pokenav up to his ear.

“Yes,” The other man sighed. “It will be some time until he reaches land. Be sure to tell Jhoto headquarters to look up the next arrival date of the S.S Pikachu.”

The man with the high voice did as the other man commanded telling Jhoto headquarters the ship, kid, and place of arrival they should be looking for.

Meanwhile on the ship, Zach had found a nice old woman who had offered him a place to stay. Even though he had rudely fazed through her wall she was grateful she had someone for company. And so Zach hung out on the long voyage of the S.S Pikachu. The old woman was the leader of Silph Co. before she had retired many years earlier. Zach explained how he could faze through walls. The woman told him of a young boy about his age that could do strange things also. The boy could be found in Hoenn. So Zach made sure that, after he had escaped Revolution and found the money, he would travel to Hoenn in search for this kid.
 
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“Where is the boy?” a man yelled.
“I…I don’t know what your talking about,” His mother cried.
“Don’t play games with me women! Where is your son?!” The man yelled again.
“I don’t have a son!” She yelled at the man. The boy was stunned, why would his mother say such things. “Wool,” he heard her whisper “go get Zach to safety.”
“Safety?” Zach thought “Is something bad happening?”
“What was that?!” The man yelled. “What did you whisper to that Flaffy?!”
“Nothing!” Zach’s mother cried. Zach’s door opened and a sliver of light flooded in. Wool stood in the door way, her pink wool illuminated by the hall light. She quickly closed the door and walked over to Zach’s bed.
“Flaffy!” She cried grabbing Zach’s hand. She pointed to a small bag and Zach’s dresser. Zach knew what she wanted him to do. He quickly grabbed the bag and opened up his dresser drawers. He stuffed clothes into his bag. Zach also put on some blue jeans and a white t-shirt.
“Is that your son’s room?” He heard the man yell.
“No!” His mother said.
“Well than I guess you won’t mind if I take a look in there will you?” the man said.
“No!” His mother screamed as she cried.
“Graaah!” He heard another man scream.
“Ahhh!” The man that had been yelling at his mother was screaming too. “Get him off of me!” Zach could hear his mother running down the hall now.
BANG! The sound of a gunshot could be heard down the hall.
“Roger!” Zach’s mom screamed. Then there was another gun shot and a blood curdling scream form his mother. A loud thump signified his mother had fallen to the ground. Zach’s door creaked open and his mother crawled in.
“Zach,” She panted, blood was dripping from her chest. She clutched her chest and hissed in pain. “Zach honey, you have to leave now. Take Wool and Burn with you to our cabin. I’ll see you soon.”
Zach grabbed a jacket and threw it on. He also grabbed his favorite toy, a stuffed Pichu, and slipped on his shoes. “Goodbye mommy,” He said crying.
“Wait Zach” His mother whispered, “take this.” She held out a small golden locket. She wore the locket around her neck every day. Zach walked over to her and took it from her hand. He gently hugged and kissed his mother goodbye. “Leave now honey.” His mother said.
Zach picked up Bark in one of his hands. The Cyndaquil, being a new born was small light and easy to carry. With his other hand he grabbed Wool’s. “Goodbye,” he whispered. Then, with Bark in his left hand and Wool in his right hand he ran. He ran right through the wall and outside. Now all he had to do was reach his cabin and wait for his mother and father to come.

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